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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav must be having a tough time behaving normal in front of them, it does require lot of courage & patience. Glad to see khushi is behaving like a Raizada and starting the game. Lets see how this game turns up in future. It was an amazing update... Very well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.

Eagerly looking forward to the future updates :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is such an intriguing ff and the passion between arnav and khushi is amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm all 3 playing there cards right
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 69

The story is gripping with every chapter.👏

KBV, Arnav and Khushi are pillars in each other's lives – they are like three musketeers "all for one, one for all". If one is weak other two jump in to support and show the way. Arnav and Khushi were always there for KBV to support him emotionally, KBV and Arnav were there for Khushi looking out for her protecting her even when she was angry with them and now KBV and Khushi are supporting Arnav as emotionally he is too weak to think straight.

To me Khushi is a complete woman 👍🏼- she knows her power, she knows her strengths, she has the maturity to understand and see through people, she can read people's mind and emotions and knows how to draw required actions. She knows how to school her emotions and put a mask when required. She is innocent in her own way, childish in her own way, yet mature, has a heart of gold, and cares for everybody. She is honest and straight forward yet she can play politics and manipulate her enemies and think straight even when going through emotional chaos. – This is something she has got from her father.

Although Arnav has all the above traits, he is not manipulative; he is good at outsmarting people and staying ahead in the game and good at making business deals and predicting others move in business. Another thing is he can focus only on one thing at a time!! All these days his focus was Khushi and he was devoted to her and her body but right now he wants to bring justice to his father's death so his focus shifted from Khushi. And he is impatient, he wasn't patient with Khushi when he married her and didn't wait for her to accept him body, mind, heart and soul. And now since he knows the truth about his father's death wants to bring it to closure!!!

I am not liking Sheetal and there is no doubt she is eyeing Arnav – why do I feel that she will be using as a pawn to blemish Arnav image and Arnav Khushi's relationship?.

You know I so wanted to see a jealous Khushi in the show, a mature Khushi who puts the other woman (Sheetal) in her place and stands by her husband. Your character sketch of Khushi is so brilliantly that I am hoping if Sheetal tries to mess with Arnav we get to see a Khushi who says "hum uski jaan lelenge, lekin usse pehle hum usske baal nochh lenge" and does it too!!

"Let the game begin" and "I am in"!!

PS: please put that teak table to good use 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi.
very very nice update.
waiting eagerly for d next update.
u r an awsome writer.
hmm from d story im guessing dat due to sheetal arnav vl b problem in future.
i jst want u to write one scene-but it doesnt seem to happen in near future updates.
i want to see kushi getting tensed while she is pregnat dat wer vl leave her or loss interest in her by seeing sheetal near to arnav.
i mean actually ladies vl hav fear dat dey vl get fat and hubby vl loss interest in dem.so i jst want to see dis side.
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved Khushi's character uptil now. Suraj seems to have realized alot with the word "cousin"

Edited by Senorita Sanaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the whole update...
Arnav and Khushi never let any issue come in between their relation...thats what i like most about this story...
and then Khushi...daughter of KBV...and wife of ASR...she is individually shrewd...i like her...so strong...so confident...she knows how to mend people for her own reason...its definitely going to be interesting to see how she'll fight against all the odds and be the strength of ASR...
and Suraj seems started to accept the fact that she is actually related to him in other way...she belongs to another man...
Edited by heavenspirit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is such a sweetie ... he makes wild love to his wifey and follows it up with tender loving care :)

I really enjoyed the intelligent Lavanya ... She proves that she is a worthy partner to Suraj. Suraj really reminds of Karan in Mahabharath and he cannot be a bad guy but he is definitely guilty of keeping bad company.

Good progress. The count down begins huh...
Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u soo much fr updating together this time... i hd been so anxious last 2 times :)

i m soo eager to knw whts the plan... or rather game.. as they called it in last chapter :)

suraj seems to hv moved on frm his obssession with khushi... atleast as a lover...

n avni is a darling ;)

waiting fr next :) :)

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