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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooh very nice :)

Ps just realized that my above comment is very juvenile ;)

You have written very well, casting a complete different light into the lives of our beloved characters. Looking forward to reading more from you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
Hope you are doing well ... 😊
As for this SS, it is well-written, enjoyable, very interesting indeed 😉😆 ... and a whole lot more but at this moment my head is filled with Arnav in a uniform ... 😳😳
OMG! Feeling kinda flustered here ... Ooopsies! Well what can I say ... I mean a man in uniform, such a freakin' turn on in most cases ... BUT with Arnav's charm, incredibly sexy features and smoldering eyes ... its just woahhh! 😆
I'm glad Khushi isn't perceived to being this young lady who is docile, naive. She is well aware that Arnav has been watching her for the past 10 or so minutes ... bless her ... she is trying real hard to not look him in the eyes ...
As for Lavanya and Khushi's friendship, I'm really liking it! They share an easy going, lovable cameradie. Swwweeettt 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have just joined your fan club. Wonderfully written!! Fun, cute & sexy.

Sorry that's about all rational thought I am capable of right now.

Arnav = uniform = me dead

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome :D When will be the next part up? Waiting for it :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked ur Shyam story.. Ended well and I am loving this continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The la and k conversation was humourous..i can relate to the show conversation very well coz my friend too gets annoyed the same way when she comes to of this 'problem' :D
and staring session 😆 arnav s presence was described in a quite interesting way,..hell! It was sexy the way you told! I m enjoying it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome stuff! Description, humour, spot on! It's personable and witty, sharp and plain smooth dude! Excited with this one! Bring it awwn! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resd.
Will be edited sometime later today.
Will let you know
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That was some start!
You have a way with words. I am telling you.
The title itself shows that the writer is going to unleash her talent...
Your Arnav is oh-so-sexy... ☺️
Khushi sounds oh-so-desirable... 😳
And the two of them together...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now that is one interesting start! 😆

Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good job! Waiting for the sparks that will undoubtably start to fly! :)

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