Sorry for not commenting on the earlier updates Di..I caught up with them now only...Really sorry..So Iam here to give a big n detailed comment..Di, u r one of the best writer in the forum...You are my all time favorite writer..I love all your stories..I have read each one of them..n Living Without You is my most favorite story...Not only LWY but each n every story of urs..His Smiling Girl,Burning In Your Love and now Keeping Khushi...What can I say about your writing di?..You are an amazing writer..I love how you portray each and every character and the way you describe them...Arnav in your stories are very romantic,caring and loving...Khushi is your stories are innocent,loving and bubbly. You include other characters also..That is very good Di..Each n every character of IPKKND has a good role in ur stories...Mamiji,Mamaji,Buaji,Nani,Payal,Aakash,NK,Babuji,Amma..everybody..I love the way you describe Arshi relationship..the way it progress/develope..Your stories are awesome and unique di..Nobody can write like you..You have a beautiful style of writing..You add pictures and that helps us a lot...You are my inspiration to write(eventhough i don't write that beautifully)..You are very regular in ur updates, Di..I don't know what more to tell about your stories..They are the best..Please do write more...I am so greedy for your stories..
Now coming to Keeping Khushi...This is a wonderful story...Like your earlier ones...We saw how love can change two people...At first Arnav was an arrogant and angry man who didn't believe in anything or anyone...Khushi was a girl who had to suffer a lot at a very young age..They met...Arnav craved for her love and care that he saw in her eyes...Wow di It was beautiful..I loved how he kept following her...He needed her in his life...Eventhough he failed at first to express it in a goodway...He nderstood she was the missing piece in his life...Khushi on the other hand was totally confused..Thinking about the scars in her body,which were the after effect of an accident..But he accepted her and she accepted him...It is called PURE LOVE...His family is the best family in the world...Her baba and children are also great,Di...Loved how u show that their love increased day by day...ASR who cocooned himself in his office n garden is the good husband..and Khushi is the best wife...Then you showed us Payal-Aakash love n marriage...NK-Aarti Love n marriage...Anjali-Anand love n marriage...Everything is perfect ,di..I really became emotional reading the part where NK and Aakash thank their mothers...Arnav named their daughter Gowri..So nice...I don't know what to say more di...The story is amazing...and Iam sad that it is ending...But please do write more...Pleej we aree bhaiting (waiting) phor your workswaa...
Thank you di..For giving us such a loving story...Please write more...
Megha😊
Sorry ezhuthi vannappol kure lengthy aayi poyi...😃
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