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Posted: 12 years ago
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update bhi dena padega :(
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Part 8


some days passed but the awarkedness between them didnt removed...and rey pissed off with this distance between them so thinks to break the ice of awarkedness...
one day morning In Sanjeevni...
kria is walking thru the corridor and then rey enters the sanjeevni...he saw riddhima and thinks to talk to her now...he run after her and...
R:uhmm krria...(kria stops and turns...she saw rey and smilesa nd rey also smiles and )
R :hii...
K:hii...(with smile...)(and they walk together in silence...but this silence is killing him so he starts the conversation)
R :hmm kitni ajeeb baat hai na hum itne mahine se ek saath kaam kar rhe the aur humne ek dusre ko pehchana hi nhi...
K:pehchante kaise na kabhi humne school main ek dusre se baat ki na kabhi dhang se ek dusre ko dekha...
R :hmmm...waise batcutter I mean kria humane ek dusre se kabhi baat kyo nhi ki...
K :rey tum mujhe batcutter hi bola karo acha lagta hai...and he smiles...aur dusri baat pata nhi humne ek dusre baat kabhi kyo nhi ki...
(and then kria's pagers beeps)
Riddhima:emergency...bye...
R:bye...and she leaves...KRIAA...(she turns and asked from eyes what happened..?)(he goes towards her and)
R :shaam ko after duty mere saath coffe pene chalogi...tumahre favourite COFFE CAFE DAY main...
k: ok...bye (after that day...there is a routine for them to meet at CAFE COFFE DAY after their duties and they talked alot about everything they also share their experiences of their medical fields...and their feelings towards eachother beacame more stronger and awarkedness between them flew away...And their feeling of Likeness became love...and the good point is they knew THIS IS LOVE...but the confession is remaining because they don't know about the eachother's feeling...one moment they think the feeling is mutual and the next moment they think the feeling is only one sided...and the confusion takes place between them...but their friendship till the same...
On 2ND feb 2013...all are busy in the preparation for Surprise Birthday Party...whom...gues gues gues...ok I'll tell smriti's (KRIA's mom)surprise birthday...and guess what...who gave this idea...guess gues guess...okk...again I'll tell u...smriti's would-to-be-Son-In-Law...offcouse...our rey...and the pary is held in one of the five star hotel in mumbai...Sun Sand Hotel...
In Evening Sun Sand Hotel
all the guest were here including our gang and shai's and singhania's...except smriti and rey...and here's rey come with padma...she's having a blindfold on her eyes
smriti wearing a very beautiful saree of rey's choice
...and now rey opened her blind fold and
All :HAPPY BIRTHDAY...(and the smritis was totally surprised to see Riddhima and Shashank beacause they said that they were busy in some emergency...and now she understand why they were ignoring her all day...all wish her happy birthday...and she cuts the cake...after the cake cutting ceremony...there's the party time...an Muskaan,rey & swayam also prepare a song and a dance for their sweet PADMA AUNTY...(ok now u all thinking why they trio only...coz they were in a band in college so they are performing...but not to worry other members also take the part in song...)


and the music begin...sharon and rey playing guitar and stands on the stage with the musicians and

color code
rey , swayam , shareyam ,rdx ,vicky ,raj ,
all males ,all ,smriti ,shashank



That's right baby
(he keep his hand on sharon shoulder )
Aunty ji
This one's for you
(he point towards smriti)
(and both start playing guitar with full passion)
(trio leaves the stage and come towards smriti and )
Abhi bhi hai jawani
Zara si hai purani
Hai fir bhi jawani honeyji
Sharam bhulake, haan thumka lagake
Karo na thoda man mani ji,
(he start singing and dancing around smriti)
Abhi bhi tere gaal, gore gore
Lakho dilon pe dale dore dore
Dekho deewane huye ja rahe hai
Aadhe umar ke bhi chore chore
Haan baalon ki safedi
se fikha kab hua hai Romance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji..Get up and dance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji..Get up and dance..
(they dance with smriti and then all start dancing with them)
Aunty anuty aunty aunty
Dil toh chhichhora kawara vaara vaara jaaye
Funky adaaon pe maara maara jaaye baby
Kaliyan kanwari tajurbe se bani aunty
Jitna puraana ho sona sona sona
Kyun na phir bhi rahega woh sona sona sona baby
Aur nasheeli ho wine puraani aunty
(he take the glass of wine from the waiter who pass from the side and take the sip)
Yeh toh bataa hare o re o re
Aunty bulaaye mujhe kyun re kyun re
Aunty bulaane mein jo mazaa hai woh
Naam pukaarne mein no re no re
Oh kamariya jo dekhi toh bachne ka nahin ka chance
(he holds her waist and shakes with rythem)
Aunty Ji aunty Ji..Get up and dance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji.. Get up and dance..
Get up and dance..
(all dance on the beats)
Patli nahin jo kamar teri teri toh kya
(swayam tease smriti...and in return she payfully hit on his cheek and said...main abhi bhi slim hoon)
Ab bhi lagey hai gadar badi badi baby
(vicky also join and tease her sasumaa)
Smile abhi bhi hai million dollar aunty
Hai na jo tera woh hubby hubby hubby
Jaise lagne laga hai tera daddy daddy daddy
(he point towards shashank and tease him)
Bitiya jo teri woh behan lage hai aunty
(point towards kria and winks her)
Paani mein jaake moonh dhole dhole
Chedein kyun mujhe badtameez chhore
Dhone se badtameezi jaati nahin
Chhedenge yunhi tujhe chhore chhore
Haan baalon ki safedi se fikha kab hua hai Romance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji.. Get up and dance..

Aunty Ji aunty Ji..Get up and dance..

Aunty Ji aunty Ji.. Get up and dance..
Aunty Ji aunty Ji.. Get up and dance..
Ooo...

(last line sung by atul and his action was so funny all enjoyed and patts the rey's and sam's back)...(part is on full swing DJ played the music...and its turn to soft romantic number)(all couples dances on the floor including...swaron...rdxnicole .
Shashanksmriti...viha...rajani...And after sometime rey also asked kria for dance and she happily accepted...bcoz she also wanted to dance with rey...and they lost in each other eyes all the world was like vanished for them...but the fours eyes stuck on them and note their every moves in party...

And they are ofcourse their parents who watch their every moves towards eachother...and after their watch they decide to talk with each other...and they apart from the dancefloor...

On the side table (raj ananya..and smriti sahashank)
After some moment of silence...
raj:mujhe lagta hai ab hume don ki saddi k bare main sochna chaiye...
Shashank :hmm...mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai...tumhe kya lagta hai smriti...?
smriti:mera bhi yahi khayal hai...
Ananya :aur dono ko dekhkar lagta hai bache ek dusre ko pasand karne lage hai...
All:hmm
raj :toh phir ab hume shaddi k liye der nhi karni chaiye...jaldi se dono se baat lete hai...
Shashank :hmm sahi keh rahe ho tum raj...lekin mera manna hai agar bache ek dusre ko pasand kartehai, shaddi karna chahte hai...toh unhe toh pata hi hai k unki shaddi ki baat chal rhi hai...toh wo dono khud hi aakar boldenge
raj :hmm..yeh baat bhi sahi hai...par yeh bache shaddi k liye khud itni jaldi hai nhi kahenge...hume ki kuch karna padega...shanky tum ek kaam karo hospital par tum dono par nazar rakho...hume kuch aur thode hint milte hai..toh hume hi saddi ki baat chedni padegi warna dono itni jaldi shaddi kliye razi nhi honge...
Ananya:raj ye aap kya keh rhe hai...jaldi ye jaldi 27 saal ka ho gya hai rey aur aap keh rhe hai jaldi ab shaddi nhi karega toh kab karega...
raj:ha ani main sajhta hoon...par rey ko kon samjhye...toh shanky ye teh raha tum kriyansh par nazar rakhoge aur hume batana...aur abhi kuch dini main valentines day toh aa hi raha hai...jab confirm bhi ho jayega...
(all agrees with him...and the party is going on till 1 am...nearly 1:00 to 1:15 all went for their homes)

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plz check the note below
Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
NOTE

ok from now on...no updates till update...but I prepared a valentines weak special updates for u all...which I'll post in april...
Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayyy. . . . . . . . .
Me first. . . . . , . .
Me first. . . . . . . . .
Me first. . .. . . . . . .
Yuppieee. . . . . . . .
And cuming to the update. . . .
It was awsome. . . .
Rey and Kriya Friends and startd Falling To Each-Other. . . . . . .
Wowww. . . . . . . . . .
And unnke parents unki shaadi ki baat ker rahe hai. . .wow. . . . .
Nxt update in April. . . .
Itna Late. . . . . .
Bt,its k. . . .we Will wait. . . , . . .
ALL THE BEST 4 UR EXAMS DI. . . . . .
Just Rock in it. . . . . .
And jaldi se aake badde-badde update dena. . . . . . . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Nice update :-) all the best for your exams but in some places you've wrote the wrong names and also when you do come back please update our AR stories

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
amazing update kritz..
kriyaansh falling for each other...
loved it...
best of luck for ur exams!!
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
congrats 4 the new thread...

awesome update...kriyansh ke parents ne unke shaadi decide ki...


all the best 4 ur xams...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
Rey and Kriya Friends and startd Falling To Each-Other. . . . . . .
Wowww. . . . . . . . . .
And unnke parents unki shaadi ki baat ker rahe hai. . .wow. . . . .
Nxt update in April. . . .
bahut late bt its k...
we will wait
all the bst 4 ur exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
I just read all d parts in a go...
Just amazing..kriti
Nd Congo fr 3rd thread
Nxt part soon...
Nd do pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update😊😊😊..kriyaansh falling for each other❤️...loved it❤️...and thanks for the pm😃...🤗congrats on the new thread🤗..and all the best for ur xamz👍🏼...

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