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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Dis story is rlly different frm wat i've been reading.. Like u said abt its slow pace.. Bt i kinda like it..
It feels more natural den made up..
More real den fiction.. Maybe dis is wat provides it a distinction..:)
I luv d way anjali n shyam n nani make khushi comfortable.. Although arnav is xpected to do a lot bt maybe he still needs to get d fact dat he cn't rule ovr each n evry thng n maybe he needs to digest d fact dat no matter wat he cn't run away frm reality..
It was nice to read d chp wen khushi vent out all her frustation.. Her pain n her anger..
Arnav needed a dose of his own medicine..;)
bt maybe now he can change or atleast take a few steps towrds tryy n making it wrk..
Maybe it wud be lovely to read few good arhi moments jst simple ones though.. Nt all of dose in luv sorts.. Jst a sweet small convo. Will do:)
waiting for d nxt part..
Update soon:)

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ispkkndarshi

@ispkkndarshi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

nice update.. I like the way how u deeply involve in the characters as u write.. it gives a clear view of their confused views.. update soon

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vandana1965

@vandana1965

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

nice update. i like it how you portray their feelings. thanks

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reshamc

@reshamc

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

What have you done to me????

It's the 4th time in a day that I am reading this chapter!!! 😃

I love this FF and all your chapters have always been par excellence, but personally I feel this one is the best chapter till date.

The way Arnav introspects his actions.

Th way he keeps looking over his shoulder to see Khushi smile.

How he has unintentionally started thinking of how to earn Khushi's forgiveness.

The little flashback of his teacher.

Him sitting on the beach, playing with the sand.

Him looking at Khushi as she plays in the sea.

The way all his thoughts keep going back to Khushi's words of "Earn It" and how despite himself, he is thinking "HOW".

^^ All these scenes passed my mind like an actual movie!! I LOVED IT.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Krani...this is a treat... 3 chapters together...

With the fight that they are in...it feels like you have taken away a superficial layer of skin and we are looking at their wounds.

Arnav is the way he is because of nature and nurture both and when he is sitting on the sand, loosening his tie, letting the wind blow thru his hair...his mind chaotic with thoughts of Khushi...not being able to get her and her words out of his head...it is like a perfect storm in his mind. He is now aware of Khushi...she has risen in stature as equal.

I am really feeling sorry and sad for Arnav. When introducing Arnav and NK childhood, he seemed so alone and shut away and now with most of his family liking Khushi...and that is as it should be because she is good...he still feels alone...a position he has staked out but lonely as always. Will Khushi see the wounds underneath?

She too keeps looking at him and I am pretty sure is as aware of him...but now she is not interested in trying hence his stature is reduced.

Want more!!!!!

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samster03

@samster03

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

As usual, rocking update buddy !! Arnav's introspection about his behavior to khushi and her outburst is beautifully written..hats off to you ! :) and now he doesnt know how to earn her forgiveness !

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Awesome update...lets see how will arnav able to eran her forgivness...

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Ohh K..,,,,Such a visual treat this update was...I could imagine as if the entire scene was being played out before me on a 70 mm screen.

Absolutely LOVED it... It will be interesting to see how he actually earns her forgiveness. The fact that he is willing to consider it, that in its self soothes my heart.

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

read the missed parts from 28 till 32

loved all the updates, very well written.

wonder how is he going to woo his wife, first of all he should understand what he wants from this marriage, be clear about his thoughts and feelings. that will solve his 50% of problems.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

You are awesome in giving a visual image of a scene...very beautifully written...introspection...this will help the individual to make corrective steps in his life...I wish arnav also would realize his mistake and start taking corrective steps in his relation...I am happy he started thinking How to earn forgiveness...would love to see how he is going to woo his wife back...

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