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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Read all parts just now...very very emotional...khushis step was wrong...though it was taken in utter heart broken condition...because Arnav n Shyamr not worth her life...Arnav dint deserve her...

Loved ur styles of writing...

Anjali is awesome ...wish she had known what a creep her husband was...

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 9

Akash entered the ward with the doctor. Arnav was not ready to leave khushi. He was continously pleading, shouting at her to talk to him once but she just stared at him blankly. Not even one emotion flickered in her eyes. No anger, no pain , not even hurt , absolutely nothing. She continued to stare at him .

"Mr. Raizada please leave from here and wait outside while i check the patient." Doctor turned to akash. "Mr. Raizada , take Mr. Jha outside and get her checked. She is not in a good condition here." Akash nodded."Bhai..??" He looked at his brother who was not leaving his eyes from khushi. "You leave with di akash . I am staying here." Akash looked at him with worried eyes. 'Don't know what more bhai have to face' he thought as he remmeber all the hardship his cousin brother had faced since his childhood. Akash left with anjali sobbing silently on his shoulder.

"Mr. Raizada it will be good if you wait outside." Doctor tried once again. Arnav's anger rose instantly. "I said I am not leaving my wife. Now check her. I am her husband and i am not going anywhere leaving my wife." he yelled at the doctor.

Doctor immediately started checking khushi, frightened of ASR's wrath. The whole hospital knew that this Ruthless business tychoon's wife was struggling for her life last night and he was a raging bull ready to attack whoever came in his way.
CONT. IN NEXT POST.

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

All the doctors knew about the threat he gave to the other doctor last night and everyone knew that if something happened to his wife he will surely shut this hospital down with a single snap of his finger.

"What happen to her..?? Why is she not responding to me..??" Arnav asked when the doctor finished checking her. He kept his face straight but only he knew what he is feeling right now. He felt he may break down any minute but he cannot, not when his khushi needed him. 'Need you' his mind scoffed . 'She is is in this state because of you. She dosen't need the one who is responsible for her state.'

"Mr. Raizada as we know that your wife tried to commite suicide it shows that she is not emotionally stable. Sometimes human brain shut itself in its defence , to protect itself after an emotional breakdown. That is what happened to your wife. She had shut herself. As we always consult psychiatrist for suicide attempt cases, which also goes to Mrs. Raizada. She will have her sessions with psychaitrist daily and she will start opening up..." .With every sentence arnav's last thread of strength was breaking. His heart was beating so fast, all he could hear was his heart's loud thumping. "...The psychiatrist will surely do her work but family's love , support will help her more to be normal once again. Her first session will be in the evening Mr. Raizada ." Doctor informed him.

"She will talk, dosen't she..??" Arnav asked shakily. "Ofcourse Mr. Raizada" Doctor smiled at him. "..but i can't tell you in how many days . It could take weeks or months also. Now if you excuse me ."
Doctor left.

Arnav stared at khushi's eyes , he tried hard to find life in them but he saw nothing.

CONT. IN NEXT POST.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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His heart clenched painfully at the sight in front of him. She was continously staring at him unblinking. He sat on the bed beside her, cupped her face in both of his palms tenderly. He stared right in her eyes and whisphered softy. "Khushi." She blinked. Arnav's eyes filled with tears. It is the first time she blinked. All this she was staring unblinkingly at him. It was small response but at least he got her to respond, even if it was just blink of the eye.

"Please talk to me" he said softly. She didn't respond. He realised the consequences of his actions. He was about to loose love of his life because of all the vile words he had thrown at her. "I am sorry khushi ." he chocked out the words. Her eyes got moist. Pain reflected in her eyes for a fleeting moment but she blinked and it was back to blank. "No, no no please don't shut me , please." He whisphered , a lone tear escaped from his left eye, fell on her face, below her eye right eye trailing a wet path from her cheek down to the pillow. It was like she was crying with him.

Arnav gently wiped tear and kissed her forehead softly. She closed her eyes at his touch. Arnav noticed this and his Heart jumped with joy. She is responding. Arnav vowed that he will bring the old khushi back, no matter what.

Payal with amma and buaji entered the room. They immediately rushed towards khushi. He backed away to give them the space . He just hope if not him then surely her family will be successfull in evocking some emotion in her lifeless form. Payal held khushi's hand tightly. "Khushi , see your jiji is with you. " But khushi was only staring at arnav.

Buaji and amma also trid to get a response from her but failed. Arnav frowned. She was not looking at her family .

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Posted: 12 years ago

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She was constanly staring at him with blank eyes . Payal noticed the line of gaze of her little sister and then she knew what she has to do. Its time.

I HAVE UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME. I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS UPDATE . I SERIOUSLY DON'T KNOW HOW THE UPDATE IS . PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE.THOSE WHO WANT PM FOR THE UPDATES . SEND ME A BUDDY REQUEST.

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kushiasr26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

awesome update

loved it a lot

pls continue soon

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

great update
what has Payal decided to do
continue soon

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Very emotional update. Even after all that also she only looking at him not her family?

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

An update after so long. Sorry for the delay in commenting. I read all the chapters again.

Nice update. Even after everything Khushi is responding to Arnav. Although she has shut herself she can't ignore him. Though her eyes don't reflect the pain and hurt she is feeling but her constant staring at Arnav is a reflection of the hurt she is bearing. Their can be no punishment more greater than Khushi staring at Arnav without any accusation in her eyes but her gaze telling more than she can ever voice out. Arnav will not be able to ignore her gaze and will be reminded all of his wrong doings each and every second. So Payal understood what may have caused this terrible thing. I wish she and the Gupta's told him the truth before but better late than never.

I wanted Arnav to realize that Khushi can't do any such thing all by himself without anyone telling him. Please let him find out himself first and then someone can narrate him the real story. Otherwise Arnav can't claim to have loved her. He will accept her if she is not a threat to his Di and will push her to death if he as little as having doubts that she is ruining his Di's life----should not happen. Arshi's love is unconditional. They accept each other with their flaws and complete each other with their strengths. I hope u will consider this. Thanks for the PM and please update The Wait and this one soon :)

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shanthiva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Wow wow look who's here.. Finally getting a update from u... I am jumping in joy here...

Well obviously khushi has shut her mind and not to respond.. Arnav u are such a jerk... Now what is the use of saying sorry and crying when u used to kill her by her words and now she almost killed herself. Unable to bear ur torture she has shut herself. Good she doesn't recognize u. U deserve all her hatred u jerk...

But then y is she not looking at her family. And what has payal decided.. Will wait till u update it..

Thanks for the PM.