SwaRon SS:Jodi Maker VS Dil Breaker [Completed]

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

amazing update Tanya👏👏

umeed ki swayam ko akal jld milegei😃

n 50 LIke

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0love it

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Shona,Shona,Shona...darling u improve so much after every upd8 I mean how can some1 write sooo well ?

Luvd the Upd8 <3

Luv u more <3

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

nice n romantic update..
sharon fell for swayam d dil breaker..😲 sharon wishes he doesnt break her heart i hope he doesnt do dat..
will b for nxt update

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

This is another new one for me Tanya god kitne SS, OS and FF are you writing at one time girl.

Nice concept and love how Sharon decided to teach dil breaker a lesson but poor girl she actually is now is love with Swayam whereas for him its just lust. Hope he doesn't break her heart now. Thnx for the PM..update soon. 😊

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Afshan Yasmeen

@Afshan9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Hi Tanya...

Thanx for the PM..

Loved the 3rd chapter..😆

While going through it I thought that both Swayam and Sharon r falling for each other... But the last line of the chapter took my breath away for a moment...💔

Love for her and Lust for him...💔 Hope he doesn't break Sharon's heart...😕

Can't dream Swayam in such a role.. Plz enhance Swayam's true side and true feelings of his for Sharon...

Keep writing...👍🏼

Waiting for ur update eagerly, don't forget to PM me...

Lots of best wishes...👍🏼

Take care... Bye...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

loved d update..
sharon s in love wit swayam

but not swayam..
their romance was out of world

its love for sharon but lust of swayam...
just lust for swayam no..
don want this swayam make him into lover boy swayam..
hope he doesnt break sharon's heart too...
waitin for next part soon update..

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Thanks for the pm :-) awesome update

Nikki <3

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Hey Tanya!!

Another cool update!!

Sharon in love with Swayam!!!yeah!

They even made love!!

It was hot nd well penned!

But for swayam this is only lust!!

Hope he too loves sharon nd doesn't break her heart!

Love the pace of your ss!

Do update soon nd thanks for the PM:)

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Nt liking this swayam :(
nyc update

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

fantastic update

but it really surprised me that sharon falls for swayam after clearly knowing that he is a big flirt or say dil breaker but as u described the great ishq in those beautiful line of Ghalib i also have something

" ye ishq nahi aashan bas itna samajh lijey ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai"

ab dekhte hain kaun doobta hai aur kis ki naiya paar lagti hai 😆

update soon thanks 4 pm