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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

Thanks for the crackerjack of an update! As I mentioned before, your story is really unique, turning several character elements on their head...so here we have Khushi committing a grave error while under a misconception...Payal being the lying deceiver here, instead of Shyam in the serial 😊 Wonder if NK is the same loyal, supportive cousin cum friend in this story? Or does he have a dark side waiting to be revealed as well? 😊

Your twists and turns in the narrative make me look at all the characters with a suspicious eye! 😊

Wonder what is in those books which lead Arnav to think Khushi's lying again? Whatever it is, I hope its a misunderstanding that will make Arnav realize that misjudgments can happen to anyone...Khushi was deceived by Payal's self serving lies and manipulation; of course, the deception she unleashed on Arnav was deplorable but Khushi did try her best to make amends and she genuinely repents for what she did...

Also I don't think Arnav is staying married to her only for revenge...whether he terms their mariage a 'sham' or not, am sure he needs & wants to have her with him..

Eager to see how they resolve the issues facing them. Just hope, though, that Arnav does not resort to flings on the side to take his mind off Khushi/ try to make Khushi suffer. This would really strike at the root of the immensely strong connection the leads share; and also render meaningless, the vows they have taken...

Thanks for the PM, and eagerly await the next chapter in your fascinating tale.

Cheers...

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sarb

@sarb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#992

Awesum writting, just impress by the quality and quantity u give the reader...

Its lovely presentation of character, Just read the all the chapters in one go in the end of six chapter itz chilf hanger cannt wait to know the more,,Ultimatly wonderful written

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#993

From Arnav to ASR...now thats something different.

I love how you try to break the mould of the usual characteristics one would expect from these characters.It makes the story much more interesting to read.

Arnav has a lot of self control I must say,from wanting to touch her and feel her in every way in the beginning, he had the strength not to give in to his feelings anymore when he was coming down from the pool when Kushi was gazing at him.

Looks like Kushi has a lot to do to win Arnav's trust back.

What's on those books?I'm curious.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#994

So Arnav is punishing himself for making the mistake of trusting her and punishing her for the betrayal.

What a cliff hanger...what is in the books?

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#995

Both have done mistake, we cannot neither condemn them nor justify them.

What makes Arnav thinks that Kushi is again lying ? Is she hiding something from Arnav ? But since Arnav already made it clear that they will just act like husband wife then why should he expect Kushi to disclose her secrets to him ?

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#996

Loved the update. Wonder what did he see in that book?

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#997

Arnav's ego has been hurt. For the first time he has let his guard down & he got cheated. His anger can be understood but then I really can't blame her. One always believes their family and so can't condemn Khushi for doing the same.
It was not an allegation, this story of Payal has ruined their family. She lost everything, her only family.
I feel so bad for Khushi; Arnav can punish her, take his revenge from her for cheating but she can't do the same. Her sister is dead. She can't even ask why Payal went to such an extent..😭 And then there is this strange pull she feels for Arnav. She can't do anything except accepting what Arnav plans for her. She is in such an helpless state right now.
What has she done now? What can be in the books? I'm sure she is not cheating him this time; she is already feeling guilty for what she has done blindly in her anger..

PS: Your cliffhangers can kill, do you know that?