Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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hellgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Really nice
i want to rite more but m really tired...

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angelrosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

marriage is on the rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lookin foward to their relationnship in future!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

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sherin1689

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

LOVED IT!!!! Awesome work!!! waiting 4 the next update!!!:)

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Finally, after much deliberation she said yes. Loved the last part. PoorKhushi, she won't know what hit her when Arnav declares his love for her. Loved the intensity. Uupdate the next part soon.

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SPraba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

OMG OMG. KHUSHI ACCEPTED. WOW CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. TOO GOOD.

THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR.

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jeni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

excellent update yaar... i loved khushi's monologue... it was silly yet reasonable... love ur choice of words... brilliant writing yar... and final dialogue was damn intense ... i cd feel it for real... wow!!! and now... im wondering wats gonna happen... poor akash has to face a heart break...😭 anyway im happy 😉 finally... she said yes !!!!!

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

I know you just updated and I know you have some personal priorities to attend to...and I even know that I am being plain greedy, but can you update once again today?

please? As in till night or something?

Just asking..

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: arshi21
I know you just updated and I know you have some personal priorities to attend to...and I even know that I am being plain greedy, but can you update once again today?

please? As in till night or something?

Just asking..

I would have done that gladly had the next update been ready :)