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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

congo on a new thread...may u many more...nyc update nd i love d fact dat u shw d transitn of emotns so beautifuly

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Hi Krani

I love your story

I have been reading of late

You write really well

dont bother pming me

i will keep a look outi know the pain of pms

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Krani, the update was great! I could actually visualize the beach, Arnav sitting in sand, Khushi laughing and everything!
Good to know you still have conscience ASR! And though he said in last update that he doesn't need anybody's forgiveness, I can see he is actually trying to think of how to earn it!

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

brilliant update dear...

n congratz 4 da new thread dear...

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Swetha Reddy

@swekus

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

good one... update soon plz

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

WOW thread 6 already? Congratulations! 🥳

And Krani, this chapter was beautifully written. I could see the whole scene being played out in front of me, on a big movie screen no less! I seriously loved the way you wrote the chapter. Hardly any dialogues were exchanged, and yet so much happened.

I love how this FF has so much of Arnav's point of view. I really really like reading his point of view. Now we all know he's no ordinary guy, but for some reason, the way you describe his feelings, makes him such an average guy...in a good way, of course! And I cannot tell you how much it makes sense. This chapter was a lovely example of that.

Do update soon. I'm truly addicted to this story and cannot wait for the next part. Seriously. I'm dying to know what'll happen next.

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

u are too good with words...as always great update...waiting for more...

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Congrats on the new thread!

Brilliant! Liked the beach settings- On one hand, there was Khushi enjoying on the beach and there was Arnav... lost in his thoughts about life and his relationship-reminscing at times. I could picture a setting sun closing in on his thoughts to where to start.He misses her- he hates to see her away from himself and now willing to make it work just to have her near (of course, that's not the reason that he's chosing to believe) but that's what his heart tells him. I liked how her senses overshadowed his mind. How she was laughing, what she would be doing- Arnav observes her closely.

Edited by ElenaElenor - 12 years ago