SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Firstly thanks for the real long update as it was beautiful. Now coming to the update really loved Sharon's character and the way to penned different emotions she was going through 'anger, hurt, hope, loneliness, clarity'. Also loved the developing bond between Sharon and Swayam from Sharon's side. The choice of song for duet was really nice.

Waiting for the next update to find what was Swayam's gift and how will they unite...😊

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

OMFG you wrote this during your exams

You shouldn't have I mean even though I wanted an update exams are more important I would wait and I'm sure others would as well

Coming to the update :) it was amazing

I loved the confidence Sharon had when she saw Raj and Rohan and the way Swayam and Simmi was there for her

And the understanding between SwaRon

I loved how you expressed the feelings through the song

I want to know what the gift is :P

I hope Sharon doesn't forget anyone when she goes to London

I hope SwaRon realise their feelings for each other soon

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

2 chappy ...wowww
vry gud TM

coming to d update
its superb as usual
sharon ne tapad maara 🥳
sharon ke dad ko sharon ki condition samjni chahiye yr

loved it

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

super !!

best X mas gift!!
double dhamaka!!

gr8 work dear!!

thanks for the pm.

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

awesome updt dear..thnx for d PM

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

double updates..thank u... 😃

both d parts were amazing..just loved it.. 😃

swaron dance was nicely described... 😳

nice selection of song... 😊

and sharon finally left for london... 😔

eagerly waiting to knw..what der in box which swayam has gifted her...

update soon.. 😊

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

res

unres

amazingg ff

as a writer you never fail to surprise me

i m feeling so ecstatic after readin tis ff

it was a complete blend of everything

sharon's pain her trauma regarding shivam

the subject which you choose showing

the up's n down of the character sharon

was beautifully penned n

swayam's character was very maturely penned

sharon will be leaving for lundon 😲

n her father did not support her

even after hearing her past was very disappointing

even shivam's frn is like him cruel 😡 was blood boiling

but overall i was bewitched to the story

it was a well formed pleasing read 👏

do update soon

looking forward to ur updates

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Guys! Unres ur comment plz.
If possible I'll give up the teaser...in.a day or two!

Hit like n comment the previous chaps if u wish to get the next chap/teaser asap.
Or this note! 😊

PS- Not always I'll be reminding u, it really disappoints.
Hope I get encouraging response from now!

Luv,
Sakshi

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

unres on 70

nd u did a splendid job..as a writter...

update soon

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#450

Ok i read all the chapters in1 go...
i luvd this ff...
tht kamina shivam...sharon ko kitna rulaya h us kamine ne...but m happy vo aab is ff me nai h...
n thn khushi to died...but i luvd khushi's character...swayam's true frnd...
i luvd tht chapter in which sharon was drunk...she ws dam cute...n thn tht hug...
nw after reading this part m sure khutch tho ho jayga taki sharon ruk jaye...really hope sharon london na jaye...