Virman FF- The way we go..

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⭐️ PART 1 ⭐️

Manvi on her wedding day !!

In her room

M-Kay karuuu !!

Ayush ko call b nahi Kris sktime !!

But kya kruuu !!

M RAHUL SEE SHADI nahi kr skti !!

Mujhe kush karna padeaga !!

Daddu b papa ko nahi man.a. ske !!change

Manvi kuchange soch !!

Haa !! M AYUSH !! K pass chalice jaungi !!

Donor shadi Kr lenge !!

Fir papaa k pairo meh girl Jaege !!

Yesss !! Lakhhir khoon hu Unka maaf to karna hi padeaga !!

N she wrote a letter !!

N took her car keys her purse !!

N jumpedfrom the window in her wedding dress !!

She feels free !!

Wowww !! Abh m Pune chalI jaungi !!

Aaysh k pass !!

M Aah ri hu aaysh !!

I luv u !!

********scene shift******

Virat tears in his eyes !!

It seems like he lost everything !!

His dad his love Maya !!

His passion muzic !!

Business seems burden to him !!

HE knows he has not ability like his dad had !!

He can't be like his dad !!

N under this frustration he decided to leave evrything !!

Even this world !!

N he took his car keys !!

N left !!

His eyes were red !! Full of tears !!

*****manvi****

Ayu sh Ko call kr deti hu !!

Sh3 was just about to pick her phone !!

Suddenly a truck came in fronth of her Carr !!

N sh3 lost balance of the car !!

N the truck hit her car !!

N her car roles down on the road !!

N car was full y damaged !!

Manvi was badly injured !!

Blood all over on the road n on her face !!

Truck driver came to the car !!

N a man with him !! Bhai m toh kahtab hu nikal lo !!

Police Aap gai to Lene k dene padh Jaege !!

N both ran withbthere truck !!

***after 1 hour*****

V-omggg !! Accident ???????????

He came ou5 of his car !!

Saw the car was fully damaged !!

V-omgoddd !! Yeh kya ho gya !!

Actually car puri palat gyi thi !!

Virqt saw blood all over !!

He was trying to take manvi out !! Bt all his efforts in vain !!

Then he saw a truck coming !! He stops the truck !!

V-bhaisahb plz help kijiye !! Us gaadi ka accident ho gaya h !!

Td-truck driver

Td-ooh rabba !! Chalo beta !!

By the help of some people virat was able to take manvi out of the car !!

She was all over in bl88d !!

Virat's white shirt became red !!

Td-beta !! Isse jaldi se hospital leke chalte h !!

N virat took manvvi in his arms n took her to the hospital !!

***********manvi's house**********

Manvi's dad reading her letter !!

Letter

Papa I m sorry !!

Bt m Rahul see shadi nahi kr sktI !!

M kisi aur se pyar kryi hu !!

Papa plz kabhi meri kushI k Barre meh b sochiye !!

M rahul k saath kh7sh nahi reh skti !!

*********

Daddu-dekhq madan kabhi manvi kisi khusI Janna chahi?????

Humesha tujhe apni izzat ki padhi rehti h !!

Madan-mqnvi aaisa nahi Kr skti !!

******virqat took manvi to the hospital !!

Manvi in wedding dress !! Her red dress was full of blood !!

N btwn virat saw manvvi's face !!

She was so innocent !!

Virqt put her on the stretcher !!

Td-beta !! Gaadi se ladki ka Phnom. Mila h !! Aur uska purse Mila h !!

V-mqnvi !!

Doc.-ek min. Rukiye !!

V-doctor !! Plz isse bacha lijiye !!

Doc.-ohhh my god !! Dekhiye Mr. Yeh police case h !!

V-doc. Eke patient ki Jaan khatre meh h !! Aap kaisi baat Kr 're h ???

Td-doc. Plz us bachi ko bacha lijiye !!

Td-beta !! Thand rakh !!

Doc.-aap inke Kaun lagte h !!

Jab tak inke kisi relative k sign nahi honge !! Hum operation nahi Kris skte !!

Td-beta !! Tum sign Kr do !!

Doc.-aap unke relative h !!

Td-yeh uska PATI h !

****End of part 1****

hope U all like it :)

n plz comment too !!

what's ur opinion about my story :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great concept and interesting... 😊
Plz pm me whenever u update... 😊
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⭐️⭐️PART 2⭐️
Td-yeh uske pati h !!
V-kya?????? Uncle m pati??
(fully confused)
Doc.-mr. Virat aap formalitys poori kr dijiye hum operation shuru krte h !! Doc. Left
v-uncle ! Yeh aap kya bol re h ?? M uska pati nahi hu !!
Td-beta !! Agar hum yeh nah krtw toh doc. Operation shuru nahi krte ! v-ji uncle !! Aap sahi keh rahe h !
Suddenly manvi's family arrived !
n her dad to the reception. !!
Manvi dad-md
Md-sister !! Manvi Chaudary kaha pr h??
Sis-sir ! Manvi Chaudary operation theatre meh h !!
Unka operation chal raha h !
aap 1st floor pe chale jaiyeye !!
Md-thanq sister !!
N they all went to ot !!
doc. Came out !!
Md-doctor !! How is manvi now !
doc-dekhiye abhi hum kuch keh nahi skte !! She is unconcious now !! hum unhe 48 hours ki observation meh rakhenge !!
Abhi unhe ICU meh shift kr rahe h !!
Md-doc. Manvi ko hospital kaun lekr aaye ??
Doc-ohh !! Unke husband !!
Seriously agar thodi si b der ho jati hum manvi ko bcha nahi paate !! Md-husband !!
Doc. Manvi...
Daddu-madam !! Shayad vahi ladka h !!
Md-par vo h kaha???
Doc-there he is !!
MD goes to him !!
Md-beta !!
Virat turned !!
Md-(tears)
Beta !! Mujhe maaf kr do !!
Virat still confused !!
V-aap...??
Md-beta !! Manvi ka dad !!
V-namaste uncle !
Uncle actually Maine jo b bola vo manvi ki jaan bachane k liye bola !! Aur m manvi ka pati...
MD cuts !! Beta mujhe maaf kr do !!
Mujhe manvi ko samajhna chahia tha !! Mujhe humesha manvi ki khushi se zada apni izzat ki fikar thi !!
Par abh nahi m abh sirf manvi k Barre meh sochunga !!
Beta !! Mujhe tum dono k pyar ko samajhna chahia tha !!
V-but unc... !!
Md-nahi beta !! Abh tum bilkul tension mat lo !
tumhare pyar se upar kuch nahi h !!
Sirf meri zidd ki wajah se manvi ghar se bhaagi !! Aur uski yeh haalat Hui !! V-uncle !! Plz aap Apne aap ko sambhaliye !!
Manvi's chachi-mc
mc-haye rabba !! Inna sona munda !! Vaari jaava !! Kya pasand h manvi ki !! V-(confused) uncle !! Aunty !!
Plz meri baat suniye !!
Sister comes******
Sis-manvi Chaudary ko hosh aah gya h !!
Aap unse mil sakte h !!
Manvi mom-mm
Mm-chaliye na !! Manvi se mil lete h !!
Md-aao beta !! Tum b manvi se mil lo !!
V-but uncle...!
N they all went inside the room !!
Mm-manvi !! N she ran to here !!
Mqnvi !! Meri bachi tu thik toh h??
M-maaa !! Maa m thik hu !!
Mm-ek thappad lagaungi tujhe !!
Kya samajhti h tu Apne aap ko??
Bahut badi ho gyi??
Agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh !!
Agar vo na hota toh !!
M-kaun maa??
Md-vahi jiske liye tu ghar se bhagi thi !!
M-papa !! Pa...vo !!
Md-hahahha !! Vo vo kya kr ri h !!
Milna nahi h usse ??
M-kisse papa??
N MD brought virat inside !!
M-kaha h papa??
Mm-manvi !! Masti mat kr !!
M-maa m masti nahi kr ri hu !!
Kaha h vo??
Md-suman bahar chalte h !! Bache Sharma re h shayad !!
M-papa mamma !! Aap yeh kisko le aye h !!
M nahi janti isse !!
Kaun h yeh !
Bt they left !!
M-kaun ho tum ????
V-(smiles)
M-yeh smile baad meh bikherna !! Yeh btao tum ho kaun??
V-coming towards her !!
Vahi !! Jo tumhe yaha leke aaya !! Jab tum mujhse Milne k liye bhag k aah ri thi !! M-what the hell !!
Tum bol kya re ho yeh !!
V-vahi toh m soch ra hu !! M bol kya raha hu !!
M-hello !! Mr tum samajh kya re ho Apne aap ko??
V-log toh virat samajhte h !!
Tum btao tum Kya kahogi??
M-chep !!
God !! Yr plz btaooo !! Tum kaun ho??
V-acha now serious. !!
My name is virat vadera !!
N U manvi Chaudary ryt !!
M-hmmm !!!
V-madam !!! Aapka road pr accident ho gya tha !
M aapko hospital leker aaya ! N aap khoon se latpat thi !!
N doc. Bina kisi k sign se operations karne se mana kr diya tha !!
N so jo sardaarji the mere saath unhone doc. Ko bol diya !!
That i m ur husband !!
M-super shocked ???????
Kya???? husband !!
V-Maine thodi bola h??
M-yr !! Fir b??
V-ohhh !! Madam !! Virat vadera se Shadi krne k liye ladkiyo ki line lag jati h !! Aur tum !!
M-tum kya?/
handsome ho toh sochte ho k har ladki tumhare charm se fas jaegi !! V-matlab tum sochti ho !! M handsome hu !!
M-vo...vo..
Acha vo chodo !! Age kya hua??
V-n he tells her everything !!
M-hahahaha !! Omg !!
Mere ghar wale b ullu ban gye !!
V-(smiling)
M-ohh god !!
Aaauuuchhh !!
V-manvi ?? Manvi Kia hua tumhe??
M-ouchhh !!
V-doc. Doc. !!
Doc-ji mr. Virat !!
V-virat manvi ko pain ho ra h !!
Doc-aap bahar jayiye !!
M dekhta hu !!
Virat left !!
Doc. Came out !
Dekhiye ghabrane wali koi baat nahi h !!
Acually manvi baithne walo meh se nahi lagti !!
N abhi usko thoda dhyan rakhna hoga apna !!
Md-thanq dr !!
V-uncle !! Abh m chalta hu !!
Md-beta kaha??
Tum kahi nahi ja re ho !!
Tum kuch dinn humare saath hi rahoge !!
V-bt uncle !!
Md-nahi !! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna !!
V-(smiles) okay !! Uncle !!
After 1 week manvi was now discharged !!
******END OF PART 2******
thanx for comments :)
Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
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😊😊 PART 3 😛😉manvi at home !!
In drawing room !!
md-dekhiye abh Maine soch liya h !! Jald se jald manvi aur virat ki Shadi kra dete h !! V-spits water !!
Kya???????
M-Papa but...
Md-nahi beta !! Abhi m tumhe alag kaise rakh skta hu !!
Both manvi n virat in shock !!
At ni8 virat was sleeping !!
Manvi came to her !!
M-virat !!
V-hmmm !!
M-raat ko ready rehna !!
V-kyon??
M-Hume bhagna h !!
V-kya???????
M-virat !! M ayushman se pyar krti hu !!
V-toh??
M-m tumse Shadi nahi kr skti !!
V-kyon Kia kami h mujhme !!
M-yahi k m tumse pyar nahi krti !!
V-acha??
m-yesss !!
V-hmm !!
M-virat be serious !! M ayushman se pyar krti ju !!
virat hum bhag re h !!
v-tum bhago !! M toh nahi jaunga !!
M-virat????
V-manviii ??
M-hahaha !! Raho yahi !! Jab ghar walo ko pta chalega k tumne unse jhoot bola !! Aur unka dil jeeta !! Toh itne dance padenge bygod !!
v-scared !!
Kya???
M-hmm !!
Rehna h raho !! M toh bhag ri hu !!
V-yr manvi ek baat btaoo !! Tum pt usha ki behn ho kya??
M-kyon??
V-life meh kitna bhagogi yr !!
M-virat !! M vahi krti hu jo mera dil chahta h !!
V-manvi yeh san bahut ghatiya cheze hoti h !! Yeh bhagna h n all !!

M-shhh !! Yr tum kitne bade phattu ho yr !!

V-manvi hum nahi bhag re h !! Understand !!

M-hmmm (smiling naughtyly)

Hmmm !! Dekha jaega !!

Par beta bhagungi toh tumhare saath hi (slowly)

V-what ?? Kuch kaha tumne !!

M-n...na...nahii !!

Okay !! Bye good ni8 !!

V-good ni8 !!

Manvi left !!

V-ajeeb ladki h yr !!

M toh kal subah sabko sach bta dunga !! Aur yaha se chala jaungi !! Manvi outside the room listening to what he saying !!

M-beta virat !! Bhool jao k m tumhe aaise Jane dungi !!

Mr phatoo !! Tum abhi manvi ko jante hi kaha ho !!

*****after 1 hour****

Manvi comess in his room !!

slowly n sitted near him on his bed !!

He was sleeping !!

Manvi waking him up !!

M-viraatt !!

Virat !!

V-kaun h yr !!

M-m hum phatoo !!

V-tummm?/

M-shhh !! Loudspeaker laga hua h kya !! Dheere bolo !!

V-tummm yaha kya kr ri ho??

M-doodh (milk)

V-(confused)

Doodh !! Iss time???

M-ha vo vo ...vo ha chachi neh kaha k virat ko de aaun !!

V-ohh !! Acha !!

Thik h rakh do !!

M-(unusually smiling)

Okay !!

V-(ye itna weird behave kyon kr ri h !! )

N he again went to sleep but manvi again comes !!

M-virat !!

V-uurrghhh !! Abh kya h manvi??

M-doodh pe lena nahi toh thanda ho jaega !!

V-okay !! Bye !

He again was just going to sleep but manvi again comes !

V-abh kya h??? (irritated)

M-hum nahi bhag re h !! Okay !!

Bye !!

V-thank god !! Akal toh ayi !!

Pheuuu !! Abh good ni8 !!

M-good ni8 !!

N virat drinks the whole milk !!

N slept !!

**********

It was not 2 pm !! Everyone slept !!

N manvi the great !!

Came into virat's room from the window !!

N started dancing !!

M-virat !! Tum nahi jante !! Kisse paala pada !!

Kyonki jo m bolti hu vo m karti hu !!

Aur jo nahi bolti ! Ohhh balle balle !!

Vo definitely karti hu !!

hahah abhi Tera kya hoga kaliya !!

She went near virat !!

Thathathathatha !! Virat vadera !! The muscular body !! Hhaha but dimag !! Phatoo !! Isko shayad pata nahi tha yeh kisse panga le raha h !! Manvi Chaudary se !!

M doodh leke aayi aur pe b liya !!

Bechara !!

Abh manvi kisi tarah isko ghar se Bahr leke Jana h !!

She started struggling to pick him up !! But she failed !!

M-omggg !! N she slowly slaps him on his arm !!

Chup chap chal nahi skte the !!

Neend ki goliya mujhe bhari padh ri h !!

N she bought her daadaji's wheel chair !!

M-ahaaa !! Kya idea aya h !!

(she cover him with a blanket !!

His face with a monkey cap !!

N atlast she could make him sit on the wheel chair !!

N she packed his clothes !!

In a bag !!

Took him !! N ran towards the main gate !!

Watchman-w

W-manvi madam !! Itni raat ko kaha ja ri h !!

M-vo...vo DJ ki tabiyat kharab h !!

so hospital leke ja ri hu !!

W-kya ha inhe !!

M-zada bak bak mat kro !! Gaadi ki Chaabi do !!

W-thik h madam !!

m-vaha khade khade kya dekh re ho !!

Help krooo?/

W-ji !! Aya madam !!

M-aur ha kisi ki neend kharab mat krna !!

N she drove towards the railway station !!

M-virattt !! Virat uthooo !!

Omggg !! Abh isko kya hua????

M-virattt !! Virattt !!

N she stops the car !!

N took out that neend ki goli ka dabba !!

******written on that*******

Overdose leads to death !!

N she super shocked !!

M-omggg !! Yeh mar toh nahi gya !!

Hey bhagwan yeh kya ho gya !!

N she went out of the car !!

N started crying !!

It was about 5 pm !!

Manvi still crying !!

virat atlast wakes up !!

N came towards manvi with a confused face !!

N put his hand on her shoulder !!

Manvi rose her head n saw virat standing !!

She screemed like hell !!

M-plz mujhe chod do !! Maine tumhe jaan boojh kar nahi mara !!

Vo...tum bhagne k liye tayiyar ni the islia Maine tumhare doodh meh neend ki goliya Mila di !!

Plz mujhe kuch mat krooo !!

V-whattt?????

Manvi are U mad !!

M-nahiii !! Plz mujhe mat maaro !!

V-manvi m zinda hu !

Aur tumne itna drama create kiya mujhe bhagane k liye !!

Ohhh god !!

m-tum zinda ho !! Mujhe laga tum over dose se mar gye h !!

V-uhhrrrghhh !! Manvi !! Yeh tumne Kia kiya !!

Hey bhagwan kyon mujhe iss pagal ladki ke saath chod diya aapne !!

V-manvi !! Are U serious???

Tumne mujhe Apne saath bhagane k liye itna drama create kiya !!

M-aur kya krti (crying)

Tum toh ek no. K phatooo ho !!

v-(feels insulted) ohhh !! God manvi tum tujhe janti kitna ho?? Means yr !! Just think once koi aaise hi kisi k saath bhag jata h ?? I mean remember m a boy !!

M-toh ladke ho toh m Kya kru !!

Tumne meri jaan bachai...

V-vahi !! N tumhara itna bura accident hua tha !! Aur tumhe pt usha banne ka shok h !! M-(silently listening)

V-hello !! Madam ??? Kya????

M-m yeh soch ri hu !! K tum roz aaise hi pakate ho ya aj koi special occasion h ?? Yr !! M toh ayush k saath settle ho jaungi !!

Tumhare saath jo ladki rahegi vo kitna pareshan yogi bygod !!

Vaise ek baat h !! Smart toh tum ho !! Ache khase ghar k b lagte ho !! Tumhari gf toh hogi pakka !! V-(being angry)

Tumse matlab???

M-omggg !! Itna gussa !! Chod k chali gyi kya??

V-(giving angry looks)

M-ohh god !! Yr aaise mat Dekho !!

M ayushman ko chodke tumhare saath permanently bhag jaungi !! v-(trying to laugh) yr !! Tumhe sharam nahi ATI ek abla ladke se beech sadak se flirt kr ri ho !! M-(smiles n gives him a funny sa look)

Plz bhagwan k liye mujhe chod do !!

M-pointing her finger towards him !!

"tujh jaisi cheez ho m bhagwan k liye kaise chod sakti hu !!

V-(walk from there)

By god !! U R mad !! Thank god yeh musibat kisi aur k palle padh ri h

m-what ????

Tum mujhe musibat bol re ho??

n he started running !!

N manvi sharting chasing him !!

N she moves towards the road !!

N a car was coming towards manvi !!

But virat ran towards her n both fall on other side of the road !! virat on the top of manvi !!

M-(closed her eyes)

V-(smiling still on the top of her)

M-opens her eyes n widen up seeing virat on the top of her !! M-virattt !!

V-kya hua???

M-uthooo ??

V-(biting his tongue) ohhh !! M sorry !

M-its okay !!

V-tum dekh ni chalti ho !!

Maza Ata h har time thukte hue !!

M-tum ho na mujhe bchane k liye !!

v-sudhrogi nahi na tum??

M-no way !!

V-smilesss !!

M-ohh !! Chaloo nahi toh subah ho gayi toh sab Hume dhoond lenge !! V-manviii !!

M-abh kya???

V-mat karoo yeh sab??

M-virat !! Abh lecture Dena band kroo !!

Aur chalo !!

V-okay !!

Both drove by car to the station !!

N both sorted in the train !!

V-manviii !!

Flight se chale jate !! Train ??

M-ha !! Raat ko flight book Krti !!

Kingfisher toh mere papa ki h na!!

V-really?????

M-ullu !! Mazaak kr ri hu !!

V-abh ek kaam krna !!

Mujhe pune chodke tum Apne ghar chale Jana !!

V-just smiling !!

M-acha !! Tumne btaya ni !! Tumhari koi Gf h kya??

V-glaring at her

M-oppsss !! Sorry but yr fir se angry young man toh mat banoo !!

Itne smart ho handsome ho gussa suit nahi krta !!

V-smike) acha??

M-aur kya??

vaise hum friends bann skte h !

Agar tum chaho toh !!

V-hmm !!

Okay !!

N both shake hands !!

V-vaise ek baat h !!

Maine tum jaisi ladki apni life meh nahi Dekhi !!

Matlab tum ho kya yr !! Bilkul alag !!

Kaash mujhe b tumhari jaisi ladki mil jati !!

Life hi kuch hoti

M-hmmm !! Agar meri life meh ayushman nahi hota toh shayad m b tumse pat jati !! V-(raising his eyebrows)

Really ??

M-phattoo !! Par tumse ladkiya patengi hi nahi !!

v-kyon??

M-matlab !! Tum kitne phattoo !! Tumhe ladkiya patani ki wahi nahi h !! V-kya?? Wahi kya??

M-wahii !!

V-wahii kya??

M-rehne do !! Tumhe toh kuch b nahi pta !!

V-okay !!

M-yr !! Tum kitne boring ho !!

V-acha !!

Toh kya karu aapke entertainment k liye !!

M-dance karoo !!

V-kya???

Yaha !! Train meh??

M-ha !!

V-vaise tumne ghar pe koi letter choda h??

M-ha !! voice mail

v-kya likh k??

M-yahi k tumne mujhe kidnap kr liya h !!

V-(spitting water) kya??????

R U mad !!

M'bachpan se !!


******END OF 3rd part ******

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
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hey i read this before in fb nd myeduniya.. grt going dear... nd please evn update ur lost love of virman in this forum...
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omg !!!!! dear, this is seriously so amazing yr .
i am loving it to the core yr .
please continue soon .
thanks for the pm dear .
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Nice OS..! read 3 chapters...loved maanvi;s attitude...continue soon!
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Hey dear
superb update
Now it is interesting to what happen next
waiting 4 ur next update...
update soon
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hope U all are liking this story...
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awesome update vibhu 😊 😛

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