SwaRon OS:The Proposal - Page 3

Originally posted by: Nehal92

A very good OS. I could guess from the beginning that It was planned by Swayam but i still enjoyed reading it... 😉 Keep writing on Swaron.

Originally posted by: Sed_Dreamer

thank u so much from both sahana n me😊

arre let me edit my comment sweeties😳

Awesome os!!! Nice concept!! Very well written!!! In shrt.i loved.it!!!

hey i love d os

u beutifully portray each n every emotions of sharon
her love for him, her jealousy whn ppls gossiping abt kriyam in realationship, her dilemma what wil happen whn swayam wil propose her, when she hurt after knowing kriyam which was prank, i love d u penned down sharons point of view

swayam too much naughty yar, how much he tease her n suspense abt party
d way he propose her was cute n simple

rey bhi in sab mein shamil tha
wow love d os

Originally posted by: SwaRonpankhuri

hav res so dat i could post wid pc..bt my network sucks..
Chuck it.
As i was 1st to go through dis os i feel dis is 1 of d finest work dat i hav gone through.. U two are way awusume person n dis work is one of d best outcome.. I love u guys..
And no need to thanks me for d banner..it could hav been far bettr if u would hav askd anny di.. Ziddi ldkiyaan :p

pankhu darling bhao mat khao
u are getting better in ur work .. 😳 dekhna next one month mein aur v achcha bana payegi edits.

love u 😃

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Sweeties...

Lovely OS...beautiful 1st attempt...i loved the whole idea of proposal...& loved the fact that it was from sharon's point of view...girl ..she is so much love...loved her excitement,jealousy,nervousness...lovelyyy...loved the twist...it was heart breaking..though i guessed it ...but lovely dimension to love..pain...i loved her reaction to his surprise...the ue of PEHLA NASHA was just sooo perfect...

AsI reached the exit , suddenly PEHELA NASHA began playing!! My heart skipped a beat and began throbbing like a mad man on the run..I just couldn't control my tears as I sobbed and turned around I saw him standing right in front of me,so close that not even a breath of air could intervene.. I was too numb to even react and I just broke down .Swayam began laughing and on he went humming PehlaNasha.. Everyone hooted and cheered!! Relieved I began hitting him relentlessly, randomly "I hate you.. I hate you so much'""

His lines were beautiful...perfect conclusion...aha..keep writing girls...u both r amazing...

Welcome to IF ..a beautiful way to make ur entry👏👏👏...lovely banner😳

PS-Thanx anindita for pm ...

Luv'
Deep

yo welcome deep😳

Wow...amazing story!!
Luvd it!!
Beautifully penned!!😊