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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: farha5556
who is edward?hate kushi for some reason and arnav too.kushi thought she will be the reason why he is breathing but i think arnav has two sides one taking from kushi a evil one and one devil or nice one ,hope to see that soon.very tragic one and what arnav do?i think arnav knows about kushis father.continue soon.now i want to know what will happen in future.continue soon.

Me writing Edward was a typing Edward, I meant Arnav...🥱... sorry about that in the future I will try to proof read whatever I update😳

I get hating Khushi, but why Arnav...? Yeah, the chapter was meant to be tragic, but no worries their is a very bright future ahead.. and yes Arnav does have two sides... Also, the letter was NOT about Khushi's father.. and I shall update the next chapter as zoo as possible😊

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

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Guys as I am moving the stories track further, I would like all of you to give your suggestions as to how I should move the story forward. I have the general idea though your input would help A LOT. Also I would like to clear the speculation that the guy in the letter was Khushi's father. He is NOT. Its a mystery for no😉

Please guys DO comment, it's very encouraging, even criticism would help and I am not just saying that. If I manage to get 15 comments from different readers, then a long update would be waiting for you on the 14th of February...Please guys I need the motivation😊

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Gunjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: aaaziiz

Thank you so much, although I am sorry that my story was sad for you, I AM flattered that I managed to make this chapter, emotional and tragic.
As to find out what was in the lette and what Arnav did keep reading the story, keep reading the story..😉

oh...no need to be sorry infact i am amazed at your writing skills because mostly i don't have tears even after reading the most sad and tragedic stories written by experienced and famous writers or watching saf scenes it is very rare.

i i'll surely keep reading..😊

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sansu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

hi!!!😃

just caught up eith your story...

you have a beautiful style of writing..

the last part was indeed very sad 😭...u made the emotions on both the sides very clear...

waiting for more!!!😊

tell me when you update!!!

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ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

the up seems good but as i havent read the whole f f i need time

plz cont soon and pm me

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sansu
hi!!!😃
just caught up eith your story...
you have a beautiful style of writing..
the last part was indeed very sad 😭...u made the emotions on both the sides very clear...
waiting for more!!!😊
tell me when you update!!!

Reading comments from new reader's is always, a treat hope you keep on giving your feedback:)

Your compliment just made my day, I really wished that I would be able to convey the emotions of the characters in the fanfics i am writing... Surely I willl pm you as soon as I update😳

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ

oh...no need to be sorry infact i am amazed at your writing skills because mostly i don't have tears even after reading the most sad and tragedic stories written by experienced and famous writers or watching saf scenes it is very rare.
i i'll surely keep reading..😊

That was a really sweet thing for you to say, as someone who LOVES to write I really want my readers to feel a fraction of what the characters in the story are feeling. This fanfic was written by me, because there was this story that I read that was really emotional and made me cry. I hated that story because the characters were cruel and really really stupid. Though the write was AMAZING and had that power in her words. I have always wished to have that kind of writing style, but that is impossible because its extremely rare that someone does. Thus I decided to try my own hand at writing to build up my skills. Your feedback is extremely precious😊

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the up seems good but as i havent read the whole f f i need time
plz cont soon and pm me

No problem, I will let you know as soon as possible😛

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sansu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: aaaziiz

Reading comments from new reader's is always, a treat hope you keep on giving your feedback:)

Your compliment just made my day, I really wished that I would be able to convey the emotions of the characters in the fanfics i am writing... Surely I willl pm you as soon as I update😳

u'll sure hear from me regularly...

u're writing is indeed very beautuiful...

looking forward for the next update...how soon can you make it dear?..