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Posted: 12 years ago
Please update naaa!
Kitna time ho gya h... 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys! aap sabki chahiti cutie phir haazir hai ek dilchasp update ke saath! i know guys i am very late! exams the kya karti! ok ab meri bak-bak band n ye lo update!

but guys one thing! ye update aapko samajhme na aaye! ya fir aapko bura bhi lag sakta hai! maine jo concept socha tha maine uska aadha hi likha hai as agar poora likhti to bohot lamba ho jaa raha tha!

isliye baaki ka part next update me milega n you guys will understand the concept! sorry guys is update me zyada fun nahi hai but i promise next update me zaroor hoga! abhi ke liye jhel lo! here you go-

PART 7: GIRLS VS BOYS! THE GAME IS ON!

They played in water till 4 pm. All came out and changed. All the boys came earlier than girls as you all know we take some time to get ready.

They all get seated on the sofa and decided to wait for the girls. It was half an hour since they were seating there. They were hell boared.

The girls were climbing down the stairs. The girls were facing boys back. They reached back of the sofa and were about to call them suddenly bharat spoke up.

Bharat- yaar ye ladkiyaan kitna time lagati hain taiyaar hone ko!

Sharon was about to shout but taani hold her mouth and pulled her behind the nearby pillar along with the other girls.

Taani whispering- bhabhi aap kya kar rahi thi?

Sharon whispering back- tumne dekha nahi wo log humaare bare me kya baatein kar rahe the! Kyun roka mujhe?

Taani- bhabhi unki baatein to abhi shuru hui hai! Ab dekhte hain aage kya kehte hain ye log!

Girls continued to eavesdropping.

Boys-

Vicky- haan yaar ye girls jaldi ready nahi ho sakti kya?

Nil- hum yahaan par unka wait kar rahe hain aur I am sure wo log gossip kar rahi hongi!

Girls were holding Sharon and simmi.

Amar- tahi kaha yaal! In laddkiyon ko gochip ke tivay kuch nahi aata!

All except swayam- what?

Swayam- wo bol raha hai ki- sahi kaha yaar! In girls ko gossip ke sivay kuch nahi aata!

Amar- thanks twayam! (thanks swayam!)

Rey- yaar guys iss baar to mai bhi agree karta hoon!

Swayam- yaar I also wondered what makes the girls take so much time!(scratching his head)

Now taani and Sharon were red. No they were not blushing. They were angry on their boyfriends.

Sharon in her mind- how could these two say like this! Swayam ko to mai chodungi nahi! And rey mera bestfriend hokar aisa keh raha hai! Huh!

Taani in her mind- how could these two say like this! Rey mujhe aapse ye ummeed nahi thi! Aur bhai aap bhi! Bhai aapko to mai chodungi nahi aur rey aap to bas ready rahiye!

Boys-

Vicky- ye girls ko na kuch nahi aata hai!

Nil- sivay acche se dress up hone ke! Huh!

Girls from behind- accha? to tum boys ko kya aata hai?

All the boys turned nd saw girls giving murderous glares to them. They got scared and got up.

Neha's hands were on her waist and was glaring at Vicky. Vicky get hold of nil amar and bharat at his side who were frightened of simmi rinni and aashi respectively.

Vicky frightened- eh guys ye girls kahaan se aa gayi?

Bharat- abbey e mujhe kya puch raha hai be? Mai to khud nahi jaanta!

Anil(amar+nil)- hume bhi nahi pata!

All boys looked towards reyam who were looking like someone is going to beat them with brooms!😆

Vicky- eh guys ye log aise kyun dikh rahe hain jaise ki inko koi jhaadu se peetne wala hai!

The boys went to their imagination land. There they saw taaron holding a broom and running behind reyam. Reyam are dodging them. Boys came out of their imagination land and looked at each other weirdly.

Boys- wild!

They again looked towards reyam and saw that rey was looking at Sharon and swayam was looking at taani. Both were biting there nails. Girls also looked towards taaron.

Aashi- girls ye dono aise kyun dikh rahe hain jaise ki ye dono kisiki naak types phodne waali hain?😆

The girls went to their imagination land. They saw taaron wearing boxing gloves and smirking at reyam. They punched reyam and reyam are holding their noses. Girls came out of their imagination land.

Girls- hey bhagawan rey aur swayam ki raksha karna!

Boys nudged reyam.

Reyam- kya hai?

Vicky- tum log darna band karo yaar!

Rey- abbey tum log Sharon ko jaante ho na to phir kyun bol rahe ho?

Swayam- haan aur tum log taani ko nahi jaante wo kaccha chaba jaayegi mujhe! Dekha nahi wo kitne gusse me hai! Abhi to sirf do hi insaan hain jo iska gussa kam kar sakte hain!

Boys- kaun?

Swayam- pata chal jaayega!

He takes out phone and calls someone.

Swayam- hello!

Caller- haan swayu!

Swayam- wo taani naraz ho gayi hai mujhse aur bohot gussa bhi hai! Please kuch karo na!

Caller- what! Swayu tumse wo naraz hai! Okay tum use phone do zara! Mai dekhta hoon use!

Swayam- okay thanks!

He goes to taani and smiles nervously.

Swayam gulps- wo taani, wo phone,(taani snatches his mobile)

Taani fuming- hello! Who's this?

Caller- tannu mai hoon!

Taani smilimg- hi handsome! Aap kaise ho? Aur aap kab aa rahe ho?

Caller- haan mai theek hoon aur bas thoda sa aur intezaar kar lo! Accha ye batao tum swayu se naraz kyun ho?

Taani angry- wo handsome-(he cut her)

Caller- tannu ab maaf bhi kar do use please mere liye! Accha ye batao usne kuch galat kaha?

Taani remembering swayam's words- nahi!

Caller- to phir?

Tannu- ok theek hai but mai unhe poori tarah maaf nahi kar sakti kyunki unhone glat na sahi par kuch to kaha hai! Ok handsome and thank you!

Caller- ab tum mujhe ye thank you mat bola karo!

Taani- accha prince kaise hain?

Caller- wo accha hai! Tumhe bohot miss karta hai!

Taani- aww unse kehna unki princess bhi unhe bohot miss karti hai!

Caller- accha sirf prince ko apne handsome ko nahi?

Taani- of course handsome aapko bhi!

Caller- ok bye tannu take care!

Taani- bye handsome!

Taani cuts the call and gives swayam the phone. She has not forgiven him but not that much angry. Seeing this swayam smiles and goes back to the boys group. The boys sighed. But suddenly neha speak up.

Neha- to what u all were telling? That taking more time neha is!

Simmi- hum girls gossip kar rahi hongi!

Rinni- hume sirf gossip karna aata hai!

Aashi- uske alawa hume kuch aur karna types hi nahi aata!

Sharon- hum girls ko kuch nahi aata sivay acche se dressup hone ke alawa!

Vicky nervously- haan haan to to humne sahi kaha! hai na guys?

Boys including reyam- haan haan!

Taani- to aap sab ye bhi bata dijiye ki aap sabko kya kya aata hai?

Nil- humko, humko(thinking) humko dance dance karna aata hai!

Boys- haan haan!

Sharon- accha? Wo to hume bhi aata hai!

Vicky- hume basketball khelna aata hai!

Boys- haan!

Taani- wo to mujhe bhi aata hai!

Amar- mujhe khana banana aata hai!

Boys- haan!

Taani- wo to hume bhi aata hai!

Bharat- hume, hume hume-(taani cuts him)

Taani- aapko apna kamra saaf rakhna aata hai?

Boys- haan haan! Aata hai!

Taani- bhai, aap to rehne hi do! Mujhe pata hai aap apna kamra kitna saaf rakhte ho! Use chodo! Aapko jhaadu lagana aata hai? Aap logo ko pocha lagana aata hai? Amar aapke alava kisiko chai tak banani aati hai? Kuch nahi aata aap logo ko! Bade aaye hume kehne wale!

Rey with full on attitude- accha to theek hai na, ek competition ho jaye! GIRLS VS BOYS! tum girls boys wale kaam karo aur hum boys girls wale kaam karenge! Har kaam pura hone par ek point milega! End me jiske paas zyada points honge wo jeetega! Bolo manzoor!

Taani with same attitude- soch lijiye rey! Kahin ye aap pe bhari na pad jaaye!

Rey- let me guess, kahi tum dar to nahi gayi miss TAANI SHEKHAWAT!

Taani- manzoor Mr. REYAANSH SINGHANIA! THE GAME IS ON! (taarey shake hands)

Rinni- arey magar ek minute! Boys karte kya hain? Maine tum boys ko kabhi kuch karte nahi dekha! Sivay canteen me chat karte!

Vicky- aisa nahi hai! Hum girls se flirt karna jaante hain! Aur wo bhi koi maamuli kaam nahi hai! Samjhi! aur bhi bohot kuch karte hain hum boys!

Taani- haan to hum bhi wahi karenge na!

All- WHAT!

Sharon- taani, have you lost it? Ek ladki dusri ladki se kaise flirt karegi?

All were giving taani weird looks even reyam! Unka chehra to dekhne laayak tha! Taani looked at them.

Taani- guys aisa waisa mat socho!

Simmi- to kaisa sochein? Tum baat hi aisi kar rahi ho!

Taani smirking- maine kab kaha ki hum girls se flirt karenge?

Girls- to?

Taani- hum boys se flirt karenge!

boys got a shock of 440 volts! Especially our vicreyam(Vicky, rey, swayam) their girlfriends will flirt with other boys! and hamare bhanilmar(bharat, nilesh, amar) were dumb!

Taani continued- ab girls goa mein bohot saare handsome ladke hain!(naughtily)

Sharon- haan wo bisect and six packs wale! (dreamily)

Aashi- mujhe bhi dole shole types bohot pasand hain! (excitedly)

Neha- neha also liking lambe-chaude 6 ft boys! (excitedly)

Simmi- haan kitne hansome aur cute hote hain! Hai na rinni? (dreamily)

Rinni- haan man karta hai bas dekhte rahe un boys ko! (dreamily)

Boys were burning! Unke faces dekhne laayak hain! They had a crying face!

Rey- taani tum aisa nahi kar sakti!(not realizing that their relationship is still a secret)

Taani- kyun nahi kar sakti rey?(all looked towards rey)

Rey- uh, uh kyunki, kyunki haan! Kyunki tum swayam ki behen ho!

Taani- so? Usse kya mujhe flirt karna ban hai?

Rey- swayam tu kuch bolta kyun nahi?

Swayam- mai kya bolu?

Rey shocked- tu itna normal kaise ho sakta hai swayam?(other boys are also shocked)

Swayam- ab isme hyper ya tensed hone wali kya baat hai?(all are shocked except taani)

Rey- swayam ye tu keh raha hai?(not believing him)

Swayam- haan mai hi keh raha hoon!

Rey- tujhe iss baat se koi problem nahi hai ki taani boys se flirt kare?

Swayam- nahi!

All except taani- WHAT!!!

Swayam- haan mujhe koi problem kyun hogi? Dekh I trust taani! she is my sis! N mai use poori freedom deta hoon! N goa mai to wo bilkul free hai!

dekh uska khayal rakhne ke liye mai hoon! Use kuch nahi hoga kyunki mai use kuch hone nahin doonga! Hamesha use protect karoonga but use baandhkar, pinjre mai rakhkar!

No ways! Wo ek free bird hai! mai use ek khula aasmaan dena chahta hoon jo khud mai hoon! I love taani very much! Itna ki mai khud bhi nahi jaanta!

Uski khushiyan hi mere liye sab kuch hai! wo jo chahe kar sakti hai! I won't mind! Mai usko uski space deta hoon! Wo jitna space chahegi mai use utna doonga kyunki wo space to khud mai hi hoon! Agar mai taani ko nahi samjhunga to kaun samjhega?

Mere hote hue taani ko koi haath bhi nahi laga sakta! So just chill! Meri nazrein hamesha uspe hi rahegi! Chill guys!(all were smiling looking at swayam's love for taani!) Lekin ya Sharon tum?

Sharon- kyun mujhe bhi space chahiye!

Swayam- okay! Meri both the lady loves ke liye kuch bhi! Taani, Sharon, your both's wish is my command! I don't have any problem!(guys don't worry in next update you guys will see possessive and protective swayam)

Boys- but we do have!

Neha- why problem has babu? Dance camp me to bohot flirt kar rahe the!

Rinni- haan!

Amar- linni, mai kahaan kal laha tha?

Nil- simmi(she cuts him)

Simmi- tumhe to bolne ki zarurat hi nahi hai! maine dekha hai! rose day ke din kitne roses mil rahi thi!

Bharat- aashi tu bhi?

Aashi- ab aap sab flirt types kar sakte hain to hum girls kyun nahi?

Sharon- in sabka to samajhme aata hai! tumhe kya problem hai rey?

Rey- uh uh tum meri best friend ho to itna to haq banta hai na!(chal jhoota kahinka!)

Sharon- oh really rey? Tumhe kabse meri tension hone lagi?

Rey- kabse kya college join karne ke din se hai!

Sharon- whatever! Hume kuch nahi pata hum to bas flirt karengi matlab karengi!

Boys are deciding that what the best they can do! Because ab girls ko rokna namumkin hai Suddenly a idea came into reyam's mind!

Swayam- par ek shart hai!

Taaron- kya?

Reyam- we boys will watch you girls from a distance!

Taani- par kyun bhai?

Swayam- mai tumhe permission de raha hoon iska matlab ye nahi ki mai wo possessive bhai nahi raha! Mai kuch nahi jaanta! Hum tum girls par nazar rakhenge! Waise bhi mujhe tumhari bohot chinta rehti hai! so no arguments on this!

Taani- uggh! Ok fine!

Girls- so handsome boys of goa here we come!

so guys! here i rest! so how was it? ab aapki cutie ne likha hai to awesome, amazing to hoga hi! but on the serious note i know it is very boring and bakwas update!

and swayam ke part me maine bohot weird likha hoga but mai ye dikhana chahti thi ki swayam apni behen ko trust karta hai n bohot pyaar karta hai!

you guys will be telling now- ye kya bakwas likha hai! i am really sorry guys! kya karoon exam ke wajah se dimaag nahi chala! ok now parampara! no way guys mai kabhi nahi sudhar sakti! DEMAND pg 36! ok now bade comments as bade acche lagte hain!😆

with love aap sabki cutie aditi!😊

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow me first i guess!
it was so cute naughty😉 n funny update😆
i wanna see reyam's reaction kash tu next update mei unki aise reactn waali koi pic la de seriously exam ka pura stress kam ho gaya iss update ki wajahse
plzzz continue soon
thanx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuckts

wow me first i guess!

it was so cute naughty😉 n funny update😆
i wanna see reyam's reaction kash tu next update mei unki aise reactn waali koi pic la de seriously exam ka pura stress kam ho gaya iss update ki wajahse
plzzz continue soon
thanx 4 d pm!

tujhe pasand aaya!😲 mujhe to laga poora bakwas update tha!😆 well thank you dear! ya will update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

tujhe pasand aaya!😲 mujhe to laga poora bakwas update tha!😆 well thank you dear! ya will update soon!

off course accha laga
tera dusra ss kab update karegi?
jaldi kar plz!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuckts

off course accha laga
tera dusra ss kab update karegi?
jaldi kar plz!

arey karungi karungi! abhi exam khatam hue hain! n wo wala update abhi tak poora nahi hua! n wo wala thoda alag style se likha hai! i hope maine use mess nahi kiya n wo teri ummedon par khada utre!
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Posted: 12 years ago
aditi... criously cute cute update tha yaar,
wanna c all boys very jealous of oder boys...
and pls jaldi se jalldi taarey chemistry laao na
tht he cant c taani wid any randdom felow!!!
pls aditi update sooon...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh sweetie it was a funny update. precaps awesome. do well in ur exams.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was eally good .i likd bro sis relation
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dude...girls vs boys..yohoo nd girls flirting wid boys wohooo!! Man awesome

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