Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

awesome loved it
finally she agreed

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nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

story is getting really interesting continue soon 👍🏼

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Oh man this was just do damn brilliant!!! I really love the way you are carrying forward this story. The concept is so refreshing and different. In any other case I wouldn't have been too fond of the way Arnav approached Khushi, but in this case I really loved it since there was only love and sincerity form his side when he went a head with his plan, no underline revenge or anything, and after all he is ASR who is bit slow when it comes to expressing himself but here of course he has got competition from a very clueless Khushi😊 so anyway the bottom line is I really liked this proposal!

Khushi's monologues and her restlessness was so cute and finally some how she ended up raising some meaningful doubts😉 thank god she let go of the thought to seek Akash's advice on this! The conversation between the duo was the best part of the update, Khushi saying she is an expert when it comes to things like love and teasing Arnav when he has already passed the "falling" part😃 the last sentence made us go Dhaka Dhaka too😉 hoping to see some romantic moments between the couple through ur writing, gotta say again fantastic piece of writing!👏

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

AWesome Awesome!!!!

Mindblowing chapter!! loved the last line too much!!! wow super cool update!!!

continue soon!!

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unnimolarcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Awesome, superb & lovely update

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ajoop

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

awesooome 😊😊😊😊😊

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rskumar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

first of all i want to thank u for giving such a special and beautiful story..it really beautifully written...👏
its a sweet cute and now romantic love story...
i loved when arnav said 'Khushi, the thing is, now that you've agreed, I will not.LET.you change your mind' 😉

i want to see the akash reaction😆
so will it be a court marrige or a small private traditional marrige... i think they sould go for traditioal marrige as khushi will definatly would like marriage with rituals..😉