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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: only_kriyansh

jik maathe abi likh rahi hoon...RLB😆


ok amu di. .jaldi likho. .me waiting. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
yar jaldi kar pata chala mera res tere chapter k pehle aa gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

oye madhu pareshan mat kar use dekh abhi 5 min mein update karegi haina riya??


ok chetna di. .*keeping fingers on my lips*
waise di ka naam riya nahi amrutha hai 🤣
and aap chup raho,zara batana,aap IJM ka update kb doge?
1 week ho gaya. .ab ap bi update do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yr koi toh updt do marr rhi hu mei pdhne ke liye
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops sorry dimag se nikal gaya riya ka koi update wapas se padha hoga maine isliye riya likh diya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

oops sorry dimag se nikal gaya riya ka koi update wapas se padha hoga maine isliye riya likh diya


its k di. . .
Yeh batao update kab doge?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

oops sorry dimag se nikal gaya riya ka koi update wapas se padha hoga maine isliye riya likh diya

mera naam kitna famous 😆 Aap kb updting di
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazysky

aaj karu toh chalega?


aaj. . .wow di. .
Chalega nai doudega. . .
Plz update kardo,waise bi mai kal se inactive hoing. . .toh acha hai,aapka update read krke inactive hongi. .
Jaldi update do di. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
thoda ek - do ghante aur lagenge
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok all chappals r welcome...i updated late...but kuch kaam agaya tha...sorry...RLB m shielding frm u...jo bi thrw karna hai ur welcome..kyunki mujhe nahi lagega😆

Chapter 20

vo: wat abt me???

all turned towards the source of voice to find tani at the doorstep crying...

su: (moving towards her) tani beta yeh tum ro kyun rahi ho??(wiping her tears)

ta: aunty aap jo kuch bi kehrahe te vo sab joot haina??

su: kya beta mai samji nahi...

ta: kya sach hai ki aap rey aur(glaring at kria) kria ki shaadi karnewarahe ho??

su: haan beta vo log ek dusre se pyaar...

ta: nahi rey mu..mujhse pyaar kartha hai...

rey: wat??? tani just stop it ok...

ta: common rey agree that u love me...

rey: mai kabi tumse pyar nahi kiya hai...aur karna bi nahi chahta...(angry)

ta: yeh sab kuch tumhari wajah se hua hai kria...tumhara aane se pehle sab kuch teek
tha ..look wat u hv done to me???...

sw: tani ghar jao...

ta:u just shut up ok...who r u to tell me wat to do n wat nt to do...??

su: tani dekho beta rey kria se bahut pyaar kartha hai aur usse shaadi karna chahta
hai...they both love eachother...

ta: nahi (shouting) i love him i want to marry him...

kriya was on verge of tears rey saw this...

rey: (moving towards her)dekho tani its the last time m tellling u...mai kriya se pyaar
kartha hoon aur kartha hi rahoonga aur mai usse hi shaadi karunga got it ???nw jao...

ta: mai yeh shaadi kabi hone nahi doongi...(sayin she stormed out)

sh: she's such a pyscho man...

kria also left to her room...

rey: kria ruko...(he followed her)

kria entered her room n wiped her tears...rey made her turn towards him...

rey: tum ro rahi ho??

kr: nahi...

rey took a drop from her cheek n showed to her...

kr: vo kuch nahi...rey u should marry tani...

rey: wat??? r u serious...???

kr: vo aapse pyaar karthi hai...

rey was nw angry n caught hold of her arms tight n pulled her towards me...

rey: mai bi tumse pyaar kartha hoon uska kya??...

kr: vo...

rey: (glaring at her) dekho kria dont u dare...i love u...only u...m gonna marry u... only
u...so dubara agar aisa kahe tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...(n pushed her n turned the
other side...hands on hips taking deep breaths)
after seconds he turned towards her n saw her looking down with tears rolling down her
cheeks...he pulled her n hugged her tight...

rey: m sorry kria i love u a lot...plz aise mat kaho...i cant live without u...

kr: i love u rey...

rey pulled from the hug and crashed his lips the kiss was passsionate,needy, they kissed
as their life depended on it...he bit her lip asking of entrace which she gladly granted
him...he pushed her against the wall...pulling her so close she
couldnt even
breathe...he slowly parted frm her panting...

rey: agar dubara aise kahe toh???...

kr: nahi kahoonga...

(they hugged eachother...)

the day was funfilled family time...the nxt day rey's parents left for delhi...

REY'S HOUSE

vi: so rey sab sort out haan hmmm (smiling)finally tumhe aapna dream ladki milgayi...

rey was already in kria land smiling to himself...

rey: ya vi(he was cut)...

ta: hey rey...(givin a genuine smile...but rey ignored it n stood to walk away.but she caught his wrist)

ta: common rey we r frnds rite??talk to me...

rey pulled his hand out her grip n looked at her with rage...

rey: agar to frnd hoti jo tum itne kiye te na vo sab kuch nahi karthi...(saying this he turned
the other way...)

ta: m really sorry rey i knw i shoul hav nt done that but i feel sorry nw...i realised u love
kria more than anything n m nt against it...u guys desrve eachothr...
after all...pyaar force karne se nahi miltha na...??m sorry rey plz maaf kardo...lets be hw
we were when we used to be best of freinds...plz rey...(she was pleading him)
meantime swayam also came n watched all this...n vicky was their oly...

rey with a sigh half smiled at her...

ta: tumhe mujhe maaf kardiya(she squealed ) thank u rey thank u so much(n hugged him
which he returned)...

ta: so rey everything is ok between us na??

rey: offcouse baba(smilin)

ta: woah woah...m so happy party toh bantha hai boss..kyun na hum sab party kare kria ko bi bulao...saron aur neha
ko b...we'll hv a blast..

rey: tani kria yeh sab...

ta: rey plz rey plz plz...swayam bahi aap bi bolona...(the guys were shocked to the
core...they were lookin at her as if she was an alien...)

rey looked at swayam who was lookin at tani lovingly(sister types)

rey: sure tani hum sab jayenge mai kria ko call karke bolti hoon...(he left frm their)
rey called kria...after 6-7 rings she answered it...

kr: haan bolo rey...

rey:hey beautiful...(smilin)

kr: rey...

rey: ok ok maine yeh bolne keliye call kiya tha get ready at 8 hum sab club jayenge...n
theirs a surprise for u...???(thinkin of tani)

kr: rey club??? i cant rey...

rey: kria plz mereliye...sharon aur neha bi ...plz plzzz plzzz

kr: ok fine...

rey: thank u...N I LOVE YOU

kr: love u too...ok rey mai baad mai baat karthi hooon my busy rite nw...bye(sayin this
she cut the call)

rey: bye..

the day went with a blink...at 7 the boys including tani reached girls house...rey rang the
bell after minutes kria opened the door and rey stood dumbfounded...she was hot...no
sexy...no gorgeous he hd no words...

rey: u look sexy...

kria:

kr: thank u...(meantime shar n neha also came down and nw it was swayu and vicky's
time to be shocked)

swayum n vicky were lost with thw beauties standing in frnt of them...sharon n neha blushed..

sharon:

neha:

tani:

sharon saw tani standing nxt to swayam smiling...

sh: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho???(angrily)rey wat the hell is she doin here...??

kria looked at tani n then at rey with questioning eyes...

sh: agar yeh arahi hai toh we r nt coming...

rey: sharon vo badal gayi hai...

sh: wow aur ek nahi drama...???

ta: rey dont mind i deserve it...(sadly)

rey: shron vo sach mai badal gayi hai...maise kaise samjoa just gv her a chance plz...

sharon rolled her eyes n moved towards the car...the boys sighed swayum followed
shron followed by neha n viky...tani looked at rey n then at kria n smiled at her(a
genuine smile) n moved towards the car...

kria started walking past rey but rey caught hold of her wrist...

rey: kria vo sach mai badalgayi hai vo mujhe khud aake bola hai ki she's sorry fr wat she
had done...n she's happy fr us...agar tum meri jagah mai hoti toh tum kya karthi...??

kria placed her hand on his cheek...

kr: its ok rey i understand(smiling)

rey kissed her hand...n hugged her n they moved towards the car...

when they reached teh club it was packed music was blasting...they all entered the club
people were dancing,grinding,drinking...all moved towards the bar...theh guys in the club
were checking out the girls...they all ordered their drinks...

swayam to shar: dance???

shron smiled n nodded n turned towards kria who gave a thumbs up...

vicky pulled neha n they both also started dancing...

rey: kria...

boy: hey gorgeous wanna dance...??

kr: no thanks...

boy: oh common sweetheart tumhari jaisi gorgeous ladki akele...

rey: woh akele nahi hai(gritting his teeth)

boy: who the hell are u man???

rey: uski fiance...

boy: oh sorrry sorry ...(he ran away)

kria laughed at the guy...

kr: tumhne toh usse daradiya...

rey: u r mine(she smacked him on the head)

rey: wat was that for...??

kr: ho meri possessive fiance chal lets dance(to which he pouted n followed her...)

they started dancing...they were having their time...

rey made her turn so her back was facing him...she started swaying her hips...he also
danced along her beat holding her waist...

rey: mujhe nahi pata the tum itna sexily dance karoge...(whispering in her ear...)

kria turned towards him circling her hands around his neck...

kr: sirf tumhareliye(whispered in his ear)

they danced danced and danced...

kr: rey ill just go to washroom n come..

rey: sure...

kria left frm their n moved towards the washroom...the washrrom was at the corner n
theirs a door attached to it which leads outside...

kria washed her hands n was abt to leave but she heard someone crying...so she
opened the door which leads outside...

she saw a guy forcing an a girl...n the girl was pleading him to let go...but he wouldnt
budge...

kr: usse chodo...

they both turned towards kria,,,, kria was shocked that the girl was tani...

kr: tani u ok??

ta: kria plz help me...

kria moved towards the guy and yanked him back...

boy: woah sexy tum isse bi hot ho...(n caught her wrist)

ta: leave her alone...

boy: mai tumhe choda hoon be happy with that...

kr: chodo mujhe...(struggling)

boy: commom baby lets hav some...

ta: mai rey ko bulakar aati hoon...

boy: vo koun hai??(turning towards kria) tumhara saviour..???(laughing)

tani ran towards the door...n turned back again...

ta: n ajay mai tumhe jo bola hai vo teek se kardena...(winking n blew a kiss to kria)

ta: bye kria hv fun...

she smiled wickedly n(as left frm their...kria was paralysed she had been fooled again...tears made their way)

kr: plz leave me...(crying)

boy: common babe ...

kr: help help(she started screaming)

ajay closed her mouthed...kissing her cheek...

ajay: kust shut up...

his hold was tight she tried a lot but nothing happened...he started pilling her the other way...it leads to an alley types...

on the other hand...

rey:yeh abi tak kyun nahi aahi???ill just check out...

he was moving towards the washroom...but blocked by tani...

ta: kaha jaa rahe ho??

rey: vo kria washroom gayi hai...kafi dher pehle gahi thi..ill just see...

ta: haan kria washroom mai hai...actually mai bi wasjroom gayi thi n while coming kisi ne spilled drinks on her dress so she's cleaning up...

rey: ohh(he was nt feeling well)ill just see n come...

ta: common rey usse thoda privacy do...n nw comke with me lets dance vo ajayegi...

rey: but...

ta: common rey(she pulled him towards the dance floor dancing...but rey nt in a mood he just fake smiled n danced slowly...)

on the other hand...

ajay pusehd her against the wall...

ajay: man ur f****n hot...

he started grinding against her...his face in her crook of her neck...she was balling her eyes out but no one could hear her cries...

aj: common baby enjoy...

kria with a lot of force pushed him n slapped him hard...

kr: dont touch me...

ajay was nw red with anger...

aj: u b***h slapped him...saying this he slapped her hard...

she fell on the floor her cheeks were stinging...he tangled his hands in her hair n pulled her up...

he took a knife frm his jeans...he caressed her face with the knife...

aj: mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai...but u deserved it...saying this he stabbed in her stomach...her scream echoed the whole ally)

aj: sshh shhh dont cry baby...

n again he stabbed her...kissing her cheek...shhh sshhh its ok...he kissed her head n pushed her on the floor...smirked n left frm their...

ok...i understand but mai jaldi updte kardoongi...😔
Edited by only_kriyansh - 12 years ago

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