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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rhu90

nice ending dear...


christian style wedding...the dresses were superb...loved the gown...loved the chura part...poor guy...chura ki wajah se kitna chot lagi...thanks 4the pm...



thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
amazing os...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Nice update
Lovely OS
Kriyaansh married
Loved their cute fight
Thnx for d pm
Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Amazing update!!!
Luvd da update thruout!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

hi main a gyi phir sey last update deney but jaldi a gyi right hmm i know ki maney bola tha ki main next day update kar doo gi but kya kroo agar maney achi update nahi di to tum log mujey maar dalogey or main marna nahi chahti kyu mujey abhi exam deney hey or study karni hey ...to is liye a gyi update deney mujey jinda rehna hey abhi ok bohat ho gyi meri bak bak first tank u all of u for ur comment nd like i love it here is last update of this os ...😉


its chilly winter morning in LA ...nd first rain of winter season ...
sh : shouting at swayam ...swayam tumhey maney kitni baar yaad dilaya phir b bhool gye tum ...
sw : sorry baby mujey yaad tha but last moment pey pta nahi kesey dimag sey slip ho gya ..(baby face)
sh : u know na bahar barish ho rhi hey ab kya krey hum log ... u know na uska hyper mode ...start ho jayega or rey kha hey ...
sw : look around ...pta nahi baby kha gya jahi to tha thori time pehley ...
sh ; go to hell tum dono ka kuj nahi ho sakta mujey nahi pta kuj b kro but wedding dress chahiye abhi ...nd she cut the call (tum logo ney kya scoha face to face talking 😆)...
sw : main kesey bhool gya kriya to bohat hayper ho jayegi ab kya kroo main but j rey kha hey ...

kriya standing on terrace enjoying rain she open her arms in rain nd start felling rain drops on her skin (see mera rain attack kya kroo main cah kar b rain enjoy nahi kar sakti ..)..a beautiful smile crept on her face ...see take deep breath in twirl in rain ...rey hug kriya from back kriya open her eyes nd just smile ...rey nuzzle his head in her crook ...kriya *sign* ...they remain in same position ...nd kriya enjoying warmth of his body ...then rey twirl kriya toward him ...
rey : kya kar rhi thi meri princess ... itni thand hey or usmey rain enjoy wo b merey bina ... kal hamari shaadi hey or agar tumhey thand lag jati to ...or tum bomar ho gyi pta na mujey kitna bura lageyga ...
kriya : made baby face ...
rey smile on this
rey : hmm to meri princess ko rain enjoy karna hey ...
kriya ; nodded ...
rey : ohk thik hey leikn thora time or then ...ander chaley gey ok ...
kriya ; smile ...
rey ask kriya for dance ...
kriya agree ...
(guys wahi kriyaansh k last dance dekh lena ohk ...mera bina main rehney lga ho walla)...
after dance rey hug kriya tight ..
rey ; princess andhar chaley nahi to tum bimar per jaogi or mujey hamari shaadi delay nahi karni ...nd then rey pik kriya nd enter in her room ...
after entering in room rey help kriya to stand ...nd gave her a peck on her cheek ..
rey : go nd change fast main coffe ley k ata hoo ...
kriya smile nd walk toward bathroom ...
as soon as rey enter in main hall girls just shout in shock ...
all girls : rey
rey scared to core rey fell on ground nd girls start laughing
rey : guys j kya baat hui khi lag jati to koi esa chilata hey kya ...
sh : whil controling her laugh ...sorry tum achanak a gye na is liye but tum ka aye or tum jha kya kar rhey ho ha ,...
all girls look at rey with ? expressing ...
rey : wo main princess sey milney i mean uski wedding dress ley k aya tha ...
girls ; really tum ley aye dress .thank god kha hey ...
rey : ha dikha deta hoo first 2 cup coffe ..merey or kriya k liye ...
sh ; ok lati hoo leking coffe khatam hotey hi niklo jha sey its girls time
rey : ok coffee to do ...
sh handed two cup of coffee to rey
rey ; thankx nd j rhi dresss smabhal k rakhna ...
neha : why u tense hum dekh legey all ...
simmi rini : yes
rey ; ok m going ...
rey enter in kriya's room with 2 cup of coffee
kriya already change into other cloths ...
rey : here u go princess nd slowly slowly peena ok
kriya : gave a que mark look ?/
rey : kyu ki mujey order diya gya hey ki coffee khatam hotey hi mujey jana hoga agar tum coffee slowley khatam krogi to main utna hi time jha ruk pauga ...
kriya : laugh on this nd hit on rey's shoulder ...
rey : baby face ...has kyu rhi hoo ...
rey held kriya's hand nd sit on couch ab sitting position b dekh loo ...
imagine ki its couch ohk ...) maney to kar liya imagine hahah haye rey main or meri imagination killer na 🤣...)
rey wishpher in kriya's ear " u know tumhari wedding dress bohat pyaari hey ...
kriya suddenly look at rey : with where look ...
rey : hum wo girls k pass hey ns i want ki tum wo morning mey hi dekho agar abhi dekh loo gi to wo tumhey purani lagey gi baad mey (j ya tha mujey b nahi pta chala😆)
kriya gave o xpression ...
rey : mazak kar rha hoo wo kya hey na girls mujey maar dalti agagr main unhey dress nahi deta but relax first tum hi dekho gi dress maney unhey bola diya hey ...u know m waiting kab morning hogi or kab hamari shaadi hogi main apni princess ko wedding dress mey dekhna chahta hoo i can't wait ... or see time kitna slow chal rha hey ...kriya smiling while listening rey
rey ; hey main kuj or b laya tha apni princess k liye ...
kriya's smile grew wide kriya look at rey
ry : first close ur eyes
kriya :
rey ; please
kriya close her eyes
rey move kriya's hair to left side nd place a beautiful pendant ...(hwww tum logo ney kya schoha mujey pta jha sab besharm hey 😆)
rey ; open ur eyes princess nd tell me hows it...kriya open her eyes nd look at pendant nd after looking at it she look at rey with teary eye
rey : what happen princee ro kyu rhi ho acha nahi lga ...nahi acha hey to main new ley auga
but kriya just hug him ...
rey ; kya hua ...tumhey acha lga ...
kriya : nodded ...
rey : 😃
rey move toward for kiss
voice : ahem ahem ...
kriya jump from her seat
rey : kya hey guys
sh : coffee khatam ab ap jayiye kal miltey hey baki ka phir con. karna ok ...
kriya blushing😳 kriya hide her self in rey's arms
rey : ok m going but please kriya ko matlab meri princess ko tease mat karna ...
vish enter : realx koi kriya ko tease nahi kerga hum tumhey tease kregey ...
girls laugh ...
rey ; ok m going ...gud night princess sweet dreams m waiting for u in my dreams
girls " awww so cute ...
as soon as rey leave girls notice pendant jo rey ney diya
sh : wow beautiful ha
neha ; rey gift this tumhey ...
kriya : smile
simmi : see kesey blush kar rhi hey haye ...
vish ; so cute nd click a pic of kriya ...
rini abhi j haal hey to kal jab tum bride bogi to rey ka to bhagwan hi malikh hey
all : yes

boy side rey enter in his house ...
(arey kriya want ki wo LA mey shaadi krey to shaadi sey pehley girl nd boy ek ghar main nahi reh saktey is liye do alg alg ghar or vesey b kriyaansh shaadi k baad jahi rehney waley hey ...😆)
rey's mom : rey kab k gya ab aya hey ha ...kya karny lag gya tha
rey : mom app b nah ...😕
rey's mom : arey maney kya bola maney to bas poosha 😆
boys having fun ...
rey : kuj main to bas princess ke sssaht ...
rey's mom : tum princess k saath
boys:🤣...
rey : tum log kya has rhey ho 😡..
sw : hum kha has rhey hey ,...😆
rey's mom : rey topic mat change kro ...kya kar rhey they ...
varun : ha bolo bolo ...
viky ; ha bol na chup kyu hey ...hamey btaya b nahi or chup chap nikal liya
rey ; mom main apse to baad main baat karta ho pehley inki to main 😆
boys ; 😲 bhagoo tufaan a rha hey nd boys start there chasing game
rey's dad enter " kya ho rha hey (shout ..)
all stant in attension ...
rey's dad ; kal tumhari shaadi hey dekh kar lagta to nahi hey ...mujey nahi lagta ki tumhey abi shaddi karni chahiye main shaadi cancle kar rha hoo ..
rey : no dad ...please😭
all r really very serious ..
ry's dad look at allof them then start laughing hard 🤣
rey ; dad app mera mazak uda rhey hoo
rey's dad ; kyu agar tum log masti kar saktey ho to main nahi kar sakta jao abhi so jao kal jaldi b to uthna hey na shaadi b hey tumhai ...

finally shaadi ka din marriage place
shaadi raat ko hi hey kyu ki i love this hehe ...
sitting arrengment ...
groom i mean rey ki dress
boys alreaddy arive but girls abhi tak nahi ayi rey again nd againg looking at entry gate ...
swayam : ko bola tha na jaldi ley k ana abhi tak nahi aya
viky : a jayega ...
varun : see a gye
bridesmais dress dekh loo
rey try to see kriya's face but her veil ki wja sey unable to see her face
nil : abhey itna machal kyu rha hey ana to usey jahi hey
varun : vesey bohat pyari lag rhi hey wo ...
swayam enter holding riya's hand ...
kriya's dress
hair style
at last they reach at please jha shaadi honi hey ...
nd finally rey able to see kriya's face
rey to kriya ' u looking out of worl my princess
kriya : 😳
nd then last jo b read kiya jata hey all done they exchange ring

father : now u kiss the bride ...
rey kiss kriya and all clap for them ...
then kriya throw the flower bouquet nd sharon cought this all hoot for sharon nd swayam
sharon : 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awsum & super lovely update
Luv it to d core
Beautiful ending
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awsome end
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awsome Update. . . . . . .
Loved it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome OS...loved bit very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
it was mindblowing loved it

it was terrific

kya baat hai aru tera toh jawab nahi full on damaal wala update

aur kriyaansh masti romance was fabulous

loved it

tere liye sirf ek hi bollungi

kya baat

kya baat

kayaa baaat

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