Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Have no words to describe the poignant beauty of this update. I'm scared, usually, to label anything as 'perfect', but this update and your story at large, deserves that tag. I had a happy smile and moist eyes throughout while I was reading this chapter!

Was just extremely moved by the sensitivity, gentle romance and togetherness in this update. You have made the small family unit of Arnav, Khushi, Adit & Adya come alive...and make us all care for their happiness so much, as if we know them personally!

Your last sentence, about Akash's flight landing but Khushi already committed lock, stock and barrel by that time, had me grinning away in appreciation of Arnav's planning...Do let Mr Roy down gently though...waiting for Payal to pop up round the next corner!

Cheers and Thanks for the PM.

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polly_mk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Next morning by the time Akash Roy's flight landed in Delhi, Khushi was sitting in 'her' home, with anengagementring on her finger and a marriage application in-process in court, having breakfast with her fiance and their kids.

😆

My most favorite update so far. Loved it! Felt so bad that they have no family members to have a traditional wedding. But the engagement ceremony was so cute and lovely! You managed to erase the pain that I felt previously.

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

loved this traditional cum informal approach.arnav loving flusterring his fiancee.nice update.

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MonuRaizada

@MonuRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

loved it... wating fr nxt update

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rechup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Awesome update.
Finally they got engaged.

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

That was endearingly beautiful! 😊

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anjs

@anjs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

awesome...

i thought Akash will enter before the engagement...thank god it got over before his entry...he is gonna raise a storm, isnt it ?

but m sure Khushi will want to marry Arnav when she comes to know that he loves her

or Maybe she can ask Akash to act as her family during the wedding with Arnav...heheheeh

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Cute...now the month long waiting for marriage... Will ignite khushis longings..

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

That was so beautiful :) Arnav's small gesture of getting Khushi's choice of ring really showed how his love keeps growing. The man that once hated her now does every thing to see her smile. Matured love; beautiful. Loved the small ceremony of their engagement too, and the sweet kiss after. :) Wonderful chapter, and it made my day since I am sick with the flu. lol Anyways can't wait for the next chapter!