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suprb os aro...lovd it... Nd all d best 4 exam
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Kriya ki awaz wapas dila do yaar!
Awesome tha!
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awesome OS...loved it very much
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SUPER AWESOME OS..
post epilogue soon n pm me too
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Post epilog frist it's three days
Waise exam kaisa gaya math ka
And best of luck for ur exam
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hi main a gyi phir sey last update deney but jaldi a gyi right hmm i know ki maney bola tha ki main next day update kar doo gi but kya kroo agar maney achi update nahi di to tum log mujey maar dalogey or main marna nahi chahti kyu mujey abhi exam deney hey or study karni hey ...to is liye a gyi update deney mujey jinda rehna hey abhi ok bohat ho gyi meri bak bak first tank u all of u for ur comment nd like i love it here is last update of this os ...😉

its chilly winter morning in LA ...nd first rain of winter season ...
sh : shouting at swayam ...swayam tumhey maney kitni baar yaad dilaya phir b bhool gye tum ...
sw : sorry baby mujey yaad tha but last moment pey pta nahi kesey dimag sey slip ho gya ..(baby face)
sh : u know na bahar barish ho rhi hey ab kya krey hum log ... u know na uska hyper mode ...start ho jayega or rey kha hey ...
sw : look around ...pta nahi baby kha gya jahi to tha thori time pehley ...
sh ; go to hell tum dono ka kuj nahi ho sakta mujey nahi pta kuj b kro but wedding dress chahiye abhi ...nd she cut the call (tum logo ney kya scoha face to face talking 😆)...
sw : main kesey bhool gya kriya to bohat hayper ho jayegi ab kya kroo main but j rey kha hey ...

kriya standing on terrace enjoying rain she open her arms in rain nd start felling rain drops on her skin (see mera rain attack kya kroo main cah kar b rain enjoy nahi kar sakti ..)..a beautiful smile crept on her face ...see take deep breath in twirl in rain ...rey hug kriya from back kriya open her eyes nd just smile ...rey nuzzle his head in her crook ...kriya *sign* ...they remain in same position ...nd kriya enjoying warmth of his body ...then rey twirl kriya toward him ...
rey : kya kar rhi thi meri princess ... itni thand hey or usmey rain enjoy wo b merey bina ... kal hamari shaadi hey or agar tumhey thand lag jati to ...or tum bomar ho gyi pta na mujey kitna bura lageyga ...
kriya : made baby face ...
rey smile on this
rey : hmm to meri princess ko rain enjoy karna hey ...
kriya ; nodded ...
rey : ohk thik hey leikn thora time or then ...ander chaley gey ok ...
kriya ; smile ...
rey ask kriya for dance ...
kriya agree ...
(guys wahi kriyaansh k last dance dekh lena ohk ...mera bina main rehney lga ho walla)...
after dance rey hug kriya tight ..
rey ; princess andhar chaley nahi to tum bimar per jaogi or mujey hamari shaadi delay nahi karni ...nd then rey pik kriya nd enter in her room ...
after entering in room rey help kriya to stand ...nd gave her a peck on her cheek ..
rey : go nd change fast main coffe ley k ata hoo ...
kriya smile nd walk toward bathroom ...
as soon as rey enter in main hall girls just shout in shock ...
all girls : rey
rey scared to core rey fell on ground nd girls start laughing
rey : guys j kya baat hui khi lag jati to koi esa chilata hey kya ...
sh : whil controling her laugh ...sorry tum achanak a gye na is liye but tum ka aye or tum jha kya kar rhey ho ha ,...
all girls look at rey with ? expressing ...
rey : wo main princess sey milney i mean uski wedding dress ley k aya tha ...
girls ; really tum ley aye dress .thank god kha hey ...
rey : ha dikha deta hoo first 2 cup coffe ..merey or kriya k liye ...
sh ; ok lati hoo leking coffe khatam hotey hi niklo jha sey its girls time
rey : ok coffee to do ...
sh handed two cup of coffee to rey
rey ; thankx nd j rhi dresss smabhal k rakhna ...
neha : why u tense hum dekh legey all ...
simmi rini : yes
rey ; ok m going ...
rey enter in kriya's room with 2 cup of coffee
kriya already change into other cloths ...
rey : here u go princess nd slowly slowly peena ok
kriya : gave a que mark look ?/
rey : kyu ki mujey order diya gya hey ki coffee khatam hotey hi mujey jana hoga agar tum coffee slowley khatam krogi to main utna hi time jha ruk pauga ...
kriya : laugh on this nd hit on rey's shoulder ...
rey : baby face ...has kyu rhi hoo ...
rey held kriya's hand nd sit on couch ab sitting position b dekh loo ...
imagine ki its couch ohk ...) maney to kar liya imagine hahah haye rey main or meri imagination killer na 🤣...)
rey wishpher in kriya's ear " u know tumhari wedding dress bohat pyaari hey ...
kriya suddenly look at rey : with where look ...
rey : hum wo girls k pass hey ns i want ki tum wo morning mey hi dekho agar abhi dekh loo gi to wo tumhey purani lagey gi baad mey (j ya tha mujey b nahi pta chala😆)
kriya gave o xpression ...
rey : mazak kar rha hoo wo kya hey na girls mujey maar dalti agagr main unhey dress nahi deta but relax first tum hi dekho gi dress maney unhey bola diya hey ...u know m waiting kab morning hogi or kab hamari shaadi hogi main apni princess ko wedding dress mey dekhna chahta hoo i can't wait ... or see time kitna slow chal rha hey ...kriya smiling while listening rey
rey ; hey main kuj or b laya tha apni princess k liye ...
kriya's smile grew wide kriya look at rey
ry : first close ur eyes
kriya :
rey ; please
kriya close her eyes
rey move kriya's hair to left side nd place a beautiful pendant ...(hwww tum logo ney kya schoha mujey pta jha sab besharm hey 😆)
rey ; open ur eyes princess nd tell me hows it...kriya open her eyes nd look at pendant nd after looking at it she look at rey with teary eye
rey : what happen princee ro kyu rhi ho acha nahi lga ...nahi acha hey to main new ley auga
but kriya just hug him ...
rey ; kya hua ...tumhey acha lga ...
kriya : nodded ...
rey : 😃
rey move toward for kiss
voice : ahem ahem ...
kriya jump from her seat
rey : kya hey guys
sh : coffee khatam ab ap jayiye kal miltey hey baki ka phir con. karna ok ...
kriya blushing😳 kriya hide her self in rey's arms
rey : ok m going but please kriya ko matlab meri princess ko tease mat karna ...
vish enter : realx koi kriya ko tease nahi kerga hum tumhey tease kregey ...
girls laugh ...
rey ; ok m going ...gud night princess sweet dreams m waiting for u in my dreams
girls " awww so cute ...
as soon as rey leave girls notice pendant jo rey ney diya
sh : wow beautiful ha
neha ; rey gift this tumhey ...
kriya : smile
simmi : see kesey blush kar rhi hey haye ...
vish ; so cute nd click a pic of kriya ...
rini abhi j haal hey to kal jab tum bride bogi to rey ka to bhagwan hi malikh hey
all : yes

boy side rey enter in his house ...
(arey kriya want ki wo LA mey shaadi krey to shaadi sey pehley girl nd boy ek ghar main nahi reh saktey is liye do alg alg ghar or vesey b kriyaansh shaadi k baad jahi rehney waley hey ...😆)
rey's mom : rey kab k gya ab aya hey ha ...kya karny lag gya tha
rey : mom app b nah ...😕
rey's mom : arey maney kya bola maney to bas poosha 😆
boys having fun ...
rey : kuj main to bas princess ke sssaht ...
rey's mom : tum princess k saath
boys:🤣...
rey : tum log kya has rhey ho 😡..
sw : hum kha has rhey hey ,...😆
rey's mom : rey topic mat change kro ...kya kar rhey they ...
varun : ha bolo bolo ...
viky ; ha bol na chup kyu hey ...hamey btaya b nahi or chup chap nikal liya
rey ; mom main apse to baad main baat karta ho pehley inki to main 😆
boys ; 😲 bhagoo tufaan a rha hey nd boys start there chasing game
rey's dad enter " kya ho rha hey (shout ..)
all stant in attension ...
rey's dad ; kal tumhari shaadi hey dekh kar lagta to nahi hey ...mujey nahi lagta ki tumhey abi shaddi karni chahiye main shaadi cancle kar rha hoo ..
rey : no dad ...please😭
all r really very serious ..
ry's dad look at allof them then start laughing hard 🤣
rey ; dad app mera mazak uda rhey hoo
rey's dad ; kyu agar tum log masti kar saktey ho to main nahi kar sakta jao abhi so jao kal jaldi b to uthna hey na shaadi b hey tumhai ...

finally shaadi ka din marriage place
shaadi raat ko hi hey kyu ki i love this hehe ...
sitting arrengment ...
groom i mean rey ki dress
boys alreaddy arive but girls abhi tak nahi ayi rey again nd againg looking at entry gate ...
swayam : ko bola tha na jaldi ley k ana abhi tak nahi aya
viky : a jayega ...
varun : see a gye
bridesmais dress dekh loo
rey try to see kriya's face but her veil ki wja sey unable to see her face
nil : abhey itna machal kyu rha hey ana to usey jahi hey
varun : vesey bohat pyari lag rhi hey wo ...
swayam enter holding riya's hand ...
kriya's dress
hair style
at last they reach at please jha shaadi honi hey ...
nd finally rey able to see kriya's face
rey to kriya ' u looking out of worl my princess
kriya : 😳
nd then last jo b read kiya jata hey all done they exchange ring

father : now u kiss the bride ...
rey kiss kriya and all clap for them ...
then kriya throw the flower bouquet nd sharon cought this all hoot for sharon nd swayam
sharon : 😳

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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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rey : ahh kriya ...
kriya ; kya hua (tum loo ney kya scoha main kriya ko silent mode pey rakh k hi story ka end kar doo gi ...😆)
rey : kriya ek baat btao mujey humney shaadi to cristian style sey ki thi na to tumney j chura kyu pehna baad mey ...
kriya : hwww😲 shaadi k chura pehnney sey kya sanband ..
rey : sanband hey ..
kriya : wo kesey
rey ; vo asey jab b mera romance ka mood hota hey har baar beech mey a jata hey ...pta hey kitni har baar chot lagi muj is ki wja sey
krya : how mean rey main app sey baat nahi kroogi had hey ... pehley to bohat boltey they kriya tumharey hath mey kitna acha lagta hey j chura or ab dard deta hey ...u know i love this(guys choora pta hey na kya hota hey mujey bohat acha lagta hey ...😳)
this is chura
rey : j to gussa ho gyi kriya listen main to bas bol rha tha ki ok princess m sorry ...
kriya : i don't care
rey : sorry
kriya : no ...
rey : kan pakar k sorry baba doobara nahi boluga ...
kriya ; pakka
rey ; ha pakka ab smil to kardo ...
kriya : nahi
rey ; acha nd start tickling kriya
kriya jump on bed nd laughing hard
kriya : rey please sto u know na muj sey j bardash nahoi tickling please bas kro ...
rey : ohk lekin ek sharat ry ...
kriya : what ...
rey ; tumhey pta hey ...
kriya : no rey ..
rey ; yes ab to tum meri offecial wife ho ab tum no nahi bol sakti ...
kriya : agar main no bolu to ..
rey : to nd he again start his tickling session
kriya : rey stop (while laughing ..)
rey : to bolo tum wahi krogi jo main khooga ...
kriya ; ha please bas kro ...please
rey ; ok ...
as soon as rey left kriya kriya run but rey to fast he locke th door
rey : kriya ..main tumhey achey sey janta hoo ...ki tum kab kya kroogi ...so beeter merey saath sytaani nahi kyu ki agar maney badmashi ki an ..
kriya ; acha kya krogey ...(with attitude )
rey : main kya krooga
kriya ': rey please pass mat ana no rey ...
rey : main to auga ...nd kriya leaning on bathroom door nd rey when walk toward kriya kriya's back khit bathroom door nd she fell (door lock nahi tha na is lye ...🤣)
rey start laughing ...🤣...
kriya stand up nd like 😲 rey how mean ... i hate u ...
rey ; try to control listen batcutter ...
s soon as rey enter in bathroom in blink rey completely wet ...
rey :😲 batcutter tumney mujey gella kar diya ...
kriya : ha kyu ab nahi a rhi hasi ...ab haso na hahahah
rey : mujey gela kiya the great reyaansh singhania ko
kriya : oh great or app ... huh main b mrs kriya reyaansh singhania ho samzey app ...
kriya start laughing nd about to lave when rey call hey
kriya turn
kriya ; 😲 rey apney mujey geela kar diya ...
rey : ab tum haso na ... bari hasi a rhi thi bola tha na panga mat lena
nd they start trowing water on each other
kriya ; bas bohat ho gya m goiin mr reyaansh singhania ...mna lo apna honeymoon ...kisi or k saaht ...
rey : ha to jao na maney kab roka ..vesey idea acha hey ...
kriya : huh go to hell
kriya push rey out from bathroom nd go to change her dress ...
rey : samzti kya hey khud ko ...rey also leave from room ...
rey leave from there ...
after changing kriya back in room
kriya look around kha gye ... ab main kya kroo gussa ho gye rey ...but meri kya galti thi ...lekin ab kya kroo ...
kriya ; idea 😉
kriya change select a dress ... look into miror did light make up wich make her beutiful look likie angel ...
kriya walk toward beach finding him ...here rey sitting
rey : mujey wapis jana chahiye na ...mujey fight nahi karni chahiye thi khamkha poora din barbad ho gya kha romance karney ka mood tha or fight kar li ...mujey itna bura lag rha hey ...arey wo to bilkul bachi hey mujey nahu gussa hona chahiye tha ...
but at same time some on hug him fro behind ...
rey trun to look
rey : princess 😲
kriya : kya hua main achi nahi lag rhi ...😭
rey : nahi u looking so beautiful u know last time shaadi mey n itni cute nahi lagi thi ...
kriya ; matlab main achi nahi lag rhi thi hamari shaadi k din ..
rey ; nahi while hugging her ... mera matlab hey this color suit u nd m sorry for fighting ...
kriya ; nahi m sorry mujey fight nahi karni chahiye thi ...
rey ; nahi meri galti thi
kriya : meri galti thi
rey : meri
kriya ; meri
rey ; meri
kriya : meri
rey : meri
kriya : meri
two peoples watching them while they r fighting
voice ; tum log ney fight kis baat pey ki thi ...yaad hey
both with out looking that side
rey : humney fight m yaad nahi ...
kriya : ha mujey yaad hey ..m nai hi ota
voice : u guys
both look : swaron ...
sh : ha hum morning sey tum logo ka wait kar rhey hey hum log or tum log aye nahi
sw ; romm mey b nahi they phir tum logo ko find kartey kartey hum jha aye ...
sh ; poora din barbad kar diyah amara
sw : ha or nahi to kya kitna kuj scoh tha humney ...
kriyaansh : sorry (baby face)
sh : sza to milegi
kriya ; kya
sw : aj ka dinner tum log karwao gey ...
rey : ha jroor lekin us sey pehley mujey ek kaam karna hey
sh : kya
kriya ; no rey 😲
rey : yes baby
rey pull kriya in a smooch ...
swaron ; 😲
sh : rey kya kar rhey ho sab dekh rhey hey
rey : ha to honymoon pey hey dekhney do jo dekh rhey hey ...😉
krya ; ha 😉
sw : tum bi
kriya : ha main b
swarom ; u guys so dead
kriyaansh start running

after having lot of masti nd dineer both couple headed toward there respective room ...
as soon kriyaansh enter in room rey lock the door
rey : baby ab kha jaogi tum muj sey bach k ...
kriya : rey bachna kon chahta hey ...
rey : really
kriya : ha mujey bhagwaan k liye bikul mat chodna ..
both : nahi choduga meri jaan
nd then both laugh ...
then rey look at kriya she completely lost in own world ...rey take out her cell nd click kriya's pic
kriya ; kya kar rhey ho app
rey : apni prncess the great batcutter ki pic ley rha hoo
kriya : kitni pics logey meri jab dekho pics letey ho
rey : i love this u know na
kriya : i know .to app pics lo then main so jati hoo
now refreash the page guys
rey pull kriya with force nd both fell on bed ...
kriya neechey nd rey uppar bichari kriya (🤣) rey pin kriya hair which irritating her ...then kiss her on her forhead ...kriya moan ...rey kissing her all over her face ...kriya loosing her sense nd rey already lost his sense ...rey kissing kriya madely ...(haha or koi kaam nahi hey ...)...then kriya roll over rey kiss him his cheek ...eyes but not there where rey want ...she teasing them ...both r teasing each other ...then kriya bite rey on his crook rey moan her name rey slowely " baby u testing my patience please stop do what i want " kriya whil kissing him on chest " mujey nahi ppta ki app ko kya chahiye " whil moving her fingers on his cheek ..rey cought her hand nd roll over her ...nd start planting wet kissing then after lot of struggle he capture his lips start kissing her sucking , nibbling ...both of them not ready to give up kriya move her fingers in his hair nd pull him more to depend the kiss (ulta ho gya i know )..rey slip his hand in kriya's shirt ...this making kriya dizy ...kriya unnbotton rey;s shirt ...rey : i love u kriya while kissing on her temple ...kriya : i love u to more then my life ...after a long make out both sleep peacfully while enjoy each other warmth..
the end 😆
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm ending
dresses were beautiful
loved the gown nd also chura part
poor rey
chura ki wajah se kitni chot lagi
kriyansh fi8 ws awsm nd funy😆
swaron ke smane kriayansh ne smooch ki😳
nd last part (room wala)ws superb
thnks 4 pm
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res Done
awosm 😆😆
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice ending dear...

christian style wedding...the dresses were superb...loved the gown...loved the chura part...poor guy...chura ki wajah se kitna chot lagi...thanks 4the pm...

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