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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey must acknowledge that this is a brilliant piece of ff...have been hooked o it for the past three days n i must say this story is so unique and potrays arhi relationship so well that it seems so realistic..the other characters are well sketched out too but u know my heart goes out to khushi she is so fiesty independent n yet so in love n Arnav can i have him for myself he is in toxicating...i am so glad icame across this ff n i m super glad i am n india forums ...love you.keep writing n keeP us updated :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update... cant wait for the next one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww..I want an "Arnavji" hug too...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
a bit funny emotional n romantic too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always lovd their cute fights...
Lovd this update... Awesm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.
I loved their fight and also the cute makeup.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Because i loved the update i'll forget about the fact tht there's none of ur awesome precaps today :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, a gem of an update, seriously. You portrayed perfectly amidst all the lightheartedness of the kissing deal, the actual crux of the matter in their relationship... How these two people, with vastly different ideologies are dealing with their own emotions. For Arnav, he hasn't realized how much really he is committed already. And of course Khushi has no idea of the depth of feelings Arnav has developed for her. Her emotions are based on what she has she learnt previously from him. Until & unless Arnav himself realizes what he is in for this time with Khushi, there is no way Khushi will realize either.

Having said that, it was great to see Khushi demanding her space & position in this relationship as she has already made the biggest compromise of all, of agreeing to a no strings attached relationship against her basic principles. (Love does rule over everything else) But what was even more heartening was to see Arnav not wanting to fight with Khushi at all over anything & acknowledging his lack of experience of an equal rights relationship & apologizing for the same...

Khushi immediately forgiving Arnav & seeking solace in Arnav's arms, her ultimate home was beautifully depicted :)

Btw, I was really hoping to see Arnav overhear Payal talk about the groom hunting part for Khushi I just wanted him to see his reaction to that, knowing how badly he had reacted when he had jumped wrongly about NK & Khushi... They weren't even dating then...

Also, wanted him to hear Anjali's comments about the sale of Nikunja & worrying about Khushi's sadness because of that.

Hoping you have planned something later for these revelations...

Loved the update. No problem about the precap, I just hope you will be able to update the next update on time, knowing your busy schedule.

P.S. I am so glad that Arnav finally told her who had altered her outfits, hope to see parading around in them for the pleasure of his eyes only. 😳
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i thought arnav was the shatir one but it looks like that khushi is one step ahead of him! lol wat a plan! faking fainting in the room! im sure arnav heartbeats did stop beating for some mere fractions of a second seeing her like this! it was funny when he was light-headed seeing her like this! who would have thought that the great ASR might have some fainting sensations seeing baby gupta in this state! love!!!!! such a complicated thing!

super appreciate the fact that arnav did realise he was being a bit too bossy and appologised for it! finally he is realising that between a couple that decisions should be taken mutually it can never be his or her way! OMG can the guy get any better!!!! but the lack to commit himself to any lifelong relationship like marriage does bug me! its high time he takes their relationship to the next level (N i do not mean the physical level) and give her some securities for the future or he might eventually lose her! n sometimes i really think that he is a bit to pigheaded to let his mind accept wat his heart is feeling!

n loved the way anjali explained the situation to khushi about the selling of nikunja! anjali genuinely cares for khushi and wondering wat will be her reaction when she ll come to know that her nanad is the one for her chote!!!

oye hoye, he wants to see her in the outfits he specifically modified for her! HIS INCLINATIONS! someone is getting very possessive already!

the update was truly fabulous and very beautifully written Farah. hats off to u! loved the way it was about commitments and the expectations that tag along with it! really enjoyed reading this chapter

hoping u wont make me wait very long for the next update and today u did not give the precap:( plz plz plz make the next one soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update!! glad they talked and Arnav realized part of the problem :)

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