#6 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 27-33 - Page 71

Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-

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woo hoo
my 1st first res on this thread...yipeee
mish - *tongue*haha...me 1st LOL How I love this fight

all thanx to asma...she's nt online...
Warna i would have never got this place...
Hehe
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Unres
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cuming to the update...

Ok like you said most of it was the same as of the os...
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So m not gonna say about that much... Yea... but still a long comment <33
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And about the start...
Smriti's and the gals part was amazingly written
i mean finally the tiny miny mystery is out LoL yes. Thanks !!

she connected the blank call with rey's changed behaviour

atleast ab kria toh usse misunderstand nai karegi Yup.

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Haha i so loved the angry vishaka...hehe poor rey...pehle kria ka then vishaka ka gussa...sehna pad raha hai... Poor guy xP
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And yesh weaklings performed...yaay...



chalo no more dragging rey taani chapter...it ended on a happy note...atleast for me
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But i really liked the end..
I mean finally rey realising that what he said was wrong...and even he's at fault...atleast sumwhere Yes... happy you liked that.

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Hope to see them together SOON...
yeh meri arzi hai baki teri marzi


(And m even excited for the virey part like you said you've planned 😆 ) Lol hope you will what I have =P
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omggg
monday ko ek aur update...woww
my week cant start with sumthing better than your update...yipeee
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And this time for a change...😆
m waiting for monday...hehe aww <3

jaldi kariyo...

-KJ

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Beautiful update :-)

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Oh my freaking Gosh! 😲 Yes, Nivi? 😳

This was simply amazing.. I loved the way you took nuances from your OS and also twisted it according to this story. I hope KriYansh get together soon. We've waited a LOT to see em together. Stunning update, really! :D Thank you so much dear! Very glad to know this. Yes, I stretched their wait too long. Not anymore =D

Continue soon, and hope the Monday remains a MONDAY! 😛 Hahaha! yes, this time on, it will xP

Eagerly waiting I am, mate! (:

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

eepsss i wanna dance..

yayiee awesum updte

luvd it Thank you so much!!

finally misunderstanding cleared...

though i hav read the OS but stil reading it agn with th eend was truely amazing That's good to hear xD

aahh Rey now realized how wrong he was , where did Kriya go? Wait for next update :P

hope he makes up to her soon There is no other option 😉

orelse m gonna punch him on his face 😛 no i won't

eagerly waiting for monday yaar...

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

hb i read it n i donno y i feel like cryin !

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

no words to describe...😭 and pm me...

Originally posted by: meghanakiran

thank god that the mu is cleared

loved the update

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Hey khushi...nice update.@@@..@@@..@@@...though i already had read the OS bt nevertheless it was gud fr the story..@@@one request...i knw its kr ff bt show improvement in swaron too...@@pretty plsss