Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
really too good
i enjoy it a lot
thx for pm me
ayaazukideewani thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just read this ff
and wow really good love it a lot wanna read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW REALLY NICE AND HILARIOUS AT THE START.

BUAJIS BEATING HER CHEST WAS FUNNY.

SO ARNAV WILL TAKE HER TO DELHI YIPPEEE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really good :) it's amazing pm me and update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol love it very interesting so sister played her brother and the brother played the same game with khushi interesting love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

The update was too good! Hilarious actually! My favorite line was "She beat her ample bosom, to show where kismat lived!" . I couldn't stop laughing after reading that.🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
This update was 🤣 And dialogue of where kismat lived was the height of it! Anjali trying to outsmart Arnav that can't be possible so Arnav is planning some designs with/on khushi gosh whatever. Totally loved the update it was brilliant thxs for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh the clever ASR is back!
damn,,anjali plan didnt work
but does asr realise that he likes her
khushi is so naive=]
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anjali is really manipulative, wow she really conned Kokila

And Arnav he wants Khushi but in his own way

But Anjali is not going to wait she is pushing Arnav

Cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
and we are back
lets see what crazy crazy adventures we shall see today
really khushi we are still in LG land
well can ya blame the girl
wow it seems as if she is still not over what happened last night
oops not good at all with buaji knowing about their party
and what else happened in the party
wait how did she find out
who ratted them out unki toh khair nahin
well it had to be that koki who else would it be right
and no their kimat aint phooti but good
hey they have bagged the raizada brothers for whom they both feel something for
well one of them is in love
while the other has just started on their journey towards loves
well this particular couple shall take bit longer what with them fighting constantly
but then thats besides the point right
that was a close one girls
we got caught out due to payal saying akash name man
ahhh getting ready for shagun for payal for huh for our akash bitwa
well good one anji but of course he had to ruin that for ya
dude do not say things like that to scare your family
and hello yeh phansi ka fanda aap ke hi gale mein bandhe ga beta
so she did use that thing against him only well he did ask for it
but then he shall not take it that easily right
lets see what he tells khushi or more like tells her to do
good one m,ate
but hope to god it dont backfire on you in the end
sharam nahin aati unhe heart attack dene ke kiye
but then he is ASR yeh toh inka kaam hai
well at least he admitted to himself that he wont let her go away good about time
of course not mate we all can see what designs you have on her
but the question remains how far are those designs gonna go
well guess we shall wait and see
wow things are getting complicated and not so complicated
and the fun has just begun right
well let the games begin shall we people

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