SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry!!!
i m soo late!!
but i read both your updates!!!
and they were greeat!!!
i just wish khushi could be there becuz she was the one that knew the whole truth!!!
but atleast her last wish came true!!
sharon is free fom that freak!!!
i seriously hate that creep!!!
and poor swayam is going through soo much!!!
he didn't even have time to mourn his wife/best friends death!!!
no one should have to go through so much pain!!!
not swayam or sharon or anyone in this case!!!
im glad that sharon is now finally free!!
but im curious about the end...
ii wonder what is gonna happen...
i really want to know!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
4th Post is the Chap 11 !!

ABHI PATA CHALA KI SONG FULL NAHI AAYA😭 , SO PLZ GUYS IF U CAN PLAY SONG IN UR SYSTEM IT WILL BE GUD !😊

Sorry fr the inconvenience !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part.. loved it.. khushi n swayam met with a accident n coz of which khushi s having only few day left..khushi took promise from, swayam to save sharon from that creep... love khushi's character.. doesnt want to b in hospital but stay at home n enjoy her last few days bearing d pain n also thinking abt sharon.. loved d way u showed d twist n turns of d ff.. simmi s coming to back to india to help swayam in saving sharon out of d mess.. poor sharon s al pale n s afraid of that creep.. so hate him for doing this to sharon... hope swayam n simmi save sharon soon n kick that creep out.. waiting for next chap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the 10th chapter 😊
great job👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

STOP THE MUSIC IMMEDIATELY
(On the music WHEN it will be stated in middle of the CHAPTER !)

Thank you so muich for the Comments and aalll'.
Vaise here's The next Update'
Sorry for the Spell n Grammatical mistake'


Recap- Simmi tells Sharon about the second Marriage, Nilesh gets al the Evidence against Shivam, Police arrests Shivam, SwaRon Hug, Shivam to be Hanged Till Death'


Everyone stood up from their seats and Simmi instantly came and hugged Sharon..Sharon also hugged her'.Then everyone came outside..and had a smile playing on their faces'
The gang was busy discussing the case and Nilesh went to do some pending work , Simmi was standing beside Sharon..
Simmi- You are free now Sharon..you are free from the Cage'!!
Sharon- Yeahh..( She faked smile )

Swayam was happy, he thanked God for saving Sharon.. but something was going on in his mind'.
He excused himself and went somewhere alone'

Here Sharon was facing turmoil, she, without informing anyone walked away from others'somewhere alone'

After few minutes Simmi realized that Sharon was absent..She called her'but in vain..
Simmi informed the gang'just then Simmi received a Msg'
It read- Hey Simmi..don't worry about me'am safe and will soon reach home..
don't search me'I'll infrom you when I'll be back'
Sharon'

Simmi sighed ! She told the Gang about this'.
Vicky- Thank God..acha now we all should leave'.okay ?
Rey- Yeah ! Let's leave..
Simmi- Okay..guyss you all go..I'll be with Nilesh'

Simmi called Swayam'.
Swayam- Hello'
Simmi- Hey dude..kahan gaayab ho gaye ?
Swayam(dull voice)- Simmi'.mein thodi der se baat karta hoon'
Simmi- Vo..Sw'
(Before she could speak'he disconnected the call)
Simmi just kept her phone inside and went to Nilesh'.

***
It was around 4pm'.
Sharon was walking on the streets'she went to the nearest Beach'The place where she comes to sit and relax..whenever she is happy she comes here'whenever she is sad she approaches here'
She was roaming there'.feeling the weather..Some Hot some Cold'
She just went near the water and sat'.

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Here'.Swayam'alone his Room'.Private one'which was only for Swayam'.and then when Khushi came it was known to her'.but she also din't went inside when Swayam was there'no one could enter , it was a big room'spacious'a side table'.and on it some photos ,a cot', a cupboard which was a secret one.., With some privates kept'.

He picked up a Photo frame'and a tear rolled down his eyes'


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!! ON THE SONG !!

[Now..both, Swayam n Sharon's feelings will be expressed by the song 'Kabira' of "Yeh Jwaani hai Deewaani" in background']
The part of lyrics of the song..will be written first then below.the description of that part of song..!

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Kaisi Teri KhudGarzi'.
Na Dhoop Chune Na Chhaon'

Sharon splashed some water of the beach', Swayam sighed looking at the pic'.
She looked at the Sky'.and closed her eyes'. , He rubbed his hands over the pic'


Kaisi teri Khudgarzi'.
Kaise Thor Tike Na Paaon'

She hung her face down.., Swayam spoke- Why God, Why !!!
She rubbed her hands from her chin up to the hairs'in frustration'., He banged his hand on the table'.


Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi'
Na Dhoop Chune Na Chaaon..

Tears started falling from her eyes.., Swayam- Why Khushi'.Why..you left me'.!!
She got up', Swayam- Hamari'Friendship'.itne jaldi'.khatm'.

Kaise Teri Khudgarzi..
Ke Thro Tike NA Paon...


Ban Liya Apna Paigambar'
Tar Liya Tu Saat Samandar'

She wiped her tears'.,, Swayam'kept the photo aside'
She started walking in the water..towards the deep.., Swayam wiped his tears..and started to Dance'


Phir Bhi Sukha Man Ke Andar'
Kyun Reh Gaya'

She was going more away'all dull', Swayam moved flawlessly'.

Re Kabira'Maan Ja'
Re Faqueera'Maan Ja'
Aaja Tujhko Pukare..Teri Parchhaiyaan..

Sharon'lost somewhere', Swayam looked at the pic once more..and smiled'
Someone pulled Sharon out the water', Swayam- I'll smile'always'
Sharon came out of trance ' Chhodo mujhe'.leave me.. left the girl who was holding her hand , Swayam'looked up as if praying to the God'- Give Me strength !!


Re Kabiraa Maan Ja'
Re Faqueera Maan Ja'

Tu Hai Nirmohi..Kaisa Harjaeyaa'
Swayam- I wishhh'.I could'..and hung his face down , Sharon ran to home'(Shivam's)'
Swayam made an angry face..He held his hairs tightly'and sat on the cot.., She sat on the Bed..and clutched the Bed Sheet'and let her tears fall'.


Tut Chaarpahi Vahi'.Thandi Purwahi'
Rastaa Dekhe'

Swayam remembered Khushi's Word'."To Smile" , "Save Sharon"'., Sharon searched something in her cupboard'..and found'

Doodhon Ki Malaai Vahi'Mitti Ki Suraahi'.
Rastaa Dekhe'.

Swayam relaxed some'He went out..took glass of water and drank'., Sharon- Mom'I Lost Everything'.I Got Everything'.

Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi'
Lab Namak Rame Na Misri'

Swayam and Sharon- Kya Karun'Khushi Manaun'Ya Dhukh'.koi to batao'.
and closed their eyes tightly'.


Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi'.
Tujhe Preet Puraani Bisri'.

Swayam composed himself'went to Room n locked it'., Sharon kept The Photo aside'and from cupboard took out her dresses n her belongings'.

Mast Maula Mast Kalandar'
Tu Hawa Ka Ek Bawander'

Swayam took her photo and hugged it'., She kept all the sutff into a big Bag/Suitcase'

Bujh Ke Yun Andar Hi Andar'
Kyun Reh Gaya'.

Swayam..smiled at it..and mouthed.."Promise" , Sharon stood up and went out the door'with The Bag'

Re Kabira..Maan Ja'
Re Faqueera'Maan Ja'.
Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaiyaan'

Swayam- I Promise..You..I'll Never Cry'No Tears'., Sharon locked The House'and walked'
She looked at the Door once'

Re Kabiraa Maan Ja'.
Re Faqueera Maan Ja'
Tu Hai Kaisa Nirmohi..Kaisa Harjaeyaa'

Swayam- New Start'New Life'New Promise..To Be With Sharon..and Take Care Of Her..ALWAYS'
Sharon walked away with tears..She let out some tear drops of Memories..Sad ones'and so that they leave her eyes forever'.


***
Simmi and Nilesh came home'Simmi had decided to stay in India only..for Sharon'
Simmi called Sharon but still she didn't attended the call'
Simmi- Oh'god..it's so late now' Yeh Sharon kahan hai !


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Swayam came out of the room..locked it'and called someone'
Swayam- Hey Simmi'
Simmi- Haan Swayam..kahan ho tum ??
Swayam- Ghar pe hun..kyon , kya hua ??
Simmi- Dude'Sharon call nahi pick kar rahi hai'and pata nahi kha chali gayi hai ?
Swayam- What..! Ghar to nahi gayi'??
Simmi- Nahi..Nilesh dekh ke aaya but nahi hai vo wahan'
Swayam- Kya tumne uska khud ka ghar check kiya..I mean'Pehle kahan rehti thi vo ?
Simmi- Koi fayda nahi hohga'vo ghar mein ab koi nahi rehta except one Servant'
Swayam- Fir bhi'address do'
Simmi- **** thik ??
Swayam- Umm Thanks..and'you just relax..mein dekhta hun use'and jaise hi kuch pata chalega I'll tell you'

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Swayam first went to Shivam's house..but it was locked'.
Swayam- Sharon left from here..and god knows kahan hogi !

Saying this he went to Lake side..Beach..Restaurant'but all in vain'.
At last..He went to RaiPrakash Mansion.!

He knocked..
The Servant opened'
Swayam- Ji..Sharon..
Servant- Ji Sir..vo thodi der pehle hi yahan aayi hai'
Swayam- Kya mein unse mil sakta hun'?
Servant- Ji aap kon ???
Swayam- Mein Swayam hoon'unka dost'.
Servant- Ji..aaiye.mein apko unke kamre tak le jaata hun'

The Servant showed him Sharon's Room'
It was unlocked'.He just slowly..opened the door'but didn't step inside'.
He found Sharon sitting on the floor'.and mumering'

Sharon- Ab'meri Zindagi ka ki wajood hi nahi reh gaya'mein nahi jeena chahti hun'
mein ab akeli pad gayi hun'aisa koi nahi hai..jisse mein khul kar apne dil ke baat keh saku' ab to meri Shaadi..bhi , huh' sab kuch khatam ho gaya..mein apne family ko nahi bataungi kuch bhi'yeh jo kuch bhi hua'.nahi to'vo tut jaenge'mein mar jaungi to hi acha hai'.haan'

She was searching for something'but nothing came into her hands'
Swayam just stepped inside'and held her with her shoulders from Back..!
She turned instantly'.and got up'.
She was shocked.!
Swayam made her sit'on the bed'.
Sharon- Tumm'tum'yahan'jao yahan se'
Swayam- Nahi'mein nahi jaane wala'
Sharon(screaming)- Meine kaha na jao'mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni'.
Swayam*in mind*- Siren'! Huh..Siren Sharon'*to Sharon*- Wohao..calm down.aur haan'yeh sab kya bol rahi thi..mujhe nahi jeena'zindagi ka wajood nahi raha n all'
Sharon- Tumse matlab'.?
Swayam- Hai matlab'par batana zaruri nahi samjhta'so'
Sharon- Chahte kya ho tum'.batao'
Swayam- Tumhe samjhana'.!
Sharon- Mujhe'kuch nahi samjhna'.
Swayam- Ek baar..please'
Sharon faced away'but then Swayam made her face him'

Swayam- Yeh decision galat hai..
Sharon- Sahi hai..bilkul sahi'jab mera koi hai hi nahi'to kya jeena ???
Swayam- Acha..to tum kehti ho ki koi tumhara nahi hai'haina'?
Sharon- Haan'.(sad face)
Swayam- acha.to yeh batao'ki tumhare saath jo kuch bhi hua..tumhe support kisne kiya ?
Sharon- Friends ne'
Swayam- Aur'Shivam ki sachhai kon saamne laya tha ??
Sharon- Vo..K..Khushi ne'
Swayam- Hmm'so tum hi batao'ki agar tum unke liye important nahi hoti to kya vo itna sab karte ??
Sharon nodded in negation !
Swayam- Hmm..aur tumhari family..vo to tumhare bina kaise reh paate..unke bare mein hi soch leti'
Sharon- I was wrong'meine yeh decision liya..uske pehle kuch socha hi nahi..huh ! kitni bevkoof hun mein..but mere saath jo bhi hua'usse mein tut gayi hun'
She hung down her head'.
Swayam- Just begin your life with freshness..okay ?
Sharon- Yaa'but ek bata batao..
Swayam- hmm..
Sharon- Tum mujhe yeh sab kyun samjha rahe ho ??
Swayam paused !
Swayam- Umm'kya mein tumhara friend nahi hun ???
Sharon- Yeah ! Thode bohot..
Swayam- So islie'
Sharon smiled..- Thank you'!
Swayam- Simmi si worried for you..
Sharon- Yeah ! I'll talk to her'

Swayam then bid her bye'and went home..!
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Hope the song suited the condition !

Phew ! Hope this update was good'
Hope u liked it'!
Thank you.will wait for the response !
Demand- 45+ likes'.
Want Long comments..n HIT LIKE !!!

PS- Thanku Deepu Di, Marium n Shishya ! Love u all !!

Love,
Sakshi'

Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice update..
song selection was lovely...
waiting for the next update😊
Edited by -Chaitra- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
last 2 chaps were mindblowing.. loved d way u showed every twist n turn brilliantly.. simmi n sharon spoke n nil s angry hearing it.. case against shivam s nice.. ankita s also ready nice.. sharon got to know abt she being 2nd wife n s devastated.. idea of swayam regarding d recordings was brilliant.. khushi died n swayam lost his bestie.. sharon s sad for khushi's death n s worried abt swayam was nice.. shivam ll b hanged nice n good... but y sharon smile was not good.. ankita s not divorced so sharon's marriage s not legal wow.. hope sharon doesnt make prob now.. waiting for next part...

chap 11
song sequence was wow.. u showed both their pain beautifully... sharon left from that cursed place to her home n swayam said ll make sharon happy no matter wat.. n ll keep that promise he did to khushi... sharon wants to end her life omg thank god swayam came on time n made sharon realize her mistake she was abt to commit... waiting for next part..

ps: my 1st comment s for chap 8, this s for chap 9,10 & 11...
Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
swayam really missing khushi😭
song selection ws awsm nd suits d situation
she is not talk to anyone...
thank god swayan reach in time... otherwise she would have taken some wrong step
swayam ne bahut ache se smajaya sharon ko
thanks for the pm..
update soon:)
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited!

Nyc update!😊
No long cmnt this tym!! 😡
Edited by d3fan4eva - 12 years ago

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