An ArHi SS: Secrets #2 *COMPLETED*

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1101

Hey Juhi,
Read this in one go yesterday... no idea how i missed this one completely .. 😕
anyways... i loved this one too... but ur current story is top-notch 😃

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vkishore

@vkishore

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1102

Just finished Secrets...read it all in one go! I have to admit, I think I am addicted to your writing! Your stories are simply intriguing, and leaves the reader wanting more! Thanks for sharing your imagination with us! I was devastated when the show end, but now I think I am more in love with these fan fictions because you have giving our two favourite characters so many more layers! Brilliant work! Great ideas! Time well spent on reading! Thanks a lot !!!

Vashti

👍🏼

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pal_24

@pal_24

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1103

I'm generally a silent reader but this is one of the few arhi stories that i just had to comment on...I came across it recently and it absolutely blew my mind away!!!! was so good read all the chapters in one go...the depth of emotions, the passion, the love, hate and the entire complex set of emotions that the two of them portrayed was so moving and it justified their characters so much... I coud actually feel each and every emotion they were going through as i read the chapters...one of the best stories I've read...so powerful ,so intense and captivating in its suspense...
Totally loved it !!!!:)

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1104

SECRETS!!! shhh... shall i tell u what i feel whenever i complete ur stories...???? well, i feel, and think simultaneously that how can u write so beautifully that every time i feel that i am in love with ur concept and ARSHI, of course!!! 😲
kudoos to u Expell!!!!!... and i really loved Arnav's character here, he is all that he is but this is the first story where i have met with an forgiving and unconditionally in love with Arnav!!! that was something that really caught me!!! We all know about our khushi's unconditional love and the forgiving person that she is but here we meet her as a lil' different at first!!! another thing that was really surprising was the Obsessed payal... aakash-payal and garima-shashi are just assigned cameo roles that too in such great extent that they determine the entire story is also a reading for me in ARSHI land... 😆

well all in all, very nice and again a superb story!!!⭐️

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1105

Missed your writing soo thought of going back to my most favourite index on IF "Expell's Spell" and read one of the best SS ever. All over again and I felt like I am reding it for the first and again read it in one go. I loved it sooo much..!!

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1106

This SS was really exciting and was very awesome 👏

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myriads

@myriads

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1107

Loved the story especially the different context in which Khushi is potrayed.

Thanks a lot

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1108

wow, what a beautiful story⭐️

I found ur ff and read it in 1 go

ur an awesome writer dear⭐️

every single chapter was great n interesting👍🏼

I felt so bad for arnav at the beginning n really mad at khushi 😡.

and that's a first coz in every other ff I've read its always khushi we are sympathising with...

I loved how u described their passion n magnetic pull. it was so exhilarating☺️

again, wonderful ff. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it😃

take care

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1109

Wonderful story... Just read all the parts in a go... Awesome. SS... Beautifully written...loved itEnjoyed reading...

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1110

Oh I didnt know I would catch up on this so soon...I couldnt wait.

Secrets, secrets, everyone has one! And you gave a new twist to the lovely secrets like Arnav's secret here - not be able to live without him. Haha! That was so cute!

Coming back to the journey - they been through much, saw the extreme betrayal in each other, pretended to hate, avoided each other, ignored their own feelings but it was just meant to be, wasnt it. Despite of everything they found the solace in each other. Not only love and passion, but respect, peace, family!

Khushi Gupta was a deserving opponent to Arnav Singh Raizada the tycoon, because she did manage to scare and rattle him all the way, but the Khushi and Arnav we have at the end, are equals, for each other, in every way. And Arnav's decision to make her an equal was a well thought of plan.

Great story Juhi, you do have a knack to write beautiful stories, and I am sure you put in a lot of effort in conceptualizing a story before hand, never rush through it, has brilliant pace but not too slow, you show emotions beautifully, always sensitive and sensible.

Once again, I am glad I started reading this one.

Pankti