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keetha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Awesome update tha yar
by god loved it

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

SUPER AWESOME..

KRIYAANSH were cute..

den bittu..ah sweeett..

kria naraz..oppsieee

update soon :)

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: kanchi01
Superb update...!!!
Luvd kriya's nd bittu's part!!!

Thank you kanchi... 😊

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: keetha...
Awesome update tha yar
by god loved it

Thank you dear... 😊

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: zona_malik
SUPER AWESOME..

KRIYAANSH were cute..

den bittu..ah sweeett..

kria naraz..oppsieee

update soon :)

Thank you for liking my work...
Updating within couple of hrs.. 😊

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Part 8:

Rey : huh...ye kya kardia maine ...impress karne ke chakkar mein ulta naraj kardia usse...huh..

Rey walking in the corridors saying himself " idiot stupid ghada...kya kardia maine...arggg...kuch soch rey kuch soch before its too late..kya karu kya karu..kya karu" ..his selftalk was disturbed by group of students...

1 of the group: hey reyansh..i am akash from ur class..(gives shAKE hand) btw kya questions puch rahe the yaar seminars mein..??

Other girl : yeah n that too our gs...well done..

Another girl : sahi ka takkar diya tumne hammare gs ko aaj...

A boy : but hummari gs bhi kuch kam nahi hai...she z not a person to accept the defeat..so easily

Another boy : yeah man..no one can defeat her..

Another boy : she z always ready for any kind of challenges...

Rey who physically present there but mentally somewhere else was just giving them fake smile pretending as if he z listening to them...after few mins of praising session they all left saying bye to rey...then he goes to canteen directly to join the gang...there he saw kr sitting with the gang working on her laptop...she was very serious...next to her was neha n the other side of her was bh..then others were sitting...all were busy in preparing for thr seminars..vi was sitting opposite to neha n sw was helping vi n sh in preparation...

Rey : lo ye log tho kabhi kr ko chodte hi nahi..I mean hammesha..always kr vl be surrounded by these ppl...huh...no worries..I vl do something...saying this he goes straight towards neha n whispers in her ear " hey neha...I think vi z missing u...he z looking at u again n again...(neha blushes) I think u should go n sit next to him..atleast he vl feel happy" neha nods blushingly n goes n sits next to vi...rey takes the opportunity n sits next to kr...

Kr senses reys presence but ignore to react ..she doesn't give any reaction n pretends she doesn't know that rey came n sat next to her...

Rey : kya karu ye tho meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi hai...he clears his throat to get her attention but no use...he coughs ...again no reaction from kr...all were busy in thr preparation...he coughs couple of times to get her attention but expect kr all other gang members look at him...he says sry n starts thinking again on how to get her attention..

Ne : ( whispers to vi) itna miss kar rahe the muje..?

Vi : (whispers back) main?? Nahi tho...I was busy in my presentation preparation..n u were also..n btw u are here only with me then y vl I miss u??

Ne : (sad...n confused) acchha..but rey ne tho kaha ki tum( then viha looks at rey who was staring at kr)...

Viha smiles at the scene infront of them. ..all were busy...no 1 noticed rey kr's silent war..

Vi: (whispers)saala kabhi nahi sudrega(smiling)

Ne:(whispers back)kafi fast hai tumhara dost..

Vi:(whispers agn)dost kiska hai(smirks)

Ne :hits him playfully..

Rey then saw the same group of students who appreciated him n kr few mins back entering the canteen n sitting on near by table to them...rey smiles widely ..

Rey : (loudly) hey akash...hey guys.. so kya keh rahe the tum few mins back...?? My questions were really good is it...

The group got confused..they finds reys behavior weird...

Rey :when he observes the boys expression - say na...q darte ho kya apne gs se??

This was it...the gang became alert n stares at rey...not only the gang..almost all the students present in the canteen turns towards rey...but one person was unaffected...well acting as unaffected..n that was the diva kria..inside she was fuming...not because rey was getting appreciation from other students but because the scene rey was creating thr.

The boy : no way man...in our clg no gets scared of anyone until n unless u have not done any mistakes...n I am not afraid of our gs...because whatever I felt, I expressed..

Rey : han tho say it again na..( the gang was also getting angry on rey slowly now)

The boy : yeah I appreciated u for ur smart questions..

The other boy : n we supported our gs...y bhool gaya kya??

Rey :(smiles n thinks "bingo my idea started working now") no no nahi bhoola...q girls? (Rey asks girls from that group who took his side few mins back because he knew very well that girls were impressed by his charm n they vl support him this time also)

The girl : yup u gave a tough time to our gs today...

Another boy : oh really as if our gs struggled to answer his questions...haa

Another girl : whatever but he asked real tough n smart questions to gs today...which were unexpected by all of us...

Another boy : exactly...n our gs answered those smart questions extra smartly..

Another boy : our gs is ready for any unexpected challenges...(soon it became the battle in the canteen...n obviously kr's supporters were more n strong...they were at winning side...reys mission was almost succeeded so to complete his mission rey says...)

Rey : guys guys I know ur gs answered my questions very smartly...she z

1 of the boy : intelligent

Rey : than me (completes the boys sentence (intelligent than me))

Another boy : ready for any kind of challenges

Rey : always

Another girl : most eligible gs any clg can have

Rey :(pretending accepting the defeat...making sad face) yeah..right..I agree...but still...mere questions bhi kuch kam nahi the right..?? Plz guys(makes puppy face)

All the students present over thr holds thr smile including the gang...they dont want to make rey embarrassed...because they always support thr Gs no matter what...she really put her 100% always to take care of all the students needs..she z good in studies...good dancer..good skater..good human being...in one word she is a perfect person...many students adored her always for her down to earth nature inspite of having all the talent n power in the clg...so obviously they vl support her only...

Rey: common guys...even my questions were upto her level...atleast u guys agree on that right...

This time kr looks at him n smiles...the others who were trying hard to hold thr smile, starts smiling...rey was really looking adorable when he was saying those last few sentences making innocent puppy face...slowly all go back to thr work...rey losts in kr's smile...

Kr : leans n whispers in reys ears - thanks...pause for couple of secs then...mere mood change karne ke lie...otherwise meri whole day bahot bekaar jaati...

Rey : looks at her - tho tumhe pata chal gaya that maine ye sab...(he stops his sentence...because he doesn't want to miss to c her reaction)

Kr : (smiling looking into his eyes) after few secs - haan..I know tum ye sab mere mood teek karne ke lie kar rahe the...

Their eyelock was broken by bh..

Bh : saale ye sab kya tha..? Khud ki popat banane mein maja aata hai kya tuje?

But sw n vi already understood what rey was doing...

Rey : smiles - nahi...kisi ko batana tha that main kabhi kuch bhi bina soche samje nahi karta(avoiding looking at kr who was now staring at rey trying to understand him)...till now u guys only knew that ur gs is perfect...she z ready for any kind of challenges..any time...but today practically u all witnessed also...this was the reason yesterday whole night I spent preparing on those questions..wo sare questions prepare karna bhi easy nahi tha...bcoz usne sare possible questions already note down karlie the...I had to surf on net for different institute's sites n thesis studies prepared by seniors..tab jaake kuch questions collect kar paya main aapke (now looks at kr who was stunned by his effort) gs ke lie...she really made me to work hard..

The whole gang was stunned...impressed...highly impressed by reys efforts n intentions...they always expected someone atleast near to perfect like kr for kr but not equally perfect like her...they thought itz impossible to find exactly as perfect as kr..it was difficult to digest for them..but they were very happy with whatever rey did..

Rey n kr were still staring at each other...they come to thr senses when

Bittu : serving food for the gang singing- do dil mil rahe hai magar chupake chupake(he serves for kr 1st avoiding looking at her or anyone...pretending as if he z busy in serving) sabko ho rahi hai... kabhar chupake chupake...

(Den he goes to serve rey) kahi aag lagane se pehle...(pause for couple of secs) uthata hai aisa dhuaaa...

(Then serving sh vi bh sw ne ri one by one) jaadoo ka mein isse naam dooon...jaadoo chal raha hai ...(pause for 2-3 secs) magar chupake chupake...

Aise bhole ban kar hai bhaite...jaise koi baat nahi ...

(Now serving z over..he stands near sh facing her...as if expressing to her)
Sab kuch nazar aaraha hai...din hai ye raat nahi...

All were trying hard to control thr laugh...they knew bittu was singing on kr n rey...bittu always expressed those things which others even sh, scared to express infront of kr..he never missed any opportunity to express what he felt about kr in different circumstances...but yeah he has his own ways to express ...like this time by singing he expressed what he felt about kr WITH REY..

Done..huh...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

ok
m done with reading
amazing story
i mean i love it
each and every situation
felling u expressed very well
i love kriya's character
her character 85% same as me i love thiss
and then regging part
viky and kriya's friendship amezing
masti
ragging ki punishment
rey ka que pooshna
bittu part
wo scating part
amazing update soon
AROMA_RUBHARU😉

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Res. . . . . . .
Unres. . . . . . . .
Nice update. . . . . .
Woww rey ,wat an idea yaar,kriya ke side mai baitne ke liye,viha ko milwa diya. .brilliant. . , .
Kriya ko pataane ke liye aapni popat kerwali. . . .gud.. .gud. . .
Ek teer se do nishaan maar liye. . . .
Kriya ko manna bi liya and uska moud bi thik ker diya. . . .waah. .waah. . .hats off 2 u. . .
Sachi mai kriya as a g.s is best and rey realy complets her. . . .
Lovly update smi. . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago