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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#861

Hey!

Well written.

Intense many atimes.

Exciting.

Tension building up.

Passionate moments between the ever beautiful and fiesty Gupta and the ever charming yet storm like man that we all love ... Raizada. 😉😉😉

Khushi's behaviour really made me smile. Bless her. Only she could do something like to Arnav 😆

They seem to tease one another a lot and I love that about them. Perhaps Arnav moreso than Khushi. On top of that, he tends t be much bolder in the way he goes about teasing her ... sexy and daring ... sure is!

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#862

it was awesome one late but worth reading

im waiting to see how they balance them in their relationship

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#863

this is a complicated relationship they are in

waiting to see how they manage to deal with their differences

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#864

oh thank goodness arnav apologized, I was freaking out here when the fight went on and on.

khushi is the most adorable thing but arnav makes her character sexy.

I really enjoyed the last bit , just holding him close, him holding her back. hat was perfection!

love
sonia

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ENLIGHTENED1

@ENLIGHTENED1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#865

humm arnav ji is sudhrefing now

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#866

good update...the way you have shown so many emotions in just maybe half an hour or so of their time together was brilliant. You kept us hooked.

I really felt for khushi in this part...she is smart n way quick with arnav. Her prank of fainting was heights...she even made fun of arnav ...that must have hit the nerve...she ran from there ...loved the child in her...

the talk about her prince charming brought out all suppressed emotions/dreams. Her comparison about bending rules with small things to the principles of her life was very thoughtful of you...noticing small things makes a large impact...

best part is Arnav accepting his bossy nature and knowing that khushi is equal in all terms...the room for error bit mentioned by him was good.

lastly khushi hugging him shows how much she loves him, accepts him for what he is and easing her pain by just holding him close.

loved the whole chap...

thx you

sri

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luckygal99

@luckygal99

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#867

awesome update...hope Arnav will figure out Khushi's actual issue :)) Can't wait to see how he finally realizes this...

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#868

nice update!that was sweet of Arnav to say sorry for being bossy!

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#869

A light hearted update until Arnav said cut him some slack. The guy does know to win a heart. No body can blame ASR for not knowing to behave in relationship. The moment Khushi fainted we people knew it is bluff, when wud Arnav learn that. I think he wud never, he is so concerned of her , he wud rather be bluffed by her than take a chance with her health..I really wud like to see the look on ASR's face when other men admire (oggle) her with the dress he so "judiciously" designed