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hiralhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

simply superb...
love it.. thanks for pm...

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

hey do continue soon...seems really interesting.

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

loved it!

that was just awesome!
so khushi is avoiding arnav and she thinks arnav and natasha are dating!

love comforting and protective side of arnav to khushi!

can't wait foe the next update!

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cloverleaf

@cloverleaf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Now that I am trying to dabble a bit in writing, I can totally see the enormous effort that must have gone into writing this chapter. My chapters barely cross 1000 words. Terrific job. I also love the exquisite attention to detail in your writing. You describe the events as if it is happening right in front of our eyes.

Khushi seems utterly confused. Her heart says one thing and then her mind says another. I can somewhat relate to her insecurities.

Arnav is trying his best. But he has never been a man of words. He cannot spell it out for Khushi. But he needs to reflect on the situation and I am confident that he will figure out the error of his ways.

Here's cheering to many more of such delightful chapters.

Edited by cloverleaf - 12 years ago

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

I understand where Khushi is coming from... The way Arnav rejected the lunch plan when Khushi asked him and went with Natasha instead, gave Khushi the impression that he is not interested in her... N now even though she has some feelings for him, she wants to stay away from him to avoid a heart break. She has enough on her plate already.

Arnav is not really the kind who expresses their feelings and emotions freely... He knows Khushi is effected by him but he needs to take the first step if he wants things to progress...

A protective, possessive and jealous Arnav is always fun:)

Amazing update

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

the night with endless possibilities jst began...oooh... i was hoping on for some interaction between them... i so badly want u to put them together somewhere and make them talk...
well, as always d update made me wanna get more of it, awesome!!!!
and update the next part sooon plzz...plzz...plzzz

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Aww...Khushi really is a naive fool...isn't she? I wish this Mumbai trip helps her to get a more social outlook!

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

superb update! loved the way arnav held her hand during the landing and showed no sign of letting go, it was really nice seeing him comforting her!

poor khushi she is giving herself a heartache for nothing when she is the only one that matters to arnav and no one else!

i was sure arnav would decipher that khushi was purposely avoiding him and he would for sure tag along to the nightclub just to protect her! n the possessive and jealous arnav is always a welcome treat

eagerly waiting for the next part

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Peonia

@Peonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Im really looking forward for ur next update already😛 but when i heard club and approprite dress i thgtht may b for sec khushi in western out fit but any ways

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IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Loved this update as we got to see Arnav's protective side. Looking forward to their club visit. You are really good at describing thoughts and emotions, makes it so much easier for readers to connect with your characters:)