Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

AWWW IT'S AN AWESOME UPDATE.

LOVED THE CONVERSATION BETWEEN ARNAV N KHUSHI SPECIALLY THE LAST LINE. 😉

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rskumar

@rskumar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

i love this ASR no doubt he is manipulative but he really do love kushi...
no doubt khushi is slow on picking up the hints.. romantic confession can be done after marriage... i m with ASR...yaar akhash is coming back before that he should finalize his marriage with khushi..
i really loved all ur updates ...

Edited by rskumar - 12 years ago

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Loved the part.. end part was superb..

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Izadora

@izzy0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

beautiful chapter...

the various thoughts in arnav's mind, the urgent discussion with khushi, everything was so well written

continue soon

ty for the pm

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rest.rest

@rest.rest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

finally arnav proposed khushi , great update ❤️

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soumayamishra

@soumayamishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

great update...

when r u updating next?

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Very well written as usual. The entire chapter was crisp and well paced. You have handled Arnav's proposal in a manner very, very true to his character...approaching the matter like a life-defining, hugely important deal (which it actually was, anyway, since he just cannot imagine living without Khushi now 😊)...

Was glad that Arnav at least clearly explained he was not proposing a sham marriage, that should assure Khushi, that Arnav will take his role as a husband seriously and will be committed to all aspects of their relationship. Just hope that they confess their true feelings to each other sooner rather than later...

Does your Arnav have a cousin named Payal who could fall for Akash? 😊

Eagerly looking forward to the next update.

Cheers...