An ArHi SS: Secrets #2 *COMPLETED*

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ipkknd786

@ipkknd786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1091

Just one word...wow...double wow...I read your story in one shot...you are an amazing writer...I am just at loss of words...to even dissect or analyze your story...you are just way tooo good!! Going back to read your other stories...

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snehal.sharma

@snehal.sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1092

Just finished reading this story

And wow !!! It was amazing

Just loved it

It is wonderful

This story is absolutely fantastic

U are an awesome writer

Enjoyed reading it😊

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1093

I read love lies and two weddings - loved it- the whole concept of nani, di and Shyam together trying to play arnav ! Then the khushi and arnav in it were great - arnav showed remorse but in other stories they just changed his character outright. While you showed his remorse you didn't change his arrogant confident send which we all fell in love with! Khushi - my god it was great to see she didn't shirk away from arnav - always hated it when she did that in ipkknd. I thought it was great and you possibly couldn't do better ! But wrong . Loved Scandalous and Secrets - awesome - what I love is you have captured different arnav and khushi in all the stories but managed to maintain the essence of them from ipkknd . You are too good. Also the most lovely fact about all this is that you complete your stories! I am fed up if writers who start , write great chapters and leave or hanging for months on end.

I am looking forward to reading your new ss. Love your work . Keep it up.

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Nisha

@urs_kkgsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1094

I read it one goo...

I just love your work..

please never stop Writing !!

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1095

aweee just read it...wonderfulll...❤️

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1096

Wow.. loved the story.. 👏

It's a totally different genre.. I would have kept guessing if I had read it while you were writing..
Reading a completed work has its own advantage 😉

I have become fan of your work.. finished 3 of them in a week.. At this rate I will finish everything you have written so far pretty soon and then I am going to bug you to write more.. 😊

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gauranitai

@gauranitai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1097

Beautiful SS... took my breath away!

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ocean28

@ocean28

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1098

Wow what a ride, did not want to end the ride. Lots of surprises especially khushi exacting revenge well done you are a superb story teller absolutely no doubt about it. This is as good as sin but in a different way. You are such a pro that I do not think that not giving comments after every chapter will have any adverse affect on your work. I say this because I want to read your stories that are completed I do not have the patience to wait and more over I do not want to dilute the intensity of your fiction. One go I want to complete your work and thoroughly enjoy the process.

Thank you for taking us through such an exciting ride and looking forward to lots and lots more.

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1099

Had an awesome time reading this short story.You're a brilliant writer with highly creative scenes, no wonder you have sooo many readers following you.

Coming to this story, as entertaining as it was, I was surprised that your story kept up with it's title.You don't see that in many stories, and the concept was plausible.When I began reading it, it seemed like another run of the mill story with the rich tycoon falling in love with the small town girl..but then I was shocked at the boardroom scene.Didnt think Khushi would have it in her to be sooo cold and calculating.She was rich, too! All along she was playing Arnav and Arnav trying to prove his innocence spoke volumes about how much he cared about her opinion... and then HIS own cruelty shines as he forces Khushi to stay in their marriage. Alas, he figures out that she had loved him all along with the cute idea of her saving roses in her book..Their journey towards mutual trust and love was admirable and I specially loved it where he gifted her those red roses and she in turn gives him a blue on..finally they had their happily ever after. 'Secret's' was entertaining and kept me interested throughout. Wish it was longer! Thankks for putting the effort into writing this story though:)