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PART 32

Arjun: saam aaj ki party k baray mei tu nay kya socha hai.

Sameer; defiantly mei aa rha hun.

Arjun: I know tu aa rha hai, par kis k sath tu aaey ga.

Sameer: akelay aaunga, kyun.

Arjun: yar aaj valentine day hai ..

Sameer: toh kya huwa.

Arjun: saam tu samjh nahi raha..

Sameer: mei sab samjh raha hunt u kya kehna chahta hai,.

Arjun: chal chor, ek baat pochun tu sach sach bataey ga.

Sameer: ha poch.

Arjun: kyat u aaj bhi Roshini khanna say pyar karta hai.

Sameer didn't answer.

Arjun notice some thing in his face: aaray mei bhi kya poch raha hun, apna pehla pyar bhala koi bhool sakta hai kya, I knew tu aaj bhi usay utna hi chahta hai jitna k pehlay chahta tha, kyun sahi kaha na.

Sameer again no response.

Arjun; dekh saam tu Roshini say apnay dil ki baat keh hi day, ab kab tak chupay ga.

Sameer; Simar chali gai.

Arjun: simar ooh mei toh tujhay batana hi bhool gaya, ek gud newz hai, mei nay simar ko mana liya hai, I mean wo ab Mumbai nahi jar hi hai, Par yar mei nay toh usay rook liya par soch rha hun k usay janay deta toh behtar hota kam iz kam wo apnoo k beech khush toh rehti, dekha nahi wo kitna udas hai aaj kal, waisay bhi aab wo yahan reh k karay gi kya. Waisay bhi ETF mei ab us k liay koi jagha nahi hai, us ka yahan say chalay hi jana behtar hai wo Riya k jagha aai thi, aab Riyal oat aai hai toh mujhay lagta hai k usay bhi aab Mumbai loat jana chaheay. Teri kya rai hai is baray mei..

Sameer: simar nahi ja rahi.

Arjun feels some cheer in his voice.

Arjun: nahi , lekin mei chahta hun k wo wapis chali jaey uska future hai wahan Mumbai mei , uska ab yahan kya kam. Arjun POV s( buhat sataya than a tu nay aur simar nay mil k mujhay dekh kaisa badla leta hunt um dono say)

Sameer: tu kaisi batein kar raha hai Arjun, janta hai tu kis k baray mei bol raha hai, ye wohi simar hai jis ki wajha say teri Riya teray sath hai, ye wohi simar hai jo teri Riya k liay apna sab kuch chor k aai thi aab tum usay janay ka keh raha hai, tu kab say itna selfish ho gaya, tu kaisay itna badal gaya Arjun, kya tujhay teri Riya k siwa aur bhi kuch dikhta hai ya nahi, dekh Simar kahin nahi jaey gi It's final..

Arjun: mei yahi baat tere mun say sunna chahta tha, k tere dil mei simar k liay kiya feelings hai, agar mei ye chahta k wo yahan say chali jaey toh mei usay rokta hi kyun. Dekh saam tu jitni jaldi ho sakay tu Simar say apnay dil ki baat keh day aaisa na ho tub hi meri tarha tanha reh jaey, merit oh kismet aachi thi k meri Riya mujhay wapis mil gaye..

Sameer: mei usay nahi chahta Arjun.

Arjun: dekh tu apni feeling nahi samjh paa raha hai, mei janta hun ye kitna mushkil hai, mei bhi is dour say guzar chukka hun Saam, mei nay bhi apni feelings ko ignore kya dekh mujhay kya mila tha saam, tub hi dyar na kar tu jitni jaldi apnay dil ki baat samjh lay utna hi aacha hai tere liay bhi aur simar k liay bhi.

Riya: Ha simar aaj ki party mei tum aa rhi ho na.

Simar: ha .

Riya: kitna maza aaey ga na.

Simar: Ha.

Riya: simar mujhay tumhari help chaheay.

Simar: ha kaho Riya.

Riya: wo Arjun nay mujhay sab bata diya hai k unhon nay Roshini ji say shadi kyun aur kin halat mei ki, mujhay ye bhi pata chal gaya hai k sameer bhai Roshini ji say kitna pyar kartay hai, mei un dono ko milana chahti hun, jis k liay mujhay tumhari madad ki zarorat hai.

Simar face become dull, that she doesnot want to hear such things.

Riya: kiya soch rahi ho Simar tum do gi na mera sath.

Simar: mujhay nahi lagta k tumharay bhai k dil mei aaj bhi un kay liay feelings hain.

Riya: tum ghalat soch rhi ho simar, pehla pyar bhi bhala koi bhool sakta hai kya.

Simar: par Riya mei tumhara sath nahi day sakti .

Riya: kyun Simar kya huwa.

Simar: kuch nahi par mujhay is mamalay say dour rakho.

Riya: ek min simar kahin tumhain Bhaiya say pyar toh nahi ho gaya.

Simar: nahi toh.

Riya: tumharay chehray par saaf likha hai.

Simar: nahi Riya mei un say pyar nahi karti.

Riya: jhut.

Simar: Sach riya.

Riya: toh tumhain bhaiya ki kasam sach batao.

Simar: pata nahi Riya ye pyar hai ya sirf attraction mei nahi kjanti, par wo mujh say kabhi pyar nahi Karen gay,

Riya: ye soch kaisay liya tum nay, wo tum say kabhi pyar nahi Karen gay, mei bhi yahi sochti thi k Arjun mujh say kabhi ek pal k liay bhi pyar nahi karey gay, par aaj dekho wo sirf mujh say pyar kartay hai, mei unki hun aur sirf wo meray hain.. dekhna Simar tum pyar karo rastay wo nikalay ga sachi'

Simar: thanks Riya.

Riya: so smile please.

Simar smiles.

Arjun : so Riya kaisa raha plan.

Riya: yahan toh ha hai aur wahan ka kya aalam hai.

Arjun: dono taraf aag barabar lagi hai.

Riya: wow that's great Arjun,

Arjun: dekhna Riya jaisay un dono nay humain milaya hai na bilkul isi tarha hum inhen milaen gay, par is k liay mujhay aap ka sath chaheay.

Riya: sath pheray liay hain aap k sath abhi tak wachan nahi bhuli hun mei, aap k sath mei hamesha thi , hun aur rahungi

Arjun: really aap ko saray wachan yad hain.

Riya: ha .

Arjun: toh phir'

Shree interrupts between them.

Shree: riya wo mei ghar jar ha tha socha k aaj sham k liay kuch shopping kar lun.

Arjun: ha toh jao.

Shree: Sir wo Riya agar mere sath chalay toh..

Arjun: sorry shree Riya mere sath shopping par ja rhi hai kyun Riya.

Riya: ha ...nahi,

Shree: kya keh rahi ho Riya ek baat kaho ha ya nahi.

Arjun: tumhain meri baat samjh nahi aa rhi Shree, Riya mere sath jar hi hai sun liya tum nay now leave..

Shree: sorry sir.

Arjun: leave shree.

Shree: ok Sir..

...

Shree: yar Arjun sir buhat kharus nahi ho gay hain , jab say Riya aai hai har waqt us k sath chipkay rehtay hain , humain toh us say baat bhi nahi karnay detay.

Chotu: shree wo Riya say pyar kartay hain isliay''

Shree: par chotu had hoti hai, kya hum Riyu k dost nahi hain humain bhi toh us k sath batein karnay ka haq hai na.

Chotu: dil chota mat kar aaj ki party k baray mei soch.

Shree; ha yar tu chalay ga na mere sath shopping par.

Chotu: nahi yar wo mujhay kisi say milnay jana hai.

Shree: oohh ho kaun hai wo.

Chotu: wo '''

Shree: ha bol kaun hai wo.

RIya: ha ha chotu batao na kaun hai.

Shree: toh tujhay fursat mil gai us kharus say

Riya: kahbardar jo unhen kharus kaha dekha nahi kitna badal gay hai Arjun Sir, so sweet..

Shree: ha tere liay sweet hai par mere liay kharus hain, waisay wo har waqtbtujh say chipkay kyun rehtay hain, aur tub hi un k sath jab hoti hai toh humain bhool jati hai.

Riya: aaisi baat nahi hai Shree.

Shree: ha aab safai mat day.

Chotu: aab janay bhi do na shree, itni si baat par kyun naraz ho rhay ho.

Riya: waisay chotu batao na wo kaun hai.

Chotu: bata k kya faida aaj party mei milwata hun na.

Shree: wah chotu tut oh chupa rustam nikla.

Riya: wah chotu, Aur shree tumhari lovestory kahan tak pohnchi.

Shree: wow aur mei sirf dost hai aur kuch nahi.

Riya: bus sirf dost.

Shree: ha waisay wo bhi aaj party mei aa rhi hai.

Riya: wah shree tum bhi.😡

Shree: aur tu bata tere kharus nay aur kya kya plan kya hai

Riya: shree please tum unhen kharus kehna band karo Arjun ko.

Shree: Arjun baat yahan tak pohnch gai..

She blushes.

Shree: kya chupa rhai ho hum say Riya.

Riya: kuch bhi toh nahi.

Chotu: riya mujhay bhi shak ho rha hai.

Shree: tujhay shak hai mujhay toh pora yakeen hai.

Riya: aaisi koi baat nahi hai shree.

Arjun comes.

Arjun: chalen Riya dyar ho rhi hai.

Riya: ha sir chalen ..

Shree: bye Riya .

Riya: bye shree bye chotu. Sham ko miltay hain

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In the car.

Arjun: riya mei buhat khush hun.

Riya: kyun,

Arjun: shadi k bad pehli bar apni biwi k sath shopping par ja rha hun.

Riya: saray pati toh shopping k naam say dartay hain k kahen unki jaib khali na ho jaey aur aap khush ho rhay hai.

Arjun: mei un patiyun mei say nahi hu n Riya.

Riya: wow so nice of you Mr. Rawate

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At evening in the party.

Shree: wowchotu party toh buhat aachi organize ki hai..

Chotu: ya shree,

Shree: par humaray team mates kahan hai.

Chotu: wow rhay Rathode sir.

Shree: chal miltay hain un say.

Shree: hey rathode sir, aap buhat achay lag rhay hain aaj.

Sameer: thanks.

Chotu: Simar nahi dekh rahi.

Sameer: wo abhi tak nahi aai hai.

Shree: Arjun sir aur Riya bhi nazar nahi aa rhay.

Sameer: wo dekho wo log aa gay.

Shree: wow Riyu kitni beautiful lag rhi hai Red saree mei.

Chotu: ha buhat haseen lag rhi hai.

Shree: aur Arjun sir bhi kuch kam nahi lag rhay, they are looking like a perfect couple, hai na chotu.

Sameer smiles: ( made for each other) he murmured .

Chotu: kuch kaha sir aap nay.

Sameer: nahi

Suddenly light goes off. A spotlight follow a girl on the dancing floor, her face turns on other side. She starts dancing keep her face towards the walls and musics starts.

Gopiyon sang ghoome kanhiyaa
Raas rachiyaa
Radha naa jaye re
Ab saanwara na bhaaye re

She turns her face. She was none other than Simar, riya also join her in dance floor Shree and Chotu Girls friends also join them on dancing floor.

Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party
Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party

Panghat pe aake sayiaan marodey bayiaan
And everybody carzy on radha
Chedhe hai humka thayiaan gari kanhiyaa
And everybody carzy on radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage bore
Hua hai aisa baawala jo kehta jaaye

Sameer, chotu , shree and Arjun rushed towards their respective partner and start dancing.
Oh radha teri chunari

Holding their partners chunri

Chotu holds her GF finger
Oh radha tera challa

Rathode puts his hand on simar eyes.
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya

Shree pointing her Girlfriends earsrings
Oh radha tera jhumka

Arjun bend down his knee and puts his hand on her waist
Oh radha tera thumka

They all should and rise their hands
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya.

Only Girls are left on floor.

Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party
Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party

Maathe pe pankh mor
Kehtein hai makhan chor
Bajaaye baansuri
Bada aaya chit chor
But radha wants more.

Riya search Arjun all around.
Dhoondhungi chaaron ore

She find shree beside her.
Milega koi aur

She gives her hand on Shree's hand
Doongi main haathon mein

He holds her hand .
Mere dil ki yeh dore

Arjun take her hand from Shree's hand.
Coz radha wants more.

Sameer put his hand on simar shoulder.

Oh radha radha bholi deewaani hai.

Simar runs away from him, but he puts her in his arms.
Oh radha radha do pal jawaani hai

Shree holds his Shreemati .
Oh radha ko sambhalo

Arjun puts his finger on riya nose
Koi isse bata do

He kisses her on her check, everyone sees him in shocked.
Ke milega na koi saanwariya

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya.

Riya becomes angry from him, for his previous action infront of all.

Hey radha radhe kaahey itna guroor bhala.

He begged pardon from her by pulling his ears.
Chodho bhi nakhrey yeh kaisi adaa

She refused to excuse him. Now he get another idea.
Tune kya socha ik tu hi mashoor yahan.

He goes among the girls.
Lakhon hai gopiyan bhi hum pe fidaa

She couldn't bear his husband with girls and pulls him on the floor.

Oh saari hi duniya yeh maani hai

Sameer now points Siamr
Shuru hum se teri kahaani hai.

Simar realize her from Sameer's grip.
Oh rehne de re kahnaa
Bhulega tu sataana

Siamr holds sameer from back.
Jo girungi main banke bijuariyaa

Now all couples join on the floor .

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya

Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party
Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party

Ho panghat pe aake sayiaan marodey bayiaan
And everybody carzy on radha
Chedhe hai humka thayiaan gari kanhiyaa
And everybody carzy on radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage bore
Hua hai aisa baawala jo kehta jaaye

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya

Oh radha teri chunari
Oh radha tera challa
Oh radha teri natkhat najariya
Oh radha tera jhumka
Oh radha tera thumka
Oh peeche peeche saari nagariya

Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party
Radha on the dance floor
Radha like to party
Radha like to move
And sexy radha party

After finishing the song all audience clap and whole hall full with the echos of clapping.

Commisioner: wow tum logon nay toh party mei char chand hi laga diya.

Arjun: thanks sir.

Commisioner: waisay ACP Arjun tumhara is party ka idea bura nahi tha, dekho whole ETF from different cities come to join this party.

Sameer: yes sir waqai party buhat well organize ki hai.

Commisioner: aao mei tum logon ko whole ETF say milwaun

...

A man calling Arjun from behind.

Man: hey Arjun.

Arjuns turns his face to see who is calling him.

Arjun: Summit wow great surprise .

Summit: kaisa hai tu .

Arjun: theek hun aur tu suna.

Summit: yar sab theek hai, waisay saam kahan hai.

Arjun: chal mei tujhay apni ETF team aur saam say milwata hun.

Summit sure .

Arjun: saam .

Sameer: ha Arjun bol.

Summit: hey saam.

Sameer: summit tu kitna badal gaya hai pehchana hi nahi jar ha hai, aakhir pehchana bhi kaisay jaey ja Kolkata ka ETF chief jo ban gaya hai.

Summit: nahi yar mei jaisa tha waisa hi hun.

Sameer; lag toh nahi raha.

Summit: saam toh ab bhi mujhay tease karay ga, waisay tere team mates kahan hai, buhat tareefen sunni hai Dehli ETf k baray mei, sochta hun mil lun sab aakhir kya khas baat hai teri team mei jo commissioner sahib k zaban nahi thaktay tumhari team ki tareef kartay

Arjun: cholo mei tumhain milwata hun.

Arjun point to shree.

Arjun: Summit ye shree hai humara technical expert, aur ye chotu hai humara janbaz commondoo, Riya . ( She turns her face by responsing her call).

Riya: yes sir.

Summit: ye Ms. Riya Mukherjee hain research specialist , Am I right Arjun.

Arjun: ya you are right, waisay tujhay kaisay pata.

Summit: actually 2 months k liay inhon nay humari ETF mei as a research specialist kam kya hai, phir inka transfer yahen Dehli ho gaya.

Riya: hello Sir hoe are you?

Summit: fine Ms. Mukherjee?

Arjun: aur ye hai simar, isay toh tum jantay hi ho gay.

Summit: ha Mumbai k ETF chief ko kaun nahi pehchanay ga.

Simar: hey summit how are you? What going on.

Summit: well all is going smoothly Simar, by the way tum yahan, tumDehli ETF ka part, I am so confused.

Simar: mei nay Dehli ETF join kar li hai.

Summit: log permotion expect kartay hain, aur tum Mumbai ETF chief ki seat chor k yahan as a subordinate work kar rhi ho, Why?

Simar: mei apni positions nahi dekhti bus mei ye sochti hun k mei kam karo chahay wo ETF Chief k seat par reh k karun ya...

Summit: well abhi tak tum mei wohi attitude hai nice.

Simar: Thanks for compliment Mr. Summit Singh.

A announment disturbed them.

" I want your attention please, please you all gentleman and Ladies separates into to parts, Please all ladies come on the right side of the hall and all man come on the left side, a spotlight follow you all, and choose one of them among you and spots light fall on such couple who come here and join on the dancefloor, so let's see "

Spots light follows all of the Boys here and there , Spot light contonously move and finally falls on Sameer and Simar.

Arjun: wow Saam please go on the dance floor and rock the party yar.

Sameer: bit Arjun.

Arjun: go...aaisa moqa nahi milay ga. He thumbs up to encoured him

Riya: go Simar kya soch rahi ho.

Simar: mei nahi Riya mujh say nahi hoga.

RIya: abhi tum nay Sameer bhai k sath dance kya tha na ab kyun nahi please go..

Simar: ok.

Riya smiles by seeing Arjun and say that " Our plans is successful"

They join each other on the floor. Background musics starts.

They face each other and try to move away from each other but in opposite directions.

" Kitnay dour dour hun un dono k rastay,

Kitne hi door door hon hum donon ke raaste

Sameer holds her hand and pulls her infront of him
Mil jaate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Simar hits on his chest but in opposite direction her back faced him, She closes her eyes by feeling his touch.
Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai ek duje ke vaaste.

He rubbing his nose on her neck. Her eyes still close
Jaise aankh hai darpan hai ek duje ke vaaste .

They feels the shower of rose petals over them. She stretched her hands and puts petals on her palm.
Jaise barkha saawan hai ek duje ke vaaste

Sameer through flower on him.
Ek sajni ek saajan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

She goes aways and he put his hand on her hands, pulling her she twist herself and falls on his arms.
Us rab ne jab dil diye
Dil ke do tukde kiye
Dono mein ek naam leikha
Ek radha ek shyam likha
,

He separate her from him,He allows her to stands, she blushes and turns her face.
Ab ye dil dhadakte hain

He turns her face to him,
Milte aur bichhadte hain
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Sameer again put her in his arms.
Hum donon ek jaan hain
Do dil ek armaan hain

She has tears in her eyes,
Lekin ab is mod kar

Sameer left her by thinking something
Dekhein daaman chhod kar

Simar put her hand on his shoulder, but he jerk her hand
Waqt ka hai ye faisla

Sameer jerk her hand and puts her hand in his hand
Hum tum ho jaayein juda,

Simar tears falls from her eyes, he wipes her tears and left her, she bend down her knees and brust with tears
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste.

After finishing the song Sameer hold her with her shoulder and help her to stands, he wipes her again again and say. " I am always with you Simar"

Everybody clapped ,

Shree: chotu ye humaray Rathode sir hi thay na.

Chotu: ha yaar.

Shree: lagta hai valentine day par pyar ki hawa nay sab ko apnay lapeet mei lay liya hai, Aray Riya wahan khamosh kyun khari hai, dekh kaisay dekh rhe hai Arjun sir ko, par unhen dekh busy hain.

Shree: kya huwa Arjun sir ko aaisay kyun dekh rhi ho, abhi tak unhon nay I love you nahi kaha na.

Riya: nai.

Shree: Dil chota nahi kar Riya, dekhna wo zarror kehen gay, aur aaj hi kahen gay.

Summit hears their conversations.

Summit: Excuse me Shree and chotu mujhay Riya say kuch baat karni hai.

...

Summit: so you love Arjun.

Riya: no.

Summit: toh tumharay friends kya keh rhay thay.

Riya: kuch bhi toh nahi.

Summit: dekho Riya agar tum Arjun say pyar karti ho toh mei tumhain ek baat batana chahta hun, k tum us say pyar kar k apna waqt zaya kar rhi hun, jahan tak mei Arjun ko janta hun, wo sirf apnay aap say aur apnay future say pyar karta hai, college mei kitni hi larkiyan us par fida then majal hai k us nay kisi ki taraf aankh bhi uthha k dekha ho, I think tummmeri baat samjh rahi ho.Dekho tum meri mate rah chuki ho islaiy mei nahi chahta k tumhain kisi kisam ki koi takleef ho, tum apnay laksh say phiro

Arjun interrupts:

Arjun: kya batein ho rahi hain tum dono k beech

Summit: kuch bhi toh nahi bus purani batein hai..

Arjun: really toh tum Riya ko jantay ho.

Summit: ha

Riya: Arjun chalen sab humara intezar kar rhay hungay.

Arjun: sure He holds her hand and drag her in the party

Shree: chotu yar kuch karna paray ga.

Chotu: kya.

Shree whispers some things in his ears.

Chotu great idea shree.

I am so much tied Promise next part full with Ariya fun and Roshini's jealously goes on the peak .


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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay...
Me first to comment.
It was a suoer Fab update.
Just loved it.
Loved Simar and Sameer moments.
Loved Ariya moments,as well.
Songs were perfect.
I just loved this update a lot.
Waoting for the next one,Sumbal.
Waise,Sumbal,tumhara PM milne se pehle hi naya update main pehli hi parleti hu.
Thanks,dear.
sumbulqaiser thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie

Yay...
Me first to comment.
It was a suoer Fab update.
Just loved it.
Loved Simar and Sameer moments.
Loved Ariya moments,as well.
Songs were perfect.
I just loved this update a lot.
Waoting for the next one,Sumbal.
Waise,Sumbal,tumhara PM milne se pehle hi naya update main pehli hi parleti hu.
Thanks,dear.


Thanks for your comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
great valentines party
arjun organized it well
delhi etf team rocking👍🏼 full of romance😳
i am wondering how roshini left ariya to go to val party alone without her😆
hehe choree still in detective mode😆
& plan to make arjun propose riya good
at last, it seems like summit loves riya, does he?

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
loved rathore and arjun's initial conversation regarding simar
the way arjun was teasing rathore was superb
love how rathore was defending simar that she is the one who saved riya
loved riya's conversation with simar
poor shree got scolded again by arjun 😆
riya's conversation with shree and chotu was so funny
all 4 girls dancing on radha :) great
arjun kissed riya in front of everyone
loved simar and sameer's dance :) song was great
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved the dance sequence!
It was too cute lol
Riya getting jealous when Arjun started dancing with other girls... tooo cute!
Ufff Roshni is soo annoying... she needs to find out the truth so she can leave Ariya ALONE!!!
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update...
loved the way arjun teased sameer...
loved the dance sequence well written...
loved the chemistry of simar and sameer...
next part seems interesting...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice.arjun shaadi ke baad bhi shree se itni jealousy.ohh!!!!goood!!!!!!!!!cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it😛
loved riya's conversation with simar😊
poor shree got scolded again by arjun 😆
loved the dance sequence!😃
arjun kissed riya in front of everyone😳😉😳😉😳😉
loved simar and sameer's dance :) 😛song was great😃
can't wait to read more👏👏👏👏👏
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon⭐️
Edited by sdhg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum
continue soon
may be 2day wat sa
loved it

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