Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Congratulations on the new thread ...

Thanks Pria ... really enjoyed the chapter ...

loved all the reactions to the Payal and Aakash kiss ...

let's see what the party brings on ...

waiting for the next ...

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Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Res!

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Payal is so different in this story!

Chalo, Payash's story is atleast moving forward here!

Loved the update!

Edited by Nexus_13 - 12 years ago

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Iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Congrats for new thread...

waiting for update

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congrats on the new thread! Can't wait to read the next part!

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Just read ch. 13 and it was awesome! I loved all the dialouges and Arnav, Khushi, and Anjali's reaction to Akash and Payal kissing lol. Yay Anjali will help Payal and Akash out. Now she just has to get Arnav to admit that he is in love with Khushi. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Love the Anjali in this story!

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saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

It was just s0 funny!! L0ved the *c0ugh*family 0riented *c0ugh* syn0nyms 0f "kiss". I h0pe the 9 yr 0lds are really reading this under the dining table, just like I used t0 read *c0ugh*equally family 0riented*c0ugh* n0vels when I was 9. R0FL. S0 we are getting s0me m0re 0f "ji M0M" in upc0ming update. And arguing ab0ut y0ur 0wn kiss in the middle 0f separating 0ther's kiss?? 0nly they can d0 it and make y0u believe 0n it t00. As f0r the next update, all I wanna say is G0 Anjali y0u R0CK!!!

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Congratulations on the new thread! It's such a treat to read all these amazing writers together in one story! I loved the chapter. Payal and Akash kissing in the open, Khushi's reaction, Arnav's talk about "canoodling" and Anjali's comment about swapping spit lol. Can't wait for the next installment