Arhi: The Proposal ?? Part 9 page 97 NOTE pg 109

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

sorry my like button not working...

how can arnav be so umm insensitive that he dint gather the fact that no matter if khushi show it or not she is NOT comfortable with Darshana's presence around them...and does darshana not have some mind to leave the couple alone...for heaven's sake they were meeting after long time and she should have acted maturely and stayed at her beautiful room instead of disturbing their privacy...and seriously arnav cook

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Hate this Darshana! How can someone be so dumb as to go and live ith an engaged couple?

Love the relationship Arnav and Khushi share but Arnav needs to get his priorities right.

He needs to give less time to Darshana and more to Khushi.

Could you please make Darshana disappear? Please.

Thankyou so much for the dedication. It is a pleasure for me to read all your work.

I am sorry for the late response but I had gone on a holiday and just came back last night.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

hurreyyy!! u updated!

and oh! from jumping jack to princess?! promotion! promotion😆!!

no no!! seriously di, u dont know how awfully lucky and infinitely happy i feel when i read the lines in the beginning!! and its 2wice now!!! wohooo...thanx for the dedication!! ummmaah!!!😳

the update was awesome!! it was simply lovely!! oh dear, i myself wanted to kiss khushi😆(dont get me wrong), but y did that stupid darshna had to interrupt the perfect moment?!!!?🤢 poor arnav...

loved the way u described our khushi di!! typicalll k.h.u.s.h.i!! the jhalli who dances like a maniac, loved by every1, smiles like sunshine, carefree, yet emotional...it was hilarious to see how she backfired darshana!!!

and it was soo satisfying to see miss sophisticated envying khushi!😉

there is no way arnav should give a nick name to anybody but khushi!!😳

but yes, arnav really needs to be a lil creative while giving compliments...cook, like seriously?😆

and woohooo...the phy attraction *hoots and whistles*...finally!

hmm...and yesss! how can anybody NOT like the cozy apartment khushi lives in ?? i loved it!!

thanx for the happy reading moment!

update other one soonwa!!

and CHEERS!

Ashi😃

psst- i really want them to spent some time ALONE!

without the stupid darshna and devoid of any phone calls!!

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

im srsly feeling so sad sbout khushi... i mean there were parts i found quite adorable..but poor soul...she's getting so much hurt un knowingly by arnav...they've got so little time together and they're both unhappy:(

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Arnav seriously needs 2 get the bitterness of his own medicine...i want Arnav 2 realise dat he s hurting Khushi's sentiments...
Evn i have a doubt do Arnav and Darshana share same room when they go for trips as Arnav was thinking hard 2 leave Darshana alone and spend time with his girlfriend...
i won't blame Khushi if she rethinks abt the decision of having courtship with Arnav...
i think a serious Jeolousy track is needed for Arnav 2 realise his mistakes...
i think its always Khushi who is trying 2 wok out this relation...Khushi should gv a hard way 2 Arnav so that he realises his insensitivity and carelessness 2wards Khushi...
they need 2 spend some time 2gether vt each other and learn Arnav should learn 2 keep secrets as Khushi s special in her own way...
hope Darshana acts as a catalyst 2 increase their closeness rather than doing the opposite...

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

🤗thank you guys for the comments 😊

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Haha, I am so confused that who is right and who is wrong here? Sometimes I think Khushi over reacts to Arnav's dialogue here as he was praising her cooking skills but at the same time I also think his praises did sounded offensive. Poor Arnav & Khushi, I think best solution to this is to "TALK" out the differences and send Darshana home so that they can enjoy some private moments 😊 Update was awesome as usual, it was written exceptionally well. Superb, waiting for next eagerly. Continue soon!

Edited by PhenoixTears - 12 years ago

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Wow lovely update...hehe Khushi teasing darshana...and Arnav to wanted to laugh hehe...i don't like the way darshana is acting...aww shes upset again...i think its time they start voicing their problems to eachother and sorting it out...but Arnav better tell her he didn't mean it in the context of which she is thinking about being a cook...thanks for the pm

Jenny x

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

wow...what an update...arnav and kushi are on opposite sides of a pole...hope they dont have any misunderstandings...loved it...keep it up...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#340

loved it very much Priyo,
specially the first kiss on her cheek..
dancing and cooking part and the expression on Arnav's face.
Darshana,,,i can't understand her intentions !😔
why did she come to Khushi's place?
feel jealously towards Khushi...😲
but I like when Khushi made some tale of tiljatta and mice...to frighten her.
Arnav enjoyed the expression of Darshana😆

and now again Khushi is unhappy with him..on his comment regarding food...Khushi should talk about it...well actually about all the things that hurts her very much.They should talk about their feelings towards each other.

in a longterm relationship everybody needs some time to understand eachother...
in Arshi's case the same...
waiting for the next part...
continue soon dear.
take care.

Edited by hetaldave - 12 years ago