VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu*PART 14* NEW UPDATE

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Amazing update...
Loved it... 😊

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uroosha

@Arrosha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shilpa09

thanks a lot for lovely comment aroosha...🤗.. i was waiting for it...😉
i used pixlr online editor and photoscape editor... both r good... first one is online and photoscape...u have to download it... but its useful too... u can try both:)😃

Thanks a lot 😃
And i am veryyy happy not only because u replied to my comment but also because u wrote my name spellings correctly 😆 LOL
And i will surely use them 😊

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Loved the update.Loved the ways u dealt with evryone 's feelings so well.Mani's helplessness, her loliness , her expectaton of acceptance and love from her sister were all so well depicted by you.Then ayesha, her feelings her hatred and her rreasons were also well depicted.Finally Virat , how he feels wen she is near, the difference in his feelings. Three people who live together and their intertwined lives . Loved how Virat pacified ayesha and Manvi.He is so sweet. Loved the whole update.It was a superb , awesome update. Loved it so much.A big hug for such a wonderful update🤗👏👏

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Superb update!!
Loved it!!
Virat is so cute...he united the sisters!!
So happy that Ayesha won't come between virman!!
Waiting to read more!!!
Plz update soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

This is wonderfull yar...i m always love the way u right every single scene...best part was when manvi hugged virat n cried...the feeling a starts developing...aisha n manvi problems r sort out now..just bcs viru boy...he is so sweet...aisha is ready to accept virat as her jiju...awww so cute...she will halp them to understand there feelings for other...cont soon

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Fabulous update

Loved manvi and Ayesha's bonding

Virat is so cute

Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

Edited by shaimah - 12 years ago

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Sarah Kelly

@arjunadisidpari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

A very beautiful yet different concept :)

Loviing it :)

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jinaku

@jinaku

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

i m really very big fan of ur ff, especially this

u r very fast in updating tht makes me more happpyy .

continueee with ur works..

eagerly waiting 4 the next update frm uuu

😉

Edited by jinaku - 12 years ago

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

sry sry sry sry sry sry really sry for not rplyng.actually in last exam i got low marks in che becoz i was not well.so i got low marks and my che teacher has called my mom and said i am not studying well and she insulted me and my frnd in front of whole class so me and my frnd decided to study and get highest marks in next exam.so i was studying for tat.

now coming to the story i loved all the three parts it was superb.a totally diff story manvi and virat are college enemies.i loved manvi calling virat as PERVERT and virat calling manvi as WITCH SHARMA.it was really hilarious.poor manvi she is trying to cheer her sis but she is not in mood with talk to her.awww loved virat he helped manvi in her presentation and he patched up the sisters.totally loved it.pls continue the next part.THANKS FOR THE PM😊