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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa.e

Awesome update yaar!!

I loved it!!
This part is really worth and a good treat!! praying that the lady who was in his dad's life was not garima like it was there in the serial cause it would be disgusting!!
Also i loved the way he opened up and tole the truth to her that how he felt about her!! i know that he is telling all these due to the effect of Bhanng but still it would help him get some peace!! also i really hope that he remember what all he spoke with her!!
And also i pray that noone should see them like that. i meant hugging and sitting!! cause on one will understand now!! Especially shyam should not see them!! that's all i want!!
also can you please tell me when would the truth about shyam comes out in light?? that would be a brilliant one!!
I loved the way garima thought about kushi!!

On the whole a very goo update!!
Please continue soon!!



Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, I really look forward to reading them!
Don't worry, I will not make Garima the other woman...in fact, I'm not going to dig too much into the past, but just wanted Arnav to open up a little bit to Khushi, to show that he trusts her. And don't worry, the conversation will NOT be forgotten!

Shyam's schemes will unravel, just be patient with me!

I will try to post next update tomorrow, but if I am not able to, it will be after the 15th😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _disha_

Really nice twist ,,, instead of a tipsy Khushi we have a tipsy Arnav here ,,,, who opened up his soul to Khushi !!





I thought I would change it up with a tipsy Arnav and a sober Khushi!

And cool GIF...thanks for sharing...brings back great memories!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deeswarna

atleast arnav is laying his heart out to khushi even if its under the effect of bhaang and maybe wont remember anything of it! now khushi can start her work in healing arnav and make him enjoy all the festivals once again!


for sure this holi is going to defintiely change things for them and im hoping its for the best!

loved the update even more because it was creepwaless! it was so nice not having that sankewa in the picture! awesome update



Thanks for your wonderful comments!!

Yes, Arnav is finally opening up.

I decided to leave the creepwa out of this update, he gives me tension!!! Unfortunately, he will be returning soon😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: A_BA



Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, I really look forward to reading them!
Don't worry, I will not make Garima the other woman...in fact, I'm not going to dig too much into the past, but just wanted Arnav to open up a little bit to Khushi, to show that he trusts her. And don't worry, the conversation will NOT be forgotten!

Shyam's schemes will unravel, just be patient with me!

I will try to post next update tomorrow, but if I am not able to, it will be after the 15th😭
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Sure take your own sweet time i will wait!! patiently i think!!
But please do update!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

aww a slightly drugged arnav dancing infront of a sober khushi thts definitely new.
sweet update



Yes, I thought I would change it up a little bit...hope you liked it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was a superb and brilliant update, also quite emotional but however written beautifully. Wow loved the fact you made Arnav drink bhang as he was jealous of NK dancing with Khushi and more because you made Arnav dance that was amazing. The conversation between Arnav and Khushi was quite emotional, as Arnav opened up to Khushi and shared his past as well as the reason why he doesn't like Holi. It was so sweet of Khushi supporting Arnav by giving him a hug and Arnav confessed to Khushi the importance of having her in his life that was beautiful. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx



Thanks so much for your great comments. As always, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you liked the update and hope you will continue to read and let me know what you think!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthiif.1710

Nice chapter...
Arnav is sharing his pain with Khushi...and he also told the importance of her presence in his life...



Thanks!!

Arnav is finally opening up a little bit! He realizes somewhat that he trusts Khushi and he can open up to her!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello! You got a new reader onboard! This SS was recommended by NidSubh007 some time ago and I finally got around to reading it & what can I say, I really like this story! You know I always wondered how the serial would have progressed if Arnav didn't see Khushi and Shyam on the terrace on that dreaded night, I wonder if he would have confessed his Dil ki baat?

I love the fact that you are exploring that concept on this SS, I really liked how Arnav shared his past with Khushi in the last chapter.. Oh & I loved the chapter where he bought all of Khushi's fav food, that chapter made me grin happily.. :D I truly hope Arnav comes to know about sicko shyam soon, he is giving me the creepies, no more MU please..:( You write well and you are doing a great job! I can't wait to see how you develop the story.. Btw may I request for a pm for the updates please? Thanks in advance! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazin...plz plz plz pm me weneva u updt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just come cross this story..
read all part just for once...
love d concept..👍🏼
its totally different..
wow.. arnav dance...
superb...👏
i think arnav should see shyam's real face..
just hate shyam...😡
just love their bonding..😳
pls pm me whenever u update..😊

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