ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

poor khushi...:((
update d rest soon..

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

arnav concerns at first really was soomethg else but just a message just like that he used that poor girl...and the funny part is he didn't know if she was a virgin or better accept...funniest of all tht bride/child,,,tht woman part is telling her it was bad but the child one is thinking otherwise...

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Yarr i love this FF [ again..im tellin u convert it into an FF :-p] ..it deserves everything...u have written it sooo well

The feelings, the characters, the swears that Anjali and Mami use :-p hehe, and most of all..the realistic approach of the story.

Its so awesome

I really feel its ur best work along with Forbidden Desire

I really want this to go far far far far farrr that's why i want u to make it an FF..its gonna rock like hell man

Watever it is now, its just the BEGINNING ...I have a gut feeling this is gonna achieve u great great stuff [ As if now its not enuf ;-D hehe]

So...

Ahem...

LOL i shud go now

hehe

sochna zara meri baat pe :-p eheh

love uuu

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sessy

@sessy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

i hope arnav realize what he done with khushi.poor soul,feeling bad for her.thx for the update.will wait for the ext part.

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Mahima

@MahimaMV

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

I feel really bad for khushi...y asr is so hard...y cant he see the innocence in her eyes...just coz of that stupid idiot gazal😡 hate her like anything... Hope khushi gets her happiness very soon... Wonderful update...

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javeria tahir

@Arhi_jia_Monaya

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

thisss is the best chap of thiss ff poor khushi arnav is so cruel .he didnt realize the this is khushi's first tym. How cruel he is plx update extension soon

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

i feel like to bit Arnav hard...😡😡😡... feel very very sad for khushi...😭😭😭

why this innocent soul have to get so much pain in her life...😭😭😭😭

its feels really horrible when a girl get this kind of behavior from her husband...the husband she want to die for...the husband she worship most...here the physical pain is nothing to compare with the emotional pain... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

it is really...the toughest part...

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..ashiya..

@..ashiya..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Awesome update.. Poor khushi she always has to bear the harshness of Arna though being very innocent just bcoz of her mother..thank god Arnav realised sth was wrong wid her wen he did it.. Hope he finds out abt her innocence soon.. In that entire family atleast someone is there for her... Weh aakash narrated Arnav the story of what happened to her in his absence i ws just in love wid that guy... Continue soon

Edited by me.ashiya - 12 years ago