Virman-ss-part 9 updated-My Umbrella

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

wow that was so sweet update anu

thanks for the pm

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Superb update as usual!!!
Loved it!!!
It was so hilarious!!!
Manvi's attitude is out of this world!!!
Ur an awesome writer!!!
Waiting to read more!!!
Update soon!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

as usual luvvv the update <3

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Awsum.. Chalo kam se kam yeha par to mujhe yaad rakha tumne.. Superb update, luvng manvi n her atti.

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Awww its damn awesome...cont soon

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

fabulous update!!!!! virman are slowly becuming frnds... continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Wooowww this was jst wow ...manvi made him do wat he actually wants do do wat he loves to do ...and loved their coool freindship and manvi laughing on him... 👏
Thanx alottt for the pm

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Wow yaar awesome update...

Pleasee continue soon...

Thanks for your PM...

Cant wait for your next update and PM...

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

im fine wid manvi's pov...and da update ws realy gud...maya luks too dumb lol and ya waiting 4 sm major twist 😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Awesome update Anu... 😊 ...
Maanvi is such a sweetheart..the way she make virat play cricket was superb...
Her dialogues were awesome...
Maaya and virat conversation was hilarious... 😆 ..i could imagine manvi expression... 😆 ...
Looking forward how the story proceeds...
It was really a great update...it was fun to read...thank u so much for the pm... 😊