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Shazeia

@shaz007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

I liked the way you wrote about the conflict in Arnav's mind and how his thoughts kept going back to khushi words of Earn it.

An awesome update

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

hope some more alone-sessions like this will tell u how...

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renee

@renee27

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

I think Krani this is one of the best chapters of his story... It has a prose like feel to it...

You have writers who can express deep emotions through their words... and there are writers whose every line you can picturize in your mind...

The sea, the conflicts, the awareness, the realization, everything so beautifully and vividly described...

Loved it would be an understatement...

I will say its one of your best works 😊

P.S: Ohh yeah...!!!! Forgot... CONGRATULATIONS for THREAD 6... !!!!!!! 👏🥳

Edited by renee27 - 12 years ago

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Shailesh jain

@shaileshjn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

i am smitten-ed by the way u have written this story ...

truly amazing ...

i missed this ff after part 18 ...i did not get any notification on updates ...

pls say ur usual updating time ,so that i can check for updates ...

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sara arif

@Saaraa.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

The way you write is beyond amazing.

Congratulations for the 6th thread.

Finally an update .

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madhurima.devu

@madhurima.devu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Nice update... Waited for long time for the update..

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imli95

@imli95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

ooo...very nice update...hmmm i loved it...👍🏼

the way u have described each n every feeling of arnav...it was just superb...👏

loved the way khushi was playing with the water😛...

but will she get trap in the sea due to high tide?😕😭

i hope she knows how to swim...or else no problem...arnav hai na!!!😃

hope arnav gets some brain...n start using logic before behaving with khushi...🤢

update the next soon..😊

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: imli95
ooo...very nice update...hmmm i loved it...👍🏼
the way u have described each n every feeling of arnav...it was just superb...👏

loved the way khushi was playing with the water😛...
but will she get trap in the sea due to high tide?😕😭
i hope she knows how to swim...or else no problem...arnav hai na!!!😃

hope arnav gets some brain...n start using logic before behaving with khushi...🤢
update the next soon..😊

How about Arnav saving Khushi from that high tide??? I think something should happen that makes Arnav realize his feelings for Khushi!!!! He needs to sort out her priorities and see Khushi as an equal to himself and know that he indeed has strong feelings for her.