Arhi OS-I JUST WANNA SPEND MY DAY WITH U(up8 pg16 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

here the new one 😊


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UPDATE 3

Everything is finished.

" she is no more, we are sorry" doctors' word continuously echoed in his mind.

"she is no more, my khushi is not with me, how could I survive without her, I know I was wrong but plz god don't give me such cruel punishment"

"khushi u couldn't leave me , u couldn't, plz khushi come back to me, khushi answer me, khushi, khushi, khushiii"

Triiing triiing..


Arnav woke up with jump, his forehead was full of sweats, alarm was ringing, he looked all over him, around him. He was in his room, on his bad.

"oh man! That was dream. A horrible dream , how could I saw that dream."

"relax arnav it was just a dream, not a reality."

"get up and go ready"

He looked towards the alarm watch and press the off button of alarm, clock was showing 8 am.

On the other hand khushi came out from bathroom after taking shower.

Arnav-" khushi tmne mujhe uthaya kyu nhi."

And the conversation go on like that. (plz read page 1 if u don't remember).

Arnav-"ok I can do my work, I don't need u."


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on the other hand after that morning fight arnav was also disturb, all things all work was going on wrong way. Geezer was not working, he had to bath in cold water(1). (plz read previous update if got confuse)


all the 5 incidents which he saw happened exactly in reality, in his deep heart he was feeling restless.

He reached his office, but he couldn't concentrate on his work, his thoughts bounded to his so called dream and his khushi.


He was in his cabin, he was remembering their moments, how he proposed her, how they decide to come in live-in-relationship, their passionate moments, their love talk, their small fights'.small fights..when theses small fights changed into big one, where is the problem he couldn't make out but her morning face was clearly define that how much she was hurt'and her confession in his so called dream' he just feeling guilty, maybe I m wrong '. She is right,, iss kaam ki wajh se mai use na chate hue bhi ignor karne laga hu' I m sorry khushi.. really sorry.

I love you so very much,
Even thou at times I do things that hurt,
I try so hard to hope that you always see,
How much you being in my life means to me,
I am sorry yet again for causing you pain,
that is the last thing I ever wanted to do,
Even when I am trying to look out for you and do the right thing
I mess up, I am sorry for that too.
I hope that you still know how much I love and cherish you,
Like nothing else in my life gives me the trill of being loved by you.
So I hope that you listen and see it in my eyes,
this sincere apology that comes with tears from deep inside.

😭

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hope u like.

waiting for ur suggestions😊


Edited by moni27.love - 12 years ago
CRAZY4CARTOON thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
its just a dream
hope everything s fine bt them
nd boh of them realise der mistakes

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: moni27.love



YES ITS INSPIRED BY 'IF ONLY'




I loved that movie...Very emotional though 😭

Loved your update 😊

Waiting for next update


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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
thank god that was a dream
nice update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
thank god that was dream...update soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
last lines are beautiful...so muchemotions and depth in it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
precape

A ROMANTIC DAY OUT😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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A DAY OUT
YEH YEH
WAITING.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

hello frnds


here the update


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UPDATE 4

"loved one fully and never fear to show your love...careless what happen end in the future, all you have to do is to love her/him wholeheartedly like there is no tomorrow...
forget all your fear n pain, choose to show your love, emotion everyday to the fullest than you life your live to the fullest...
then it doesn't matter if you only have 5 minute or 50 years to live, coz everyday you life your live fully...

spread the love, never fear to show it...love love love...love around the world"

Arnav to himself- " I don't know what will be happen, I know its just a dream…but I don't want to lose you… I will make sure it that you couldn't travel between 9 pm to 10 pm kyunki mere sapne mai 9 se 10 k beech mai he accident hua tha.." arnav decides what will he do and after his work arrangement he went to exhibition hall to met khushi.


10 AM MOSEE D'ORSEY-

Guard- "sir , u can't go inside"

Arnav- "ok call miss gupta, say her that arnav want to meet him."

After sometime..

Khushi- " arnav what r u doing here?"

Arnav came to near her and held her both in his hands.

Arnav- " khushi, I am sorry, I know I had to understand what u want but I I .."

Khushi- " its ok arnav , I know ur work is important I had to understand actually I am sorry"

Arnav- "no khuhi, its my mistake, only mine..u were right iss kaam ki wajh se mai aajkal hum dono pr bilkul dhyan nhi de rha..i m sorry" his eyes had tear.

Khushi realized arnav was so upset with his behavior.

Khushi- "its ok arnav, I m not angry.. jo hua use bhul jaate hai..plz smile."

Arnav cleared his throat and said.

Arnav- "I will smile if you agree whatever I ask you."

Khushi- " arnav tum bhi na..accha bolo"

Arnav- "come with me khushi right now, I WANNA SPEND MY DAY WITH YOU"

Khushi- " what r u asking arnav, tomorrow is my exhibition, how come i…"

Arnav cut her sentence.

Arnav- " plz khushi, tumhe koi arrangements thode na dekhne hai..u r a artist ..just come with me don't say no"

Khushi to herself- " I know arnav u r hiding something, I could see that u r not in ur normal mood."

Khushi- "ok , u wait I will come."

After convincing her to come with him, he brings her to 'eiffle tower '

Arnav-" remember khushi, I propsed you here." He had a smile on his lips.

Khushi- " I remember, kitne time baad tumne mujhe propose kiya tha, mujhe to lagne laga tha ki mai saari jindgi tumahri dost he bani rahungi." Khushi pouted her lips.

Arnav- " you mean that u were waiting for my proposal, aur mai bekaar mai he tumhe propose karne se darr rha tha, u know I practice whole night that how would I propose you."

Khushi giggled.

Khushi- "and you remember our first kiss..after I accepted your proposal."

Arnav- "how could I forget our first kiss."

Arnav held her head with his arms to bring it closer to his face and then started kissing her on her lips. Kiss was light bcoz they were standind in front of tower and among the public, but they were lost in their romantic moment.


Hope u will like

waiting for reply

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
So beautiful n cute.
I liked when arnav said that he practiced wholle night to propose khushi...

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