Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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madhujasthi

@madhujasthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

wonderful part

the way arnav proposed without beating around the bush

i loved it

waiting for the next part

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

My most fav chapter till today.. Arnav is the bst.. the way he handles the situation was grt.. he truly is a business man.. poor khushi.. he loves u yaar.. 😃

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Livetoparty

@Livetoparty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

The way you write speak many unspoken feelings!!!!!

Loved the update

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

One of the best chapters ever.

Loved it so much.

And i liked how he really did spell out marriage to her.😉

Her thinking was going in a totally diff direction.

Im so excited to see them get married.

And i like how she replied, "ummm, i don't know, i really don't" ...

Reminded me of Barun. 😆

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ag0502

@ag0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

SO...?

I THOUGHT SOO...

HE WILL USED THOSE TWIN AS EXCUSE...

WHY THE HELL HE CANN'T BE GENTLEMENT LIKE HE'S ALL AROUND? TELL HER HIS FEELING...

& THAT KHUSHI IS SO NAIVE...

DON'T SHE SEE THE LOVE IS ON AIR TILL NOW?

OH...DAMM IT! THEY LOVE EACH OTHER...

DO CONTINUE

THANK YOU

(FORGET MY COMMENT, PLS)

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Woah Arnav made a business deal out of this one :p

Glad he repeatedly said "in all sense" i dont want a contract marriage

Great going girl

I can't wait to read khushi's decision

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Wow! What a proposal!
But thank God! He atleast made his intentions clear. Hope Khushi accepts. Good that he clarified it will be marriage in true sense. But every woman desires that her man loves her. Hope Khushi gets to know about his feelings too.
Waiting..

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mankhush

@mankhush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Absolutely loved this one. He is amazing. What brains. Lol. Khushi tu to gayi

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Before, i had a bad feeling about the way Arnav was going to ask her for marriage..

But all is well,

All he said was great, even if he did not say that he loved her..

Even if he say that, I dont think she will believe him..

So this is just great..

Oh Khushi.. Please accept..

I loved the update.. It is great...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Wanted to add to my last comment...Loved how your portrayed the battle between Arnav's mind and heart on how he should go about proposing to Khushi. It was really touching, how he actually wants to abandon his quest for absolute control and wants to bare his true feelings to her, rather than resorting to a shrewd approach.

However, his ever present emotional insecurities, and his fear of Akash swaying Khushi's thoughts, force his mind to step in and take recourse to a measure which he knows from business experience, is fool proof and would yield results 😊

Loved the bits where he thinks that this method will leave her no scope to change her mind, and will leave him with enough time to win her heart later!! And how he thinks that he can wait for her his entire life, but losing her to someone else is just not an option.

I am fairly sure (or is it hope?) that Khushi would say yes...So am very eager and curious as to how the revelation of their feelings will start, and who will take the first step in this...

Cheers...