ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Appy that was a great update !!!!! he took her virginity so ruthlessly and did not even realize that she was a virgin ... Poor Khushi being so innocent did not even know how to react to the after moments !!! He is such a confused character taking his frustration of GG on poor khushi !!!!! But once in a while he start to have concerns and feelings for Khushi !!!!

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arshisiree

@arshisiree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

waiting fr xtnsion 😃

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Nice update
Arnav is so heartless..poor Khushi
Khushi in pain
waiting for extended part
continue soon

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

truly feel sorry for khushi - i hope at some point ASR emotional downfall is equivalent to the hardship being metted on Khushi - her soul has just been shattered poor thing and she does not even realise it

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

paro di it was superb update...

loved it...

khushi's child mind seeking caress frm arnav...

arnav all on a sudden felt lil pity fr khushi...

but this lil pity snatched by GG ...😡

khushi's first tym was only f**k fr arnav...

arnav's sexual frustration out by f**king her...

arnav...😡 wish he better be good fr khushi...

khushi's special moment let her in deep pain...

only waiting poor soul fr her husband...

waiting fr extension...

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

What a confused tortured soul Arnav is and he is taking it out on khushi. Waiting for the extension to see whether Arnav shows his caring side again. Looks like a kind word from him and khushi will be all his irrespective of all his acts...feel bad for khushi..always left craving for love and belonging.

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sheethal

@sheethal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

really feel bad for khushi.why GG like evils are enjoying her life😡,

khushi ,the angel suffer so much pain????????

when will arnav understand her and her feelings??????//

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the notebook

@the_notebook

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Arey baapreee

OMG sorry wasnt able to like..my button not working :/

but..AWESOME YAARRR

IM SOOO FALLIN IN LOVE WID THIS...FF [ PLZ PLZ PLZZZ MAKE IT AN FF]

And..Finally Arnav did it..You go mannn

hehe

And the questions..yaar..u write so well..its hard to believe how u take little phrases and draw the whole meaning of the situation and feelings so easily..ur a breathtaking writer yar

Love ittt

Khushi was so cutee

***Take a bow Sunshine-Sister***

~Ur baby

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janu

@jenji08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

he is really heartless creature... he didnt care for his wife..
poor Khushi... i feel bad for her

Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Oh wow you updated!!! yay!!!

How sweetly Arnav cared for Khushi until he was brought back by the message the mother in- law and

he became ASR again 😡.. Poor Khushi was really hoping her first time would a passionate one but it was more like a chore than love😭

Akash is in love😳 who is is it ,payal ? He feels scared to marry her because how they are treating

Khushi. When Arnav hear this he become furious because no one harm his wife,so sweet!!! His possesiveness is showing 😊 is he falling in love with or what but his past is not him do it!!! Please don't hurt Khushi anymore so is so innocent😭

Thank you for the update

Waiting eagerly for the next one

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago