Arshi FF Inevitable Pain || Thread 1|| NTL Pg 1 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...

do continue soon...

i like NK in tis ss...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written ...hope khushi is also alrite
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am all with nk...they should be left alone...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazinggg...
so arnav finally brokedwn..ws feelin so sad seein him lyk dis...bt he gave pain to khushi...
thnxx fr pm..
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

That was so heart wrenching. Arnav's plead, Khushi's pain, her realization, her relief after knowing her husband no longer held her responsible for the sin she has never committed and finally Arnav's fear of losing Khushi forever when he saw peace dawning o Khushi's eyes. All of them were beautifully written. I feel so sorry for both of them. Just because of a single person so many are suffering. Just because Arnav rusted that person over the love of his life and made a mistake. A mistake so grave that is capable of ruining the life and love of two souls who did nothing but thought of protecting their loved ones. I wish Khushi comes back to life. Though what Arnav did was very wrong but whatever he might have done, Khushi can't see him in pain. Yes i definitely want Arnav to be punished. But the last twenty four hours he has been through hell and back. The last nail on the coffin was the revelation of the truth. He can't live in peace until and unless Khushi forgives him. A punishment so severe that no one would wish that to happen even to their enemies. My heart went out to them both. Both have suffered, both are in pain and unknowingly they themselves were the cause of the other's pain. Thanks for the PM. The story is shaping up real good

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome. so beautifully written, Arnav's pain his guilt self loathing for having destroyed a life of an innocent girl who he loved based on his logic without even thinking n someone who dint believe in emotions bt facts n logic ended up doin the same thng arnav let his emotions get better of him so instead of thinkIng rationally n verifyin the facts he confronted shyam coz he felt more of a betrayal frm shyam nt khushi as much bt when shyam spit venom hitting Arnav where it hurt most so tht he wud blame khushi n act on his impulse in his anger which he did. also he dint confront khushi coz he was afraid wht if khushi accepted tht she loved shyam tht was somethin he was nt prepared for so he dint tell her why he married her until she almost killed herself.

if Arnav had really been ASR the sharp minded guy he'd composed himself got the facts kept tabs on shyam n even khushi if he felt she was involved. bt he was emotional feeling betrayed tht the man who he trust his only family his sis was a scumbag bt also the girl whom he loced was nt as innocent as she seemed. He felt he had been fooled by her.

Hence he did wht he thought or rather felt so he married her forcefully just so shyam cudnt have wht he wnted deep down his love for her dint wnt her to go. So as much as he said he married khushi to save anjali's marriage he did it for himself though he convinced himself otherwise he cudnt stop loving khushi.

I feel so strongly tht the ASR let Shyam have a chance enjoy luxuries while he made khushi sleep on te poolside in winter among other thng he did so how will he expose shyam no matter how much it hurts anjali why shud khushi pay for her weakness.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional.
Loved the way in which u have written about arnav's remorse.
Hope that khushi will be able to see that arnav is truely sorrry for his actions. And will forgive him.
Nice to see nk taking charge of the situation. He did the right thing.
Please continue soon. Waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i got reealll pissed at akash. -_-
NOW he speaks up -.-

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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's Reaction Was Amazing . FINALLY She Felt Peace When She Knew That Arnav Knows She Is An Innocent :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...just so heart wrenching...very emotional...very apt portrayal of asr's breakdown nd khushi's reaction.brilliant...plz continue soon

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