Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

It was typical abt ASR
nd loved conversation
it was well written nd sequetial
must say d update was flawless
pls do pm me wen u update

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Fabulous update..

Thanks 4 d pm

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Wow!!! What a beautifully written chapter!! I totally loved it. Arnav's dilemma, his reaction to Khushi and Akash, then the proposal... Just fantastic!! And HE proposed!!!!!!! I hope she will say yes... Wonder when the real reasons will come out! Thanks for the pm

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

yaaay!! great update!! i liked how you described khushi's thoughts when arnav started talking about the kids..i hope she agrees to the marriage soon!!

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Wt an update...worth the wait...he proposed...yay...seriously , sometimes I think khushi need a smack in the head..she want to stay with him but need days to to think abt the proposal...no wonder aSr handled it in his on way...god, wat s going to happen..?pls continue soon hun ...

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khusharnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Hey I just read your story... Well, I really liked it. It was quite different from the fairy-tale type story. I like the way you wrote it - it reflects the maturity of the two characters, thus making them feel more real to me. I particularly like how Arnav is scheming to hook up with Khushi, without being upfront about his real agenda. Just how regular people do...

Will look forward to your next update!

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Gr8tyms

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Brilliant, just loved it specially Arnav's view points.

Thanks for the pms

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Twinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Beautiful update
i like the way arnav is manipulating the things to keep her to himself but i wish if he would have confessed his love
hope so she agrees...and realizes her feelings soon
loved it continue soon
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

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ceciliadam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Awesome and wonderful update
Love it
Thanks 4 pm

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

thank god u updated i was done with chapter 18 up title last night
aahha a very practicle proposal
i would love to hear her doubts, tht would be interesting