Arhi: The Proposal ?? Part 9 page 97 NOTE pg 109

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Rina

@Poisoncharm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

WOW SPLENDID!!!! IT HAD EVERY THING IN IT ...ESPECIALLY MY FAVOURITE "COMEDY"...I WAS REALLY LAUGHING OUT ...WELL WRITTEN ...READ IT IN 1 GO... TRULY HILARIOUS...WAITING 4 D NEXT UPDATE

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mamidis

@mamidis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Amazing update. Loved it. I read all in one shot. Your update made me laugh and cry too. You are gifted writer.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

That was a long & awesome update. The first part was so lovely & their little closeness was really mesmerizing. The arrival of Darshana had spoil their moments. Hope Arnav will be more understanding & will stand by Khushi whenever she needs him.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Awesome update. I was waiting for this one.

I can't believe after all that Arnav still invited his friend over and his friend wanted to come over!!!

I hate the fact that Arnav & Khushi didn't get a chance to talk at all. And Khushi is still annoyed and hurt.

You wrote the update beautifully! Great flow of thoughts for all 3 characters.

Please don't take too long for the next update.

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Thank u for the dedication!

And i loved the length of this update.

The first part was so beautifully written their hesitation..loss of words and trying to do the right thing ...that was so well etched out and then he kissed her how sweet ..but then that irritating woman had to call and the moment just lost like that.

Then they came and again he was tongue tied seeing his 'Khushi' in her element .. i love this slow rise in attraction that is taking place here from both ends.

But again Darshana had to be a little bitch however i am glad Khushi gave back as good as she got this time round.

The sleeping part was too good Arnav is a goner for sure !😳

He better make amends for his formal praises for her ... i dont blame him for that though since he is also as new at this relationship as her ...he will make mistakes and so will she however they should start communicating more freely... the physical attraction is very much there now only if they can work on diminishing the formal tone in their talks.

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

loved it.
the way it is going.
To see the pros and cons, and understanding each other.
loved the way kushi reacted to darshana.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

just loved how khushi answered back

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

There're times when even small things that people say randomly touch a chord and turns into sour. I somehow understand K's POV. For me, the fact that Arnav shared too much about them to Darshana was a serious let down. There has to be a fine differentiation of what your share and with whom. Agreed Arnav spends almost his whole day near Darshana, but that doesn't mean he would just say too much. I think that's something people shouldn't do if there're in relationships and here, its a serious one! As far as I see, Arnav now knows K's importance in his life..atleast a bit... so I really don't get it how can he be so ignorant. Its not just he's taking her for granted or something. Its more. And I don't like it :(

I'm sure you're gonna bring that out eventually! I cant wait to read how you do that :)

Continue soon.

xox

-V

PS: Darshana seems okay till now but there's something unknown about her that doesnt give me good feeling. :|

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Loved d update
Thanx for mailing 😊

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Sorry! Had a lond comment written...suddenly it said memory full and everything vanished!!! Hell!! 😭

i think u will hav to wait untill i hunt for my lappy and write it, again!😆