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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: utthra1208
nice update...nice portrayal of the characters and emotions...
waiting for the next chap...

Thank you, the next chapter would be up soon😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: casker
Akash is not Kushi's brother. She is Anjali's daughter and Akash Garima's.

Akaash IS Khushi's brother, and also Garima and her husband are very much in love😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: farha5556
wow loved it,nk s character sketch was also superb.will miss nk.ohh arnav is back,hope he get through the heart break.continue soon.

NK will be back with a bang, I think , just hope that I don't change the course of the story. For now, I think I should keep him as one of the narrators but it is not absolute that he will be there in Khushi and Arnav's life😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi
Really loved it ! Arnie is bck

I hope you like the climax chapter even better😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86
An over obsessed man is dangerous. An over obsessed Arnav Singh Raizada is downright lethal. How the hell is Khushi suppose to learn and appreciate the phrase 'absence makes your heart grow fonder'? It's like she feels obligated to love him. That's not love, that's duty. You are doing an excellent job in creating these characters that are evolving so rapidly yet they seem to be stationed at the same place when it comes to acceptance of each other. Beautiful work :)

Glad to see a new a reader😊

Arnav has done a lot for her, and as to why she should REALLY love him would be explained in later chapters. At this phase of the story I completely agree with you that Arnav should not be loved back by Khushi.

Reading your wonderful comment was truly a delight. Hope you keep on reading and giving you two cents about what you think of the story👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: kamtokdin
just a thought. over-possessiveness is never easy to deal with, esp if you were at the receiving end. its like water to plant; too little, it would wilt n die, too much, it would drown.

hopefully, as arnav grew older, he would learn to control and balance it with real show of love rather than drowning kushi with posessions and arrogance.

kushi will also hopefully learnt that possessiveness and love are closely intertwined, two sides of the same coin. belonging to some else, body and soul, is part of that equation.

giving and taking.

i guess both need to grow up and find his/her own person first, to be able to love each other in the true sense of the word.

Yes I personally believe that over-possessiveness is too suffocating. Arnav is WAY too obsessed with Khushi. Arnav will evolve too as a character, if he wants to be happy. Though it won't happen over night, it'll be a journey. He's arrogant too, but I guess not so much when it comes to Khushi. Though he too finds it difficult to open up to her fully.

Also , Khushi is the only one who can deal with Arnav's possessive nature. Love and possession are closely intertwined, though I think there is a limit to it. Don't you think Arnav is being unfair in using his power to get what he wants. Its totally unethical. Khushi is already a mature and emotionally intelligent character in a lot of ways. Atleast compared to Edward, but yes she eventually has to completely fall for Edward. It's a love story after all.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ
Nice update
So the big tradegy is going to take place soon...waiting
Nk is leaving !! Nice I was wondering would he be there in the adult life of Arnav and Khushi ?
Continue soon

The big tragedy is coming up very soon. After that its their adult life. NK is a character that I have grown fond of, so as of right now my plan is to keep him a part of the story. Though I am not exactly sure I will be able to fit him in the story later on. Keep on reading and commenting and you will get your answers😛