Arshi SS: The Wrong Name - EPILOGUE - ** Awarded **

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iritz

@iritz

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

The contrast between Arnav's Love for Khushi and Shyam's Lust for her is so beautifully written... one can feel it !

What can I say Madhu... but I'm loving it... Nani and Arnie's convo and Anjali's manipulations... superbly portrayed !

Your stories are always a treat to the eyes... and to the mind !!!

Loving it !

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

:) what a come back, do do updates ek din mein!!!!!

i just hope that by the next chapter he tells nani aboiut khushi and they have a double wedding :)

Edited by nnhk - 12 years ago

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Yay two updates in one day! You are so awesome for doing that!👏.

I loved this chapter. I just hope that Arnav manages to sort everything and ask for Khushi's hand in marriage before Shyam gets in there.

Can't wait for the next part. Thank you for the PM

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

loved it... so arnav-khushi had a day out with family but ended on bad note... khushi was unhappy and she didn't spoke to arnav... poor arnav... while loved the arm twisting by anjali poor akash... thanks for pm dear..😊

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

lovely update

only thing i hated was shyamu, the creepwa

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Awesome story...

Loved it..

eagerly waiting for the next update...

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

ITS A REALLY NICE UPDATE!!!!!!

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

BUT Y DO I FEEL THAT ARNAV AND KHUSHI SHARE A PHYSICAL RELATIONSHIP!

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

This is getting so good!! Thank you for the quick update. I loved this chapter.

I can understand how hurt Khushi must've felt hearing about his "girlfriends". And she probably just felt like another one in line. Brilliant!

Shayam = gross

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey there, I didn't know that you have written stories on Arhi too. I used to love reading your DC episode analysis. This sure is interesting. & just when I though Shyam was a sweet and filial husband, *Baam* came the last line on the first chapter.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Ps: May I request for a pm for the updates please? Thanks in advance. :)

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

U started...me happy... They r already in a relationship...bt why was those questions in first chapter,End it? Could he???is he gng to end the things bw them???first i thought Shyam is a gud one hear,bt nah...don't separate them cz of Shyam...