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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...sooo sad... poor geet... hope dadi finds out da truth soon...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 15 - I hate this sam...how can she stoop so low and this maan, how come he leave at this time
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update... waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Angel ke b-day week mein another update toh batha hai nah boss😳
''I promise But geet tum aisi baathe kyu kari ho. Did something happen Jaan''
''No bas like that. Remember always to show patient and don't become restless when I am not around you''
''Geet your talks are scaring me Misty''
''Maan there is nothing to be scared of. Promise me that whatever I will tell you, you will listen to me with patiently''
''I promise''
Geet took a deep breath and opened Pammi's stuff. she found a diary perfect, she thought. She sat down and started reading it.
Dear diary,
Writing in you first time after marriage. I am so excited I am married to to man I love the most my Raj. He is so sweet and senseble. Gosh I feel myself blushing while writting down about him.
Oh he is back home. Wait I hear Neelam's voice (Sam's mom). I don't know why but I get bad vibes from her.
Dear diary,
I know it has been months since I wrote in you but what to do I am so bussy these days. But today I have great news I am pregnant. 😳 I am so happy. I remember last time when I wrote I told you that I don't like Neelam, well I was wrong she is really nice. haan she is very close with Raj but there just really good friends. Though I get a bit overpossessive by times.
Dear Diary,
I can't believe it My Maan is four year old. Oh God I haven't written in you for almost five years, well my two men keep me really busy😳😆.
Dear Diary,
Today was supposed to be my life's greates day meri Maan ki b-day. But today everything ended I find out he loves Neelam. I don't know what to do.
Geet slammed the diary dahm that was the last entry in it. What to do. I am sure Neelam did something. Just then her phone buzzed. It was Maan.
''Hi Geet I am coming back tonight''
''That's great Maan. Maan come to ***** hotel.
'' kyu Geet kya aaradha hai''
Maan giggled.Geet just said a quik bye and hung up. Maan smiled thinking she was feeling shy. Geet was sitting nervously in her room, thinking what had happened after Pammi found out Raj loves Neelam. At night Maan came to the hotel. When Geet opened the door he was expecting some kind of present but instead he found a worried looking Geet.His hands reached to her face. He took her face between his palms.
''Kya huwa Tia''
Geet just hugged Maan and kept saying I only need your trust today.Maan carresed her back to calm her down.
''Sssh Misty you always have my trust and your always gonna have it. Tell me what's worying you jaan''
Geet took Maan's hand and let him to the bed. She sat next to him and told him everything from the pics to what dadi had said. After that she put Pammi's diary in Maan's hand. She looked at him he seemed in deep thought. Geet put her hand on his shoulder.
''Maan you okay''
Maan didn't reply he fished his mobile out of his pocket. He called Aadi up and asked him for all the info he could get on Neelam, Sam, Raj and Pammi.Maan had told Adi everything as Adi was besides his accountant also his brother and his right hand. He hung up and looked at Geet.
"Geet dadi doesn't know I came back and it's better this way. I will stay with you untill we figure out the whole truth''
Geet hugged Maan.
''So you trust me?''
''Tia I could never doubt you''
''I love you Maanu''
''I love it when you call me that, and I love you too Geet''
Geet blushed. Maan pulled her cheeks.
''Oh GOD Tia your so cute''
Geet giggled. At night Maan's phone buzzed. Aadi had all the information.
''Sir I found out the pics where photoshopped by Vikram, who did it on the order of Sameera. Your mom was just as Geet accused to have a affair with a other man. At that time there where also fake pics. Even your dad was framed he never loved Neelam. It seems Neelam asked him to help her with a non-excisting play. When Pammi told Dadi that Raj loved Neelam. Raj got no time to explain as the fake pics came and to top it all sir. Someone had played with the breaks of Pammi's car. But destiney had different plan after seeing the fake pics Raj drove off in Neelam's car in anger. But before Raj could drove off Neelam sat next to him trying to explain him she was innocent I persume. Dadi never came to know what happened thanks to Neelam's dirty plans. All dadi came to know was that Raj was no more but sir my research told me that both are sadly enough indeed no more. And you know sir the fake pics of Geet are send made on Sameera's lappy she is behind all this. I have already send the police with the proof so both mother daughter get arrested. I have also aready mailed you all the proof''
''Hmmm, theek hai Aadi thanks for everything buddy''
Maan hung up he had tears in his eyes. Geet walked over to him, she wiped them away and hugged him. She had heard the convo as Maan had put the call on loudspeaker.
''Maan they will get the punshiment for all there doings''
''I know Geet but I just wished mom, dad where still with me''
Geet hugged Maan tighter and kissed on his shoulder while she carresed his back, trying to sooth him. After a good 30 minutes when Maan felt a bit better they decided to head home and tell dadi everything.
Dadi was sitting in her room thinking about Maan, how would she make him understand Geet only wanted his money, when the bell rang. When she opened the door she was shocked to see Maan with Geet. She gave a disgusted look at Geet, which Maan saw.He sighed.
''Dadi I need to tell you, no show you something''
Dadi just nodded.Maan showed her all the proof, dadi was shocked. Tears formed into her eyes. She doubt both her bahu's and she was about to destroy her grandson't life if Geet hadn't stepped in at the right time. Maan and Geet took care of a broken dadi. This was the last straw of pain his family had to go through Maan promised himself.
Epilogue
A cute 4 year old Ruchs was running through her room. While Geet was chasing her. Today was Ruchs b-day. It was 16 April. Geet was trying to get her in a cute pink dress but Ruchs wasn't in the mood to wear a dress, she would rather walk around in her jeans. She made geet run through the whole house till Maan came and picked her up.
''Angel why are your teasing mom''
''Daddy me not teasing, me making mom excersise. Dehko mommy became fat''
''Maan
Geet whined.
''Geet she is saying the truth nah''
''Maaann''
Both Maan and ruchs made a run for it while Geet chased them, while dadi smiled looking at her heaven on earth😳
THE END
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wow great story
i'm really going to miss reading this story so much
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved maaneet...sooo cute...glad da truth is out...adorable ending...cute family scene...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
superb n beautiful ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely ending...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Excellent love story dear...👏👏👏
Loved it sooo muchhh...❤️🤗🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
update so all were dirty plans dadi got to know they are innocent finally maneet lovely happily everafter



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