--LAW OF ATTRACTION(os.virman)--

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LAW OF ATTRACTION

Hello… beautiful girls… thank u so much for comments. Especially for 'one second'. You made my day with your adorable comments. Some girls asked me for continuation, but I disappointed them. So this os is especially for u as a compensation. I pmed to those who are in my buddy list. If you don't want, kindly ignore it. Here lina with another os. Hope you all like this too…

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A smile of the full moon has spread on the dark ground in the form of moonlight. The lake beside me is flowing in a rhythmic way. The wind is blowing with the flow of the river and joined in the chorus. Gardens of marigolds are dancing to the rhythm. How scenic it is?

I m standing in the middle of the garden staring at the graceful dance of marigolds, but couldn't enjoy a bit. Everything in this whether is trying to heal me. Nature… it is human's best friend. Isn't it? But nothing could heal me. When you are in love, nothing can heal you but love. I want my love. I want manvi. Yes... I love her... It is the small word to describe my feelings for her or maybe there is no word in the dictionary to describe my love for her. But then, her words are continuously ringing in my mind always.

"I want a prince charming virat. He should be romantic, dashing, loving and caring. He should fall for me when everyone else is falling for him. You must be thinking that I m crazy. But trust me. I can recognize him easily. When we meet, miracles will happen. Then I will say, you are my prince charming" I heard her saying this more than 1000 times. Typical girls wish. Isn't it? She has been waiting for her prince charming since 15 years and I realized my love 17 years back when we both were children.

We are neighbors. We never addressed each other as a friend, but we understand each other well. We studied in the same school and now we are studying in the same college.

Time to time I went to her with raised hopes, but couldn't confess my love. It is killing me from inside.

"Virat..virat" her words brought me back breaking the thread of my thoughts. I turned my face towards her with an urge to see her once.

"What are you doing here alone haan? This is not a metropolitan city. Just a small village. And you are not in your house. You are in a social service camp to help the villagers. You have to follow some rules here. Why did…" she continued but I couldn't hear anything. The rays of moon are resting on her face and the blowing wind is caressing her fringe. Marigolds are touching her hands and asking her to dance. I was staring at her continuously. She is neither an angel nor a beauty queen, but she is MANVI. Now I couldn't bear this pain anymore. I want to be selfish. I don't want to concern about her feelings once. I have decided to confess my love this moment.

"Virat…come with me now" again she brought me back as she turned around and started moving.

"Manvi..." I caught her wrist in order to stop her. She turned around to face me. When I realized my grip on her, I released quickly.

"Manvi… I want to tell you something from long time. I know this is crazy and foolish but I don't want to be a coward and regret my decision later. manvi… I love you… I love you even when I didn't know the meaning of love. I love you even if I hate you. I love you even if you don't love me back… I just love you manvi… just like that…".

I stopped suddenly and trying to read her face. There was an expression which I couldn't read. I assumed that as her guilt and I continued.

"Manvi… you don't have to feel guilty. I know about your dream. I already know what your answer would be. I can't promise you all the things you want, but I can give you peace and love. I m not your prince charming, but you are my one and only cinderalla… and I never…." I couldn't finish the sentence because of sudden drizzle. I hurriedly held her hand and started dragging, but she was not moving. She was looking at the sky with "Unbelievable" expression.

"Manvi… its drizzling… you will catch cold… let's go inside" I said in confusion.

"Virat… did you see that?" she asked me which confused me even more. I looked up at the sky and replied "Ha… clouds has come down and it's starting to drizzle".

"Dhakkan… Not that one… see… still moon is there" she replied with a smiley face.

"Ha… it's there… so what" I asked her hoping to receive a proper answer.

"Virat… I always wanted to see rainy moonlight… means rain and moonlight at the same time but never get a chance… now I did… it's a miracle… and this is all because of you… I love you virat… I always did and I always will… but i never told you because I was confused. Now I've got my sign virat… you are my prince charming" her words took me to the heaven for a second and I forgot myself but I came back soon, cause I wanted to ask her something.

"Manvi… but I didn't do it… it is one of the nature's act… I can't" she interrupted my flow this time and replied "I don't know, who did virat… all I wanted is a miracle to recognize my prince charming. And you are my prince charming" her reply made me the happiest person on the planet.

I hugged her tightly unable to control my desires. I pressed her to my heart, to give it a proof, that she is real and not hallucination. Confessing love is like fighting in the war. If you win, it gives you peaceful life. if you lose, it takes your life away. Now, I got my life, manvi, my soul mate. She touched my heart in a way that no one ever did.

"You don't know how much I have waited for this moment" I said while caressing her hair.

"You are sounding like Edward Cullen—The vampire" she replied with a mischievous grin as she broke the hug and stepped back a little.

"You should feel happy. At least I didn't say 'you are like a drug to me' " I countered her with a big smile.

"If you would say like that, then I would feel happier than I m now" she encountered as she placed her hands on her hips and waiting for my answer.

"Girls are crazy. Aren't they?" I shook my head in disbelief and replied.

"What… girls…how many mmm…." She couldn't finish the sentence as I took her lips into mine and started kissing her, bringing all my dreams and desires out.

This experience taught me one thing. If your love is genuine, nature will also help you to reach your love. It's a kind of 'law of attraction'. You know "The Secret".

THE END

Your comments = my boost

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Be happy.

Lina…


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.Yamin. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres...
Yayy..i m the first one...
Beautiful os...
U have described the emotions very well..
Loved it to the core...
Awesome ending... 😊 ...cute and romantic...
Thank u so much for the pm..
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it. Every gal wishes for prince charming and sometimes her prince charming will be the the one whose with her all the time but yet to realise. Loved this sweet simple Os.Loved the charcter Virat. And yours OS are our boost .Love the way u write ,and amazed by the way u make simple things sound so beautiful.Loved it so much. Nature was considerate in Virat's case.Remembered the line of Srk in his fim."Kehte hain agar kisi cheez ko agar dil se chaho to saari kayanath tumhe usse milane ki koshish me lag jaati hai".Nature too helped him. Loved the whole OS
Pls accept my buddy request and pls pm me wen u write 😊

Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovly OS...! i was smiling while reading the confession...Maanvi is so cute...loved it..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Lina
i was always stun coz of ur os i read
great emotions and u portray so well
i can't describe in some words
just wanna say it was hillarious, brilliant
liked it so much
i loved u last stanza and u last line, it was phenomenal
great job
and do it like always u do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great os
loved it to the core!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful OS Lina ⭐️.. Beautifully written 👏.. Loved the confession part.. It was simple yet magical ❤️.. Finally Manvi found her prince charming 😳.. Loved their convo at the end.. Keep writing more.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for commenting late...
Wow it was awesome!
So cute and loved it so much!
U have described each and every part of it so beautifully!
I am huge fan of your writing!
Seriously it was fab!
The whole thing was so good!
Manvi's ideology about her prince charming...
Nature helping them...
Everything!
Thanx a lot for writing it now i am not dissapointed even though u wont continue ine secnd because this was awesome!
Thnx for the pm and keep writing more like this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey lina...it was so sweet and cute...you really have a way...you made simple things so beautiful...write more and more and pm me...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all the girlies for your likes and comments...keep smiling always...

Lina...

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