UPDATE FF MAR K BHI part 52 pg 109 14-08-13 - Page 35

Created

Last reply

Replies

649

Views

155.8k

Users

60

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

shibz24 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
ariya romance superb😳
hehe shree again😆
loved riya's bonding with kids
sumbulqaiser thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
PART 37

Arjun wakes up early in the morning, while her beautiful wife is still sleeping, He stares her, He moves his finger n her check and put her hair behind her ears She feels the some movements on her check and wakes up.

Riya: Arjun aap uthh gay itni subha subha.

Arjun: ha,

Riya: jaldi say fresh ho jaen, phir mei bhi fresh ho jaungi.

Arjun: itni jaldi kya hai Riyu, abhi toh subha k sirf 5 hi bajay hain.

Riya: abhi sirf 5 hi bajay hain aap itni jaldi uthh kaisay gay.

Arjun: mei apni biwi k jee bhar k dekhna chahta tha isliay uthh gaya.

Riya: Arjun kabhi toh serious hi jaya Karen.

Arjun:tum aur mujhay serious honay do.

Riya: Chalen so jaen..

She close her eyes , and he still stares her he laid again in the bed and close his face near her face, and puts his arms around her, their faces are an inch away from each other

………………………………………………………

Bua : ho gai subha teri.

Riya by tying her hairs : ha bua ji, Arjun kahan hai.

Bua: wo bahir hai. Ab tu shadi shuda hai ab toh apni zimadari samjh, tera pati tujh say pehlay uthh gaya , jab k tujhay us say pehlay uthh kar us k liay nashta banana chaheay, par tu hai, shukar kar tujhay us jaisa shareef pati mila hai…

Riya: ho gaya buaji aab jaun fresh honay.

Bua: ha ja jaldi say breakfast table par aa ja nasta tyar hai.

Riya: ok bua ji.

In dinning table.

Riya' father: Arjun beta tumhain is ghar mei kisi kisim ki koi pareshani toh nahi hui.

Arjun: nahi Uncle bilkul nahi balkay mei toh buhat khush hun.

Bua: beta ye jaisa bhi hai humara chota sa ghar hai agar koi pareshani hui ho toh hum maafi chahtay hain.

Arjun: bua ji aap ye kaisi batein kar rhen hai.

Riya: buaji Arjun ko yahan koi problem nahi hai, waisay bhi 2 dino kit oh baat hai, agar koi problem hui toh ye adjust kar lyn gay kyun Arjun.

Arjun: nahi Riya koi problem nahi hai mujhay .

Bua: Riya har baat ki had hoti hai tujhay zara bhi aqal nahi hai k aapnay patti say kasiay baat kartay hai ye bhi koi tareka hai baat karnay ka.

Riya: buaji mei nay kiya kiya hai?

Bua: maaf kijeay ga damad ji humari Riya na tori nadan hai please uski nadaniyun par bura nahi maneay ga.

Arjun: Bua ji Riya mujhay pasand hai , aur mujhay is say kisi kisim ki koi shikayat nahu hai,

Riya: mere Arjun meri kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi mantay bua ji.

Children: didi Riya Didi hum aapka wait kar rhen hai jaldi aaen na.

Riya: bus aai, buaji mei nay nasta kar liya , mei jar hi hun, wo log mera wait kar rhay hain, mei nay un k sath cricket khelnay ka wada kiya hai..

Bua: Riya beta tu…….

Riya: nahi bua ji mana nahi kijeay ga, please mujhay janay dyn.

Children: Didi.

Riya: aai.

Arjun: jao Riya wo tumhain bula rhay hain.

Riya: ok…

………………………………………….

Riya: dekhna is baar mei aasia short marun gi Sharma uncle k window ka sheshs zaror totay ga.

A voice behind: Aaisa na kabhi hua hai na kabhi hoga.

Riya turns her face.

Riya: jay tum, she hugs him , while Arjun watch her through the windows.

Riya: Jay tum mujhay challenge day rhay ho.

Jay: yahi samjh lo.

Riya: theek hai , Chalo bachun ball karao.

Riya misses the ball.

Jay: kaha tha na tum kabhi wahan hit nahi kar pao gi.

Riya: jay mei abhi bhi himmat nahi hari hun, come on boys..

She again hits but not succesed to achieve her distination.

Jay: aachikoshish thi Riya par tumhain wahan hit karna hai third floor ki window par.

Riya: ok I remember Mr. Jay.

This time She again failed.

Bua: ye larki bhi na bhaiya kabhi nahi sudhray gi, dekha kaisay apnay patti ko chor k cricket kheel

rhi hai.

After 20 minute . She was sitting with the childrens in the garden while Jay is watering the plants.

He struks a mischevious Ideas on his mind He trew water over her with the pipe, she completely

Wet , , She put the pipe from him , and start throwing water on him and children ,they enjoyed

the artificial rain, now she realize that Arjun Stares her while standing the corner of garden,

she turns the pipe towards him and throw water over him, Arjun becomes angry, he rushes

near her and pull her near him. She feels anger in his eyes and observe his reddish face.

Riya: POV " Aab Riya tera kiya hoga"

Jay: riya ye kaun hai.

Riya: jay ye meray pati hai Arjun.

Jay : oh toh ye tere patti hai , tabhi mei soch rha tha k ye kaun hai jis say Riya itna khufzada ho gai

Riya: mere Arjun mujhs ay buhat pyar kartay hai mei in say nahi darti , he is still in anger

Riya: Arjun aap naraz ho sorry,

Arjun takes pipe frm her hand and start throwing water over her.

Riya: Arjun ( He drops the pipe and Children hold the pipe and Arjun hold her by her waist and the artificial rains falls over them,)

Jay: hun uhun..

They broke their eye look.

Jay: waisay Arjun bhaiya aap ko manah hi paray ga, aap nay Riya ki bolti hi band kar di, riya toh aap say mera introduction nahi karwaey gi so mei apna intro khud hi karwa deta hun mei Jay hun, Riya ka neighbor aur Riya di ka childhood friend.

Arjun: nice to meet you jay.

Jay: waisay Riya tum cricket challenge har gai mujh say.

Riya: ACP Arjun ki patni nay harna nahi sekha, she take the ball and hit to the sharma's uncle third floor windows and break the glass window.

Jay: It's cheating Riya.

Arjun: meri Riya nay koi cheating nahi ki shart hit kar k window's glass break karnay ki lagi thi, chahay wo bat say hit karay ya hath say throw karay, .

Jay: that's not fair Arjun bhaiya, aap bhi iska sath day rhay ho.

Arjun: meri patni hai sath toh dunga hi na.

Riya: Dekha mere Arjun hamesha mere sath hai, jab tak ye mere sath hai mei kabhi nahi har sakti. Samjhay ya samjhaun.

Jay: dialogue toh aacha bolti hai.

Riya: ye dialogue mere pati ki copyright hai.

Arjun: Riya ja k change kar lo warna bemar ho jao gi.

Riya: bye Jay bad mei miltay hai.

Arjun: bye Jay.

Jay: bye Arjun Bhaiya.

They just enters in Riya's house.

Bua: hey ye kiya kiya tu nay Riya Damad ji ko bhega diya, tu apni harkatoon say baaz nahi aaey gi, aab toh bachun jaisi harkatein chor day, ab tu shadi shuda hai kal ko bachun ki maa ban jaey gi, par teri aadatein nahi badalen gi.

Arjun: it's ok bua ji .

Riya: bua ji please abhi toh mere khelnay kodnay k din hai ye bachun ka bojh mujh say bardast nahi hota.

Arjun: kya kaha madam aap nay..

Riya: kuch nahi jaen change Karen aap warna bemar par jao gi abhi toh mujhay nasihatein kar rhay thay abhi khud kharay hai ( She ordered him).

Bua slightly slapped in Riya's head.

Bua: aaisay baat kartay hai apnay pati say tujhay waqai kuch nahi aata Riya, ja ja k damad ji ko kapray day.

Riya: buaji wo khud lay lyn gay na.

Bua: mei nay kaha na ja

Riya: ok.

In Room:

Riya: ye lyn towel aur ja k change Karen.

Arjun: tumhain change nahi karna.

Riya: pehlay aap toh change Karen.

Arjun: chalo na Riya sath change kartay hain.

Riya: What Arjun jaen warna buaji phir say mujhay danten gi , aap ko aacha lagay ga k mei dant sunun.

Arjun: isliay toh keh raha hun chalo sath change kartay hai.

Riya pushes him in the bathroom.

Riya: go Arjun.

Arjun: ruko batata hun tumhain.

Riya: pehlay change Karen.

She locks the door of bathroom from outside. After few minute he knocks the door.

Arjun: Riyu darwaza kholo.

Riya: nahi mei Change kar rhi hun.

Arjun: koi baat nahi please door khol do,

Riya: no means no.

Arjun: mei tumhara Patti hun.

Riya: I knew it .

Arjun: please he pushes the door she unlock from other side, suddenly the door opens and he falls over her, they shares a sweet eye look.

Riya: Arjun uthen .

Arjun stares her cntinously.

Riya: Arjun..

Arjun: no Riya .

Riya: please.

Arjun: no means no, tum nay door khola tha jab mei nay kaha tha, aab mei bhi tumhari baat nahi manun ga

Riya: arjun.

Arjun: Riyu .

Riya kiss on his check.

Arjun: ek say kam nahi chalay ga.

Riya gives a kiss on his another check .

Arjun: maza nahi aaya.

Riya finally push him and say.

Riya: aab maza aaya.

Arjun: no Riya is baar tum nahi bacho gi .

He caught her and bring her in his arms.

Arjun: kahan jao gi mujh say bach kar.

Riya: aap say bach kar jana kaun chahta hai Mr. Rawate.

Arjun: aacha. Waisay tum nay abhi tak change kyun nahi kiya he feels her wet clothes over him.

Riya: wo mei ja hi rhi thi par aap nay..

Arjun: aacha hai mei tumhari help karta hun.

Riya: rehany dyn mei khud kar lungi aap help kam aur mujhay tang zayda Karen gay.

Arjun: Riya kabhi toh Romantic ho jaya karo, itna romatic pati hai tumhara aur tumhain Romance ki ABC bhi nahi aati.

Riya: toh aap sikha dyn na ..

Arjun: really he goes near her.

Riya: no.

Arjun: ye kiya har waqt no entry ka board lagati ho I am your husband yaar, bus ek moqa toh do na.

Riya: kal raat ek moqa diya tha aap ko par aap nay soo k ganwa diya

Arjun: sorry aaj raat promise mei nahi sounga.

Riya: bua ji..

They become separate from eachother.

Bua : ye kiya riya tu nay abhi tak kapray nahi badaly.

Riya: bus bua ji do minute.

Bua: aur ha Riya hum sham ko tumharay mama ji k ghar jar hay hai tum bhi sath chalo.

Riya smile: ok bua ji.

Arjun: aacheee.

Bua: kiya huwa beta tujhay zukam ho gaya, sab iski wajha say hai. Riya tu hamaray sath nahi jaey gi tu damad ji k sath ghar par hi rhay gi .

Riya: nahi bua ji inhen bus mamoli zukam hai theek ho jaey ga.

Arjun: ha bua ji mei medicine lay lunga Riya ko aap lay jaen ( Makes a puppy face)

Bua: riya tujhay apnay pati ka khayal rakhna chaheay tu yahi rhay gi mei nay keh diya.

Arjun turns his face and smiles.

Riya: ji bua ji ( by staring Arjun) RIYA POV " koi baat nahi aap say bad mei badla lungi"

…………………………

At launch.

Bua: Riya bus hum kuch hi dyar mei tumharay mama ki taraf janay k liay niklen gay tum damad ji ka khayal rakhna inhen adrak wali chai bana k zaroor dena.

Riya: bua ji is ki inhen koi zarorat nahi ye theek ho jaen gay. ( janti hun ye natak kar rhay hai ta kay mei yahan in k sath ruk jaun, she mumered)

Bua: ek baat bata Riya.

Riya: ha pochen

Bua:kiya tum dono waqai shadi shuda ho , ya tu shadi na karnay k dar say mujh say jhoot bol rhi ho

Riya: nahi bua ji ye waqai mere patti hain.

Bua: agar ye tere patti hain toh tu inka khayal kyun nahi rakhti.

Arjun: nahi bua ji Riya mera buhat khayal rakhti hai.

Bua: aacha , par mujhay toh nahi lagta.

Waisay riya tere mang mei sindoor aur galay ka mangalsutar kahan hai.

Riya: wo buaji wo bag mei hai.

Bua: toh pehan suni mang aachi nahi lagti ,

Riya: ji bua ji.

Bua: ye lay mangalsutar aur sindoor..

Riya is near to put sindoor in her mang but Arjun stop her in between, he fill her part with sindoor and ties mangalsutar around her neck.

Bua: ye hui na baa tab tu lag rhi hai na suhagan.

Riya: ji bua ji.

I think it's enough for today but next part is full of Ariya's alone moments and preparation of chotu's marriage, so please wait till next update If you like this simply hit the like button on bottom.


ll_piya_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Me pupy face i wanna more n u stoppp...
nooo realy nice n interesting part...
i lv itsss me firsttty woppyyy...
lvvv riya crekate scence...
waooo bua ie bua..i lv it
n i lv litle romence bw ariya..
waiting fir next part update soonnn
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
DivineDarkness thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Ariya moments were lovely...
foraml thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
heY jaldi update karo. love ariya.. aur sam ka thoda update karo na pls. missing my sam and 7imar. pls.
573339 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
love how bua ji was scolding her for not taking care of arjun
the cricket part was really nice
and then the artificial rain part was so cute
so jay is riya's childhood friend
loved ariya moments
love the way arjun made her stay home
sindoor scene was awesome
thanks for the pm
update soon
Deleted_Account thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awsum sala...
MERA arjun na janae kab itna badal gaya...
Haw!!!!!

ye bua ki bachi,
sara romanc kharap kar deti hai.
loved arjun filng riya's mang wid sindur...
kash! Asal me in dono ki shadi ho jati..

thnx 4 da Pm.
sdhg thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awesum dear.
Yeh bua ji bhi na hamesha peecha pade rehte hain
madam ab to next step laido aur rosh prob khatam karo.
devildiva21 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...!!!
awww ye riya bhi na har time bechare arjun ke romance ka the end kar deti hai😆
loved the way bua ji was scolding riya for not taking care of arjun...!!!
ooo ariya alone at house... ab kya hoga...!!😉
continue soon...!!!!
teja21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

awesome

loved it thanx fr d pm

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".