One shot (II)- Unexpectedly Expected, Together [Note- 6/9/19; Pg. 42] - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Loved it!
This story just makes me laugh and laugh! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Wonderful update.. Amazing come back. Please update ur other ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
nice os. enjoyed the naughty arnav and modern kushi😃 continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
it was super cute fun filled update
great idea of getting things by mentioning the vows
arnav can only handle khushi in any situation
waiting for the next hilarious update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
I really loved it...

I would loved to read more if you are going to write about them ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Its damn hilarious one sabi...i jz laughed till my eyes literally teared up...
Still grinning lyk a stupid...roflzzz...
I love the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Omg what an update!!

How do you get such interesting and different ideas??
I mean Khushi on top of a shelf...
And I loved when Arnav said he had an incoming call while she was hanging...

And remembering wedding vows... :p that too in Sanskrit... She is too much...

And the last line leaves a lot for me to think about... ;)

Loved the OS... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Yee u updated again. I was so waiting for it and thn I read after like 12 pages and 160 likes? Shame on me..
coming to the awesomeee update. Haha cement pile saying, where was the victim seen last. Arnav has come a long way must say. Lol. Yar really tell me one thing how do u come up with such names, refrigerator for nihaal. Too gud. And thn came the drammaqueen lattu on screen. Haha the way she kept on thinking how everyone has forgot she too belonged to the fam pic. But still she is lattu after all, Once upon a time, they were on top of each other". Haha gud going khushi memorizing all the vows tht too in sanskrit. Rofl. Was gud to see tht bonding between manorama and payal. Warning! Battery low signal, to totally dead mode. Applause. Nothing cud have explained it in a better way. I loled during a rabbave. Wht hv u done to me. Akash's wrong shot vabi wasa cute line for me as I always wanted to see the devar vabi relation.
I luved each and every line of the update. I tried to control myself not to quote much lines but ended up mentioning many lines.
oyee u hv PU almost finished? Plz update na.. take it as a request from a Frand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Ahahaj gosh these twoneven they r married they stillnfiht lolz eheheh tooo cute n awesome

Ohh dint get tonread their wedding n suhagraat looolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Is WOW!!!! a short trailor-exclamation of my awe at your writing skills. I seriously day it again please do write a novel in future. If nothing new then UE only. I can assure it being a bestseller.
Love
Padam :-)

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